Suppress the World of Naruto in the Name of Otsutsuki

It's so procrastinating. If I don't kill this one, I won't kill that one. I'm obviously very powerful and want to die, but no one can kill me. It makes me laugh.

After reading about 10 chapters, the protagonist enters the ninja world and suppresses 80% of his strength. OK, suppressing his strength on a daily basis makes sense. I will endure it, otherwise it will be two or three hundred thousand words long. The protagonist's two subordinates fought with the eyeless Tonerito, and even let Tonerito go to the Great Tenseigan to cheat. Okay, I can bear it. In the end, I let Tonerito run away. I really can't bear it. It's too slow. I guess the following plot is Tonerito adapting to the Great Tenseigan, and then he fights with the protagonist group, and Tonerito doesn't fight and escapes to the Hyuga family to start another fight. It's too watery. It's better to write it more compactly. After Naruto is finished, he will go to other worlds.

Don't delay too much, finish the Naruto chapter quickly, and then go conquer other planets and turn interstellar travel into a disguised infinite flow, so that it can be written for a long time. If you are procrastinating even though you are already invincible, then this book is really useless. Of course, this is just a personal suggestion. I feel like I can accept a few beautiful girls 😏

Otsutsuki's beautiful pictures don't feel as gloomy as the original ones.

This is the Holy Lord. The Holy Lord has brought you 12 spells. Thank you quickly.

Some people keep attacking the author, but in fact it is completely unnecessary. Everyone has their own feelings about Naruto. For example, as the author writes now, killing is indeed the most direct way to solve the problem, but it poses a terrorist threat to the ninja world. These ninjas will definitely be pushed by the masterminds behind the scenes, and more people will die by then. So how to plant the sacred tree? Of course, some miscellaneous fish are not bothered to kill. Those who really die are real enemies. The three major fairy lands (places of sin) that take advantage of human nature to kill are all targets of destruction, and the hidden Otsutsuki Hagoromo must die. The Otsutsuki who came with Kaguya is not weak at all. What is his plan? The resurrected Otsutsuki Kaguya? She committed a capital crime, will she plead guilty? Why does the protagonist bring one hundred thousand chakra pills? Just to look good? Of course not! In short, the story is very exciting, and people from the ninja world will also join in. As for some people, they always feel that Naruto and Sasuke, who gained the power of the six paths, are the ceiling of the ninja world, but Hagoromo, who was granted the power of the six paths, is now dead, so he is nothing at all!

It's so depressing to watch, wandering around and not knowing what to do. After reading the whole article, I understood a few meanings in seconds: Either Yuan Liang does this or forgives that. Either this is fulfilled or that is fulfilled. Don't care about this, don't care about that. There is no woman in my heart, there is a god of nature and fruit. There is no sense of excitement or immersion. The whole story feels like the program resurrects the sacred tree. I have to act aloof, but also be close to the people. I am not an enemy of the ninja world. It is the ninja world that is my enemy. I am pure and honest.

Did you send Hinata out again after writing so well? Goodbye👋🏻

The setting seems to be the way of the invincible novel, but you don't push it horizontally. I really don't understand what the protagonist is going to do. Don't you want to replant the sacred tree? I've been grinding.

If I were simply writing about Naruto, the beginning would be so big, and it would be over in twenty or thirty chapters.

Representing the moon... No, I am the moon🌙, destroy you! ! !

The traitor must die, why not let him go just because he is a woman? ? ?

I also felt it was too procrastinating. I was trying to have a good time all the way, but it ended up like this. There is no need to explain anything. The protagonist is too high-level, and there is no need to talk so much about the ninja world.

That... The writing with a high starting point of strength should actually be more everyday (of course it must be of a good level, not hard water)

After reading more than 50 photos, you still didn't kill a single person from the local forces? What the hell? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Ah! The sea is full of water and poisonous

This book is not a single heroine, not multiple heroines, not a harem, not a stallion, but a minotaur. The protagonist is a suffering master, not a yellow hair. The author's ideas are very clear and his brain circuit is unique. I hope everyone should be mentally prepared before reading. If you are not satisfied after reading, don't curse or say bad words. Just make appropriate suggestions.

I'll give you a full order before I abandon the book. Cheers to you. I skipped through more than 60 chapters. I really can't stand it anymore. Wrong writing of the names of various countries, etc., Trying to lower the protagonist's combat power and intelligence, and improve the abilities of the original characters... I have nothing to say. The most uncomfortable thing is that there is no sense of immersion at all! I don't know what the protagonist is doing? I dodged first. Hope you can get better and better. Come on.

To be honest, I think the author's writing angle is very unique and interesting, making people want to understand a different world of ninjas. However, when portraying the original characters, I still hope to keep more of the original characters (as a Naruto fan, it will be very distorted if the character changes or says something that does not fit their character). Regarding Hinata's princess status (I also like the original Hinata), she directly becomes a princess. Emmmm, the main character is only a member of the same family, and not necessarily the next generation. What right does the head of the family have to directly say who is a princess, but this princess is of lower status than the family, which is very confusing and contradictory. In addition, Naruto's big trick is to use the Kyuubi to use multiple shadow clones to speed up ninjutsu training. Logically speaking, after losing the tailed beast, the learning ability should not be so fast. Of course, Naruto will not be short of mana if he has the Uzumaki bloodline. Without the Kyuubi to interfere with the chakra control ability, he will definitely be stronger, but he will not be able to learn everything at once. There is no source of enhancement. But all in all, I still like this kind of Naruto fanfic from a different perspective. Come on, author!

Save Hui Ye for maternity leave🙂🙂

As an invincible writer, it's not cool enough! Is fatal. Most of the fights were fought by his subordinates Momoshi Urashiki and others, and there was no description of the battle. The pig's trotters were attacked several times, which seemed like a bad move, but in the end not many died. In fact, the Hokage who entered the pig's trotters period is actually invincible. According to the theater version, TV version and Boruto's Ōtsutsuki Iski's level of combat power, he is completely crushed, and no one can beat him. So together with the Ninja Village, the Ninjas don't have to fight. So it is very difficult to write, but the progress is fast, and the book can be completed in 300,000 words. The author's perspective of invading the ninja world from Otsutsuki's perspective is interesting, but it's a pity that the author is not capable of writing it well. Due to the role relationship, there are basically no plots about the classic Naruto. Friends who want to watch these can withdraw. Come on author. I couldn't finish reading it, but I hope the author will stick to it and finish it. The next book will be better.

The setting is too childish, the protagonist's character is a bit of a virgin, and the character's narration is a bit weak in trying to figure out the author's thoughts.

Yeah, it's great, it's so good. Although when writing the novel, the author accidentally knocked his head over and the novel was a bit watery.

Various settings are wrong. A strong person can't sense the weak Hei Zetsu, and he can't kill someone even if he hits someone. He can't show the posture of a strong person at all.

At the beginning, it was mainly because of his identity that he was forced to satisfy, but later on there were many things that did not fit the character. Obito was exposed and still claimed to be Honmadara, which was very unnatural, especially Itachi was very uncharacteristic.

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?