Savior Chat Group

The book is okay (excluding the part about why I gave up the book), a good or bad chat group article, the change of subject matter is the highlight, and the male protagonist's openness is the highlight, but I won't talk too much about the advantages of the book, mainly to complain about the problems that led me to abandon the book... The main character is not the group leader, and the group can share experiences, memories, and items from the beginning. Coupled with another advantage of "the male protagonist is open-minded", he can directly tell the source of the memory from the beginning, tell him what he wants, directly send the group what he wants, etc., Resulting in this chat group article that almost perfectly solves "aesthetic fatigue", the biggest problem common to almost all chat groups. But now I am giving up the book to complain, I mainly talk about the shortcomings. JPG There are three poisonous points that I personally think. I ignored one of the early problems, but the other two poisonous points together made me unable to stand it. . . The problem in the early stage is the training system + poor combat power. Because I know all the characters who appear, I can clearly feel that the character's combat power is a bit inexplicable when watching it. This problem is especially obvious in the first team battle. For the first team battle, a simple comparison example is that a boss with 1 million combat power takes you to fight a dungeon. You, a scumbag with less than 100 combat power, need to do your best to fight the mini-boss on the side? The training system is just a waste of time, just the opening characters Dragon Ball + Death (Xuu is better, semi-negative quick), these two quick ghosts have the ability to write such a long training program for the fancy male protagonist, and the result is like a joke. . . Although the author tried his best to make up for this gap (different worlds have different training methods), the actual perception is indeed extremely different, especially if you don't think about it carefully. If you think about it carefully, you will find that because of the early Dragon Ball, the little bald man directly made some Goku hair and blood for Tony to toss. , It is definitely much more meaningful than some blue, purple and gold armored martial arts training tricks. This is a logical bug that will inevitably occur if you write a system with broken combat power like Dragon Ball. It is unavoidable, so why forcefully write a completely useless little bald man and forcefully add bugs to his work? Because you like Dragon Ball so much? However, in fact, this problem is not really a big problem. I will ignore it for now and pretend that I have not written anything about Dragon Ball. The other two problems are the main reasons why I abandoned the book, the inexplicability of Chapter 92, and the inexplicability of the plot of the Apocalypse. . . I really don't understand your way of thinking. The male protagonist worked hard to establish a bright and high-class character in the previous 90 chapters, and you just destroyed it inexplicably? Originally, the previous character created an excellent male protagonist who is a good guy, a straightforward person, and does not bother, bother, or be disgusting, and does what he is supposed to do. Once he entered this world, he instantly turned into a pretentious, unspeakable, annoying, messy person who casually used the protagonist to do death-level experiments. What plot does not include the savior An Xin as the team's nanny? I really can't realize how completely this destroys the male protagonist's design? Isn't it funny that you have to be the savior of your team's grandson when you are pretending to be awesome? Just pretend, call yourself the savior, and then provide food, clothing, housing and transportation for the protagonist team? Pretending is to sweep over with a 900-meter magic blast, then lie back and let the protagonist team collect resources to serve you as a boss, instead of claiming that I am an awesome savior who can fly, fight and operate, and then do all the shit yourself for them. Pretending is nothing more than looking for trouble. Once the teacher is disgusted with you, you can either tell him to blow him up or beat him up, or ignore him from the beginning, or at least pretend to say to the protagonist that saving such a person is meaningless, but it depends on how you decide. Instead of knowing the plot, you let him get on the bus to be disgusted by him. As a "savior", you don't say anything and get out of the car in despair according to the original plot, and comfort yourself that he did not end well in the original plot. . . As for the entire script, which is completely misleading and character-destroying, I doubt whether it was written by a ghostwriter. . . Speechless, but to summarize the above, purely subjective complaints are not of reference. If you don't count the reason why I abandoned the book, this book is worth reading. It's an okay chat group article. If you include the plot, it will be a waste of life. The inexplicable plot completely ruins the character of the male protagonist. He pretends to be the grandson of the team even if he wants to show off. I can only find one adjective. Inexplicable.

First, what is a savior? It is not a self-designation, it is something recognized by people and in line with human morality, such as Tiga or the last Iron Man. Human beings invented the word savior. It does not mean saving the world but also saving people. It does not mean being a moral model, but it is necessary to abide by the minimum moral justice! Second, just add Momonga Aizen to the savior. The book says that it was created out of interest by the group leader. It is not necessary to add a real savior. But if your protagonist claims to be the savior, at least you can't be too smeared. Enter the dungeon and directly choose the kind-hearted male protagonist from the original, just to steal girls. There is no emotional line at all. He is directly treated as an object and made into his own. This kind of thing has broken through the bottom line. Long Aotian does not dare to do this. Only those with a dark psychology like to watch it. Originally, I thought that unlike other chat groups, I was prepared to fully subscribe, but I was immediately turned upside down.

How many people were attracted by the golden armored warrior in the introduction?

In fact, Momonga's biggest change after traveling through time travel must be a cognitive change. He no longer cares about whether he is a human or not, his emotions disappear, and he disregards life. I think Momonga, who is still a human, knows his future and has time. Rebuilding a character is the choice that Momonga as a human would make.

Sand sculpture! The main world is on the same level as the perfect world. The pinnacle grand master has joined the Sendai level and still fights with knowledge. Do you think too highly of pirates or do you look down on Zhetian?

You can't watch it without the Bone King. I found that in most chat groups there was a Bone King, and most people would not tell him that asking him to pay good attention to his immortal body would change his mind and make him cold-blooded. No one asked him to say this, and they all regarded his killing as normal. It's not that you can't have evil ways. Your evil ways are evil ways. Killing your mother and being evil are two different things. Thank you, don't say you don't understand Chinese. Another point is that no matter how bad a person is, he still wants to be a good person, don't tell me. This and that, I want to be a good person and don't like reading this kind of novel. You are a bad person, so you write like this. If you are a good person, why do you write like this? Besides, writing about good people doesn't require you to write about the Virgin, so it doesn't mean you can't write about it.

I was attracted by the title of "Savior" and saw that the protagonist of "School Apocalypse" showed decisive abandonment. Isn't it possible that novels such as "Chat Group" can't get rid of the sperm in the brain.

The character of the savior chat group is basically to save the world, but the character of the protagonist is very confusing. Since the masses have created the savior chat group, but you plan to do bad things, you are not going against the masses, it is really poisonous, and you are not afraid of being slapped to death by the masses. Especially School Apocalypse is really a poisonous one.

. . . . . . . . The brave man who was scared to death by the tractor . . . . . . . .

The savior who kills people and steals girls, np, I don't know but thought he was a villain chat group

Chapter 92: He was poisoned to death, and he wanted to kill the protagonist at the first moment, or for a woman, is this worthy of being called a savior? Goodbye

After Chapter 92, it doesn't feel like it was written by the same person. The character of the protagonist is so broken and has all kinds of brain-chopping behaviors. To be honest, after reading Chapter 92, I couldn't stand it even after reading a few chapters. The plot and character are so awkward that it doesn't even feel like it was written by the same person.

Phew, in the latest chapter, just after secretly killing the protagonist and coveting other girls' breasts, he immediately jumped out and said that he was the savior. Author, doesn't your conscience hurt? It would be better if you said you were a visitor from another world and the world came to you for help. It gave me goosebumps. The more I write, the more I write, and the more I write, the more unruly it becomes.

The protagonist's personality is very confusing, and he was normal in the early stage. From the beginning of the zombie world, he became a bit dark for no reason. During the completion of the mission, he suddenly made no secret of his desires, and the turn was very sudden.

I remember that the author of Bone King once expressed his admiration in public, which meant that anyone who liked Bone King should be sent to the police station.

I have never seen such a double-standard bullshit savior. You don't deserve this name. Not to mention how well you write it. Anyway, you are not a savior and you have not worked hard in this regard.

It would be outrageous for the savior to have a Bone King. No matter how you clean it up, Bone King is always dark. The original work is an evil comic, and it doesn't create a positive character at all. Moreover, Gensokyo is a place where monsters are lingering, and it is the savior. . .

The first time I couldn't stand it, I gritted my teeth and persisted. The second time I couldn't stand it, I hope the author can repent, but I couldn't bear the three consecutive mouthfuls of EVA Death. I'll say goodbye. Come on, everyone.

When I saw Xiaoyin Komuro leaving immediately, as a savior, I gave him a slap for no reason, so I said, "I didn't mean it." Seeing that you wanted to kill him subjectively, you didn't mean it, so you are still in the savior chat group.

There is no sense of the existence of the protagonist at all, and it only serves as a spoiler. He does not explore his own world, and the chat group only writes about other members. The protagonist is a tool for sending scripts to the group members on behalf of the group leader, and is completely dispensable.

If this counts as salvation, then what counts as a teacher? Author, you need ideological and moral education. It has to be remade.