My Territory Buff Is a Bit Strong

No. . It doesn't feel engaging enough. . At least for a bookworm like me. The author seems to want to write a humorous essay, but can't see the humor. If we talk about Long Ao astronomy, I feel that the description is not adequate. If we talk about writing epic poems, it feels a bit superficial. In many places, it seems that the author has a complete scene in his mind, but the writing is not strong enough, and the writing is a bit foggy and difficult to read. It seems that I skipped reading. If you don't play Winter, you won't be able to understand it.

Gu Gu Gu

Come on, although I have never played this game, I think it is quite interesting to write. 🤓

Harson Dingfeng, president of the abstinence department——

Such an active author's bacteria (~￣▽￣)~

Ahhhhhhh Alsace!

I just want to say that there are so many comments in the chapter, but there are only a few buildings missing. Where are the other comments?

Dying four times in a day is: 1. Sudden death 2. Resurrection after refreshing at 12 o'clock at night If it is the first type, then it will definitely not happen, please tell me it is the second type, because it has no impact on the plot If it is the second type, please be sure to keep it, and then you can do whatever you want.

As far as newcomers are concerned, the writing is already good. I hope the author will work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง I hope to see your progress (~￣▽￣)~

First up: The lingering fire of the long night~

The small island in the south + the chaotic land in the south + the metropolis in the south

When did this guy get 200 health (⊙o⊙)! No matter what, it's still easy to fight with 100 health (wipe the sweat, wipe the sweat)

Dragon Egg—Eternal Night Plain

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Newbie, new book, hope to give some advice~

_(:з∠)_If you have any interesting suggestions, or poisonous points, I hope you can get comments and point them out~

Can I add some essence?