Evolution Begins with Summoned Beasts

Golden Chapter 3 gave me a very bad feeling, a little bit poisonous. Now let me make some suggestions: Find a way to abandon the female player in the future, because there are too many books like this, all of which are female protagonists, and I don't like it very much. Therefore, I suggest that the protagonist directly find a way to break away from the control after a while and become stronger alone, otherwise I really can't stand it. After all, not everyone likes to read dog licking books.

Some people say that having a "mistress" on the protagonist's head is very poisonous. In fact, when you read the introduction, you should have known that the protagonist is not a person living in our era, but a general in ancient times. The thinking of people in that era was completely different from ours now. The king humiliated the minister and died, and it was not just talk. Some people say that Chapter 15 is very poisonous: As a person who has traveled through time, you should not tell others that you have traveled through time! First of all, the protagonist is an ancient person. She is facing the "lord" who gave her a second life. When she said that she was not from this world, she resonated with her. When she also said that she was not from this world, the girl first thought that this was a game. What she said when she summoned the monster might be a background story? Or something like that? In modern times, if there is someone around us who has traveled through time himself, what would your reaction be? "What? Have you traveled through time? Tell me what the next lotto will be."... In fact, whether the plot is poisonous or not depends entirely on the author's writing skills. Some plots are very poisonous, and some great authors can understate it and make people feel very happy, while some should not be. The plot, which should be normal, was so written that Shen Nong was poisoned and died... I could watch Dou Qi Transformed into Horses with great interest 5 years ago, but now I may not be able to finish a hundred chapters. Sometimes we should not look at things done by ancient people from the perspective of today's people.

Authors, don't give up. Good books are written slowly. Come on.

There are still relatively few of this type, and there is a lot of room for development. Come on

I have read all the existing chapters and will fill in the gaps for the readers first. 1. There is no more stereotypical protagonist who follows the player and is loyal and sacrifices his life for the player. As of now, the player will be the protagonist's logistics, providing the protagonist with first-order militia. 2. There is basically no poisonous point. The only poisonous point is that the protagonist tells the player that he is reborn through time travel. However, the author made a transition at this point, that is, the player thought that the protagonist and the summoned soldiers came from the same world, and did not realize that the protagonist was a complete person. 3. In fact, this book can be regarded as a digital hegemony. Because the protagonist does not have a lord, and the person who summons him is a simple little girl with no ambitions. It is just a casual game and does not want to be famous. This depends on the transition of the author in the middle and later stages. Come on again, author, you have eaten the settings twice. I wrote the wrong content twice, that is, I didn't compare it before and after. I have comments in the article. . . Finally, you may not think much of this book at the beginning, it may even be a bit boring and a little bit poisonous, but it is really good after reading it. Come on, author.

It's a little bit toxic. When I originally wrote about games, I always followed the rules of the game attributes. Sometimes when fighting, I followed the ancient reality again, and I didn't know where to lose the rules of the game. It looks a little embarrassing.

There may be a scene later: a female student who insulted a vase was subjected to campus violence. In a fit of anger, she asked for a PK in the game. As soon as she came online, the whole server was shocked. This hot woman is back!

It's not interesting. I have a few similar books at Qidian. I'm very loyal.

How can a good novel not be popular 🤭

It's well written. It's very good to read from the front. There are a lot of people finding fault. Is it poisonous? Then poison it to death quickly.