In Naruto's Ninja Story

Come on

He actually traveled through time to the unlucky guy Mizuki. Is there any tragedy about Mizuki? His senior White Fang gave up his mission for his teammates and was forced to commit suicide. Mizuki learned White Fang's lesson and gave up his teammates for the mission, and became an unqualified Konoha ninja without the will of fire. So, what should the ninjas of Konoha do right?

It's very nice. When I watched the anime, the character Kotsubaki was really good and I really liked it. I hope I don't give it away.

Keep it up, it's beautiful, I'll give you all the recommendation votes

Neither hidden nor boss

The author has something good, I'm optimistic about you, keep up the good work, and keep up with the updates.

It's okay, but be careful not to let the protagonist have bad luck continuously.

It feels like it's too slow to heal, and it takes so long to heal. . .

The writing is okay, but a bit illogical and too idealistic!

Why does it show that the e-book does not exist

Come on, author, I hope I can restore two chapters or update more 😁😁 Persistence is victory, I hope I can sign a contract

I feel like the protagonist can't rise up, and the protagonist has nothing, goals, and curiosity. If the writing is too strong, it will at least collapse. If it is not strong, it will be unreadable. It will basically be ruined. It is not bad for a novice to write to this level.