Evolution Begins with Summoned Beasts

The first three chapters of "Golden Chapters" left a very bad impression on me, almost toxic. Here are some suggestions: The protagonist should find a way to abandon the female player later on. There are too many books like this, with the female protagonist always being the main character, which I really dislike.

Some people say that the protagonist having a "female master" above his head is very insidious, but you should know from the synopsis that the protagonist is not a person living in our time, but an ancient general. People in that era had completely different ideas from us. The saying "a subject dies for his ruler" was not just a saying.

Author, don't give up! Good books are written slowly and steadily. Keep going!

This type is still relatively rare, with a lot of room for development. Keep it up!

I've read all the existing chapters, so let me fill in some gaps for readers first. 1. There's no cliché of the protagonist following the player and then being loyal and risking their life for them. Currently, it appears that the player will act as the protagonist's logistics support, providing the protagonist with Tier 1 militia. 2. There are basically no flaws.

It's a bit too much. I was writing a game-related story, but then I switched to following game attributes and rules, and then when there was a fight, I switched back to ancient times and reality, completely forgetting about the game's core principles. It's a little awkward to read.

What might happen next is this: A female student who insulted a vase, was bullied at school, and in a fit of anger, demanded a game duel. When she logged on, the entire server was shocked. That woman is back!

It's not very interesting. There are several similar books on Qidian, like "Loyal and Devoted".

How could a good novel not be popular? 🤭

Well written, the beginning was excellent. A bunch of people are nitpicking and think it's poisonous? Then hurry up and poison it to death!