Eastern Rune Master

It's a cool novel, a harem novel, with a retro style and clichéd plots, but the author's pacing control is pretty good. Except for a few female characters who are mentally challenged when facing the protagonist, there are no obvious flaws or obvious logical loopholes. It's a readable book, and it's not bad to pass the time.

Just read the first three chapters and added them to my favorites. Your opening chapter is quite interesting. I have never seen anyone write about ballet right from the beginning. This environment feels quite dramatic. At least for now, the language is very fluent, the reading experience is relatively stable, and the reading is not floating. Fine. Watch slowly later. After reading part of it, I would like to add a few sentences. It is really well written. There is drama in the setting. One of the only two boys studying ballet - a completely disadvantaged group, the background is still a militaristic country. Orientals in the West - mysterious and alien, but they don't fit into the current stereotype. A book full of conversational grooves - it not only echoes the modern sense but is also the main development path. Just these few contradictions are very dramatic. But these technical things are actually not the most outstanding aspect of this book. Including the relatively stable language, which can be read in just a few chapters, it is also not a feature. What surprised me the most was that the author actually expressed something, and expressed it well, not by telling a story and suddenly making a discussion, but by designing the contradictions in the drama and the design of the core props. This is really rare. It's a pity, this ancient writing, it would be fun if it were an oracle bone. Especially in the later stage, if you use some oracle bone syntax, you can make it look like a spell. Can it be a period of time, Jia Chen divination, Yi Zhen, ten days of disaster, or today's rain? There is a message in the book over there that if there is trouble coming, or there is evil coming from the south, there will be no rain or anything like that today. Right. This is prophetic magic. And due to grammatical limitations, predictions cannot be too specific or difficult, so if the prediction fails, you don't have to worry about opening it too large. Many of them can be made like Death Note, but instead of writing them in a notebook, they are just like chanting incantations, using some golden inscriptions and oracle bone grammar. Wherever you recite the incantation, one order, Ru Zhao (agility) teaches (brave), this is considered to be a buff. It's also difficult to learn. If you just draw an oracle bone character, it counts as a spell-casting gesture. I still need to practice cursive writing for the later drawings. Later, it was silent. If you see any lonely soul or wild ghost, one of them will come and die in the underworld. This is retreat, go back to the underworld. Order, strong wind. This is storm magic. It's interesting to think about. But this is my own divergence. It's better now, it's easier to read and the post-mortem is better designed.

It's okay. The first three chapters get straight to the point, and I feel like the reading experience is acceptable.

After reading four chapters, it was all foreshadowing and did not reveal a trace of supernatural power. This is a writing method that only great masters dare to use, because they have a group of loyal readers. No one will read it at the beginning when a new author writes like this. Readers will lose after two or three chapters, so the recommendation effect will not be very good, and there will be no recommendations in the future!

Nice writing o(￣ヘ￣o)

I read more than 200 pictures, and I felt a little frustrated in some places. Although I knew it was for the plot, I didn't like the feeling of being out of control. For example, the conscription was also criticized, and it felt a bit bad. The protagonist was blasted by rocks several times, and was kicked in the balls. The character of the protagonist felt okay, there was no problem, and the speed was good. I felt that I had written a pornographic novel before, and it was okay for the same body.

Why do you start building military camps and bases later? It won't completely turn into a farming novel, right?

I have read almost a hundred chapters. Personally, I feel that although there is nothing outstanding about it, it doesn't seem like the results are so dismal, right?

The author's writing style is very good. I don't know if it's too high-minded or what, but the author doesn't understand online novels.

It's a shame that this book has such poor results. Has the author ever tried to ask a master for chapter recommendations? If not, you can try it. For example, the author of "The Mythical Version of the Three Kingdoms" recommends books every week. There are also some other great people who are very nice people. You can also go to Zhihu Weibo to promote your books under the accounts of those famous people. Post your reviews in the book review section for us old bookworms. You can talk about the shortcomings of this book, but I guarantee its quality. There is no official promotion, so the author needs to take action.

The author, I would like to suggest that you can think a little more bizarrely, which may lead to better results and be more creative!

The article is good and easy to read.

I have read dozens of chapters and it is really good. The overall reading is very smooth. I think there may be a big reason why I don't recommend it well. I recommend it.

I got second place with six monthly passes? What a miserable book

I'm here, the author. I've already thanked you so much. No need to cheer. I'll take a look first.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can't help but ask in my soul: Author, have you traveled through time from the ancient Internet era? The title of the book is very ancient, the background is also very ancient, the character of the protagonist is also very ancient, and the writing style of the heroine is also very ancient. That's not a bad thing to say, I just really want to know why you wrote this?

I have read more than a hundred of them. As someone who has been reading for more than ten years, I feel that the writing is pretty good and my grades shouldn't be so bad. Come on, author! Four monthly passes are given away! Don't be a eunuch anymore

This book seems a bit confusing! ! This is a writing method that I have never seen before. Others say it is an ancient writing method. However, I have been reading books for many years and have never seen it. How old is it 🤭? Come on, author, give the male protagonist a chicken leg to support him.

To be honest, the writing is good, but the pace is too slow, too bland, and the plot is bland, so at least you need to drive a little bit, right? Otherwise, why would you write about so many women? Would it castrate the body and mind (this is a taboo). It would be okay if there were not so many women in it. If it were written about not touching, it would be no different from eunuchs. It would not be as enjoyable as writing about no women.

"The Book of Talismans" is very similar to the author's book. The magic talismans suppress ghosts and monsters. You can read it if you have nothing to do

Good guy, I'm giving up now (ノ=Д=)ノ┻━┻

It's an ancient routine. At the beginning, someone in the college is looking for trouble and kills you. It's not satisfying and feels aggrieved.

After reading more than thirty chapters, the whole book is very smooth and has no obvious logical loopholes. It can be regarded as a good book. In my opinion, it can be in the top 100 of the monthly vote list. It is unexpected that the results are so poor now. The main problem is the publicity mentioned by the author, but the other problems may include: ① The introduction is a bit old-fashioned, and the last sentence "Look at Xiaoye" makes people think it is a book from six or seven years ago. . . ②The beginning lacks a sense of immersion and is a bit confusing ③The chapter lacks explanation. . .

Miraculously, I found that my QQ reading subscription was also unlocked at the starting point, but I had no contribution points.

I thought it was a source of food that had not been discovered before, but then I saw Chapter 190. It was obvious that the author had changed. It was full of routines from 15 years ago.

I thought it was okay, but I didn't want to watch it anymore. In the middle and later stages, I wasn't in the mood to watch it anymore and had to give up. I don't know why, but I couldn't get into it.

I have collected the book, but I haven't read it yet because I'm afraid I'll read The Eunuch Halfway Through. But I've been paying attention and found that the last update was in February. I wonder if it has been discontinued? Will you continue to update in the future?

Get ready for my full order, hahaha, just started to get into the trap 🤤