I Never Play Under Pressure

I suggest you read well-written lol e-sports articles. It makes sense that people subscribe so high. This is not 2016 anymore. No one will write about family with such heavy pen and ink. It is enough to have a concept to know that the protagonist is not an orphan. Half of the article is about the younger sister, or the biological sister. Anyway, the chapters about this sister have been skipped. In e-sports articles, the important thing is always e-sports.

Fortunately, I didn't give you a monthly ticket. Let's have a 26-year-old mid laner who has retired for three years and compare himself to other teams. He has no lane rights and is wandering in the void.

Now that I have read them all, let me share my thoughts. First of all, let me say that I am a long-time viewer of Broken Sword. I read it all the way from "League of Legends: Superstar", but I cut it later. In my opinion, although the previous book is not perfect, it cannot be said to be bad! It was purely because Broken Jian buried a thunderbolt and blew himself up. First of all, the team in the previous book was made up of five people made up by Broken Jian himself. The top laner was the protagonist. This structure directly dissuaded some readers - player fans. If I had known, League of Legends novels are basically filled with people who like to watch games. If you like watching games, you will have a favorite team or player. The author is just too greedy and wants to shape all five positions by himself. In the end, this thunder blew himself up because the character you created was too good. Readers will think this is too exaggerated. Your predecessor was still playing in Internet cafes, but after entering the LPL, he directly defeated local professional players? It's already difficult to create one character, let alone how Broken Sword wants to create five characters? The result is dismal collections. Then Broken Sword cut it all off. The book "League of Legends Superstar" is quite toxic, but it was not unbearable. I just watched it all the way to the end. The main plot was okay, and the climax was also well described. The failure to win the S6 championship did not cause the plot to collapse. Let's talk about this book. "I Never Resist Pressure" To be honest, Broken Sword is not as good as his previous book! This is a fact. Although the original version has a lot of poison, the main plot is full of sincerity. And this book is a typical main plot that is collapsed by side plots, and it's the kind of world-shattering kind! The culprit is the heroine Ning Jing! There are so many side plots that even surpass the main plot. I also mentioned that most people who read League of Legends novels are fans who like to watch games or old players and new players, but they all have one thing in common, they like League of Legends! However, the author's too many descriptions of the sister's side plot are stinky and long, resulting in slow or even sparse advancement of the main plot. Most readers can hold it back at first, but then they get more irritated and start to skip reading! This is a very dangerous signal. If a book is skipped by players, it will basically have no future! Broken Sword found out, so after the side plot couldn't be cut, it made a wrong decision - extending the main plot description. In the end, the main plot began to slow down after the protagonist entered the top of the world, and then attracted more monsters to upgrade the protagonist, actors, trolls, players from other countries, and players from parallel worlds. There were no problems at the beginning, but the consequences came. The main plot slowed down and the plot became boring. A single ranked game can often last three or four chapters, and playing SOLO matches with fans made me jump straight away. As a result, the readers skipped the side plot and started to jump to the main plot. The novel advanced to the point where the protagonist went to the top of the world and still did not give up on his sister's side plot. Even though Broken Sword later realized it and locked his sister in a small black room in the university, he was released again inexplicably later. Readers originally just couldn't stand the dullness of the side plots and had their own grievances. Now they can't even stand the main plot. At the end of the plot of Top of the Canyon, they skipped it. Even the climax of climbing to the top of the canyon, where the protagonist chooses to be a werewolf, I jumped right away because the main plot progressed too slowly, and readers began to "force the main plot to speed up." The climax was originally supposed to be the moment when an author's writing style was revealed, but because of the pitfalls laid in the early stage, the readers jumped directly! Anyway, I would like to tell Duanjian one last thing: writing novels now is either fast food or self-admiration. The novel "Superstar" made me see the ambition of Broken Sword, but the author did not have the strength to match it. I never resisted the pressure. It was directly because of the author's "thinking problem". Fast food is not shameful because fast food represents a "win-win". Readers are happy to read it and subscribe directly to it, and the author can also make money. Successful cases in fast food articles include, for example, "What is a roaming mid laner?" This is a typical fast food article, but the author of this book has achieved rigorous logic and a reasonable numerical balance, and will not make anything that makes readers feel outrageous. Basically, it does not deviate from the original level of professional players. Fast food doesn't just start a cheat game where labor and capital are all invincible and one-on-five, and then kill all the way, and then win the championship and collect the harem. What you write in this way is just to treat the readers as if they are fast food. It needs to be written well, but it must also be well-founded and convincing, and it must also have rigorous logical thinking! Adaptation is not random editing, drama is not nonsense! Same. In short, Broken Sword, I hope you will completely follow the route of fast food writing. If you can make the right money, we will also be happy. Don't think about "admiring yourself", this book can still save you.

From the very beginning, it was filled with the feeling of a brainless supporting role, and the halo of intelligence was forcibly turned on, and anyone was criticized by name during the live broadcast. This society does not need you to be kind, but as long as you are a public figure, at least on the surface, you cannot be without quality, and it doesn't matter in private!

Recommendation tickets and monthly tickets are given to you. All your net worth. Come on and follow.

Those who say e-sports don't need women, why don't you really want a wife? Besides, this is my sister! Don't brush randomly with stalks, as this may easily dissuade some book friends. Those who say write more about hero skills, why don't you watch Hero Teaching instead of just learning skills. No, no, no one really learns technology from novels. What's wrong with my sister? I think it was written very well. If you don't like it, you can move the book. Don't let this disgust other people, and this book will become cold again. That will make you happy? You can also point out the author's mistakes, just don't leave comments saying that such and such plots have been reduced or added. Someone else is the author, and the author has his or her own outline. Don't leave your comments in comments. If you are good at it, why don't you write a book yourself? As I said before, it's okay to make jokes, as long as it's appropriate. Don't show off like you know this. It's like a child who learns something and likes to show it off to his parents, and then wants their parents' praise, understand? Finally, I wish this book will get better and better. I am relatively poor, so I can only give some recommendation votes. Come on, author, ignore those people, just write according to your own ideas.

To be honest, it's a bit overdone. It's the first time I read this kind of novel and saw that the live broadcast barrages were arranged on the 29th and 30th floors. Others were finished with four or five, and even intra-office conversations were arranged on the ten or twenty floors. I explained that I like detailed and high-quality game descriptions, but what does these things have to do with the game? They are just pure water. The most outrageous thing is that if you click on the hero survival prompt in the game, if you click on the summoner skill prompt four or five times, you will have to write a fourth or fifth floor. . Some people in the comments said that live broadcasts are all like this. Why don't you move all the live broadcasts with tens of thousands of comments? Some people say that free chapters are fine. The author says that if you really want to write for fun, it doesn't matter whether you get grades or not, then you should think that what I say is all nonsense. But if you really want to write some grades, then don't listen to what those idiots say. Go and look at the authors who really write. Some of them write free chapters that are even more exciting than paid chapters. The reason is very simple. Free chapters are the key to attracting readers. If free chapters are not written well, then why should they attract readers to read paid chapters? .

Let's forget about this kind of system that punishes you at every turn. This system is simply cultivating loyal dogs, not auxiliary hosts. You just do whatever you are asked to do. If you don't do well, it will shock you regardless of the reason. What does this mean?

Chapter 14 only contains one game, can there not be so much about the sister scene? What's so interesting about writing about a younger sister? Are those people in the comment section who say they like my sister some kind of psychological distortion?

If you cut it once, there will definitely be a second time. I bought eunuch stocks. If the results are not good, I will definitely cut it 🤭🤭