Douluo: The God-Sealing Chronicles

Why do so many people like to write about Naruto One Piece? Is it awesome? I feel just so so. After all, the place is only so small and the world view is so big. It's not fun to be an immortal.

It would be nice if Douluo wrote more! You can write about traveling around the Douluo Continent, but the plot shouldn't be too old!

I think it's quite good-looking, but it's too faithful to the original work. I heard that Dada was going to give up, and I was shocked. Don't give up, Dada! 😢

Isn't it the heavens? Isn't he the Creator God? This is over a hundred chapters! Is the author okay?

6Th comment and 32nd, 33rd recommendation vote

Yes, there is. Once you write it well, the supervisor will have it.

Paying homage to the master is not interesting if it follows the main plot!

Also, there are too many "also"s, which affects the reading experience. However, the plot is really broad. I didn't expect much at first, but after reading one chapter I was very pleasantly surprised, and I hope to stick with it. If it really doesn't work, just work on new articles. Maybe if your new article becomes popular, your book may fly with it.

Also, I think your plot development is too slow. If you just want to be more precise, don't write about the universe. Write Douluo directly into one book, and open another one about Pirates. Personal advice.

I would like to support you if you are passing by to make soy sauce 🤓