I'm Obito's Brother

Author, you*** saw the rise, you Tm is finished

The cold wind of Konoha, the strongest Kakashi, the cat breeder of Konoha, my brother's name is Naruto Uzumaki, I started trading in the heavens from Naruto, I recommend the author to read it, the author, let me tell you a few shortcomings 1. The writing speed is too fast, you can write 100 pictures in front of you, but you finished it in a few strokes 2. The characters are too stiff, there is no psychological description, and no body movements 3. The protagonist is too stupid. He has no strength in the front and just thinks about how to save his brother 4. It won't get stuck. It should end when others like it the most Finally, I hope the author will write better and better.

I've dubbed the first one, you can listen to it and correct my mistake, even though I'm a bit shy.