The Elemental Sword Saint Chapter of Abyss War Chronicles

1. I have the feeling of a Western fantasy, but 2. As for the article, well, the sense of immersion of the characters is a little less, so let's enhance the rendering of it ٩( 'ω' )و 3. The interesting topic of "one body and three souls", the book I read earlier was about a male protagonist with a split personality. 4. I suggest you reshape the world! The most important thing about Western fantasy is this, the world view. Come on

First of all, I went into the book and looked at it. The characters and dialogues are actually quite good, the writing is also okay, and the setting is also good. When I read the first few chapters, I actually found it not attractive enough. Maybe it's because I'm not interested in Western magic. In fact, I could explain the background in the first few chapters.

You can put forward any opinions and we will try our best to adopt them if they are reasonable.

I'll fill in the pitfalls of this book later. I'm sorry to bother you.