The Zanpakutō of the Supernatural World

I think it's best to awaken your Zanpakutō. The most attractive thing about Zanpakutō is that everyone can awaken their own unique abilities.

Sure enough, it is still a bit of a drama. If Goldfinger is a Zanpakutō, the background should be set in a parallel country of Japan or the United States. If the background is set in a parallel country of China, Tao Fa is more suitable.

Why don't you buy the first version of Ryukenwakama? In the anime, it is said that one is the strongest in the fire type and the other is the strongest in the ice type. If you can afford Hyōrinmaru, you can also afford Ryukenwakama! I feel that apart from its cool appearance, Hyōrinmaru's attack power is really weak!

Make a suggestion Don't pretend to be a dead dad This makes me feel like I'm wearing a Japanese police uniform and enforcing the law in China Also, a knife is a knife and a sword is a sword. I personally hate the indiscriminate use of swords

Come on, author💪I came here for the Zanpakutō, but you are not allowed to use the Zanpakutō to commit suicide!

This author is full of misdeeds and has never finished a single book 😅 A veritable old eunuch

Why not use soul burial and force cold blood? I am really half a Death fan.

I saw that there is a Zanpakutō, and it also means counter-invasion.

I hope there are no logical errors in this book

I don't know where to start. Let's talk about the background first. In 3xxx, the lifestyle seemed to be similar to now? There is no supernatural background to explain, so you just encounter ghosts? Even if you add a Taoist priest as a tenant, it will be better than this. It will feel endless. Let's talk about the plot arrangement. The female ghost died in such a tragic way. Instead of solving the person who caused the problem, it solved the person (ghost) who raised the problem. It feels completely different from the way the first ghost solved it. The pig's trotters that were a bit showy in the past have become stubborn here, and it seems that throughout the whole story of Death, the master's personality has not been changed because of the knife. After getting rid of the female ghost, I obtained the ghost path. I don't understand here again. After knowing that Pang was guided by a man in black, why did he choose to actively expose his ability (use the ghost path to his parents)? Not to mention the social influence (referring to parents, schools, media, etc.), The man in black obviously has a deeper purpose. Just exposed like this, are you not afraid that the man in black will come to fuck you? How much strength does it have? One year at Zhenyang Spiritual Arts Academy is not enough, right? If there are any mistakes in the above, you are welcome to correct them. If they are indeed wrong, I sincerely apologize. Also, I remember that I came in from the suspense category. Things like Zanpakutō are not suitable for suspense at all. Even if you write a fantasy, it's okay. Add a little fantasy background, there are official (Masashi) and folk (Men in Black), isn't it better than this?

I see there are only two posts, so I'll post one too.

If the author has the idea of ​​letting the protagonist establish an organization, then I have a suggestion: except for the host, the lives of other shallow owners are in the hands of the host. Anyway, they have to be controlled by the host, otherwise the established organization will not be very constrained.