I Was a Hustler in Japan

The plot is too fragmented, there are too many characters and it's hard to see clearly at once, which means it's too confusing. The writing style needs to be improved, but the plot and imagination are good (personal opinion)

You have attracted a large audience with the title Little Yellow Hair. After all, this is the gold medal protagonist of countless excellent tragedies.

When I saw the title of the book, four big words flashed in my mind, and I was overjoyed.

The stream of consciousness is too heavy, and many people may not feel comfortable reading it, so it affects the performance of the book. The plot is described in multiple lines. If it is well written, it can indeed become a magical book, but if it is not good, it will have a great impact on the performance of the book. Especially online novels, which are characterized by being easy to read and easy to understand. Too complex content is not suitable for online novels. Of course, this book is quite well written.

Because the author is a die-hard storyteller and will push through all the endings when playing any horror game. He also likes the characterization of supporting characters, so the following questions will inevitably arise when reading this book: 1. Where is the male protagonist? Where did the older male protagonist go? 2. Multiple perspectives. What a mess! I can't understand what is written at all. 3. What's going on with the rhythm of the writing, it's so cool (referring to kusa) 4. The first volume is purely about the performance of the male protagonist. Wait~ I'm sorry if it causes trouble for you to read. It would be great if you can get it.

Generally speaking, it is a novel that the general reader can imagine after reading the introduction and has nothing to do with the actual text. It is too scattered and seems laborious, but it is not bad.

I'm really unhappy. Are you writing a novel or an anime? There are too many inexplicable supporting character chapters and too many inexplicable flashbacks. I didn't expect that the flashbacks that I most wanted to skip when watching anime would be encountered so many times in a novel.

How to say it? A little watery. I originally thought it was after the male protagonist returned after solving the first dungeon. It's weird to pick up a big beam and crush him all the way to death. Become a more ridiculous existence than the Lord of Weirdness. As a result, there are many other people's plots. I once thought this book was called "The Revenge Life of Touko Himuro's daily life and mysterious confrontation department". There is almost no sense of existence. It's hard to say how cool it is. Although it finally started to return to the male protagonist plot. Still want to say something. Too much drag. The male protagonist almost has no sense of existence.

I can't read it, I can't read it, it's strange, this book is really strange, there's nothing poisonous about it, but it doesn't make me feel happy either.

Let me summarize the plot. The plot is so fragmented and confusing. The reading experience is a bit bad. After telling a short story, summarize what happened and why it is like this in layman's terms. The protagonist's personality is quite arrogant, and you can tell he is a tsundere at first glance. Also, the author's writing skills are worrisome. Your writing is broken and I feel tired. There are more than forty pictures, and I feel that at least the thirty pictures in the middle are unnecessary. It's not just watery, it simply has no effect. The sudden transition made me confused. Come on, author

The book is indeed a good book, but I really can't stand the style of the Invincible style from Japan. The protagonist obviously has powerful power but has no self-awareness at all. Not to mention that he is self-centered, but at least don't be so mother-in-law. It's too watery. If there are book friends who like this style, you don't have to be defeated if you recommend a copy of Demon King. The styles of the two books are exactly the same. I guess, if it weren't for the different authors, I would have thought they were written by the same person.

Toru Himuro (x) Toru Amuro (confident) Not drawn by me, not drawn by me, not drawn by me Image source browser, the original author cannot be found Deleted if invaded

The opening plot is too long, the plot is too confusing, and the three golden chapters are wasted. The plot has too many characters and is a bit redundant. It feels like the author wanted to make each character fleshed out, but when added together, it felt a bit broken. The protagonist, supporting role and tool man are not positioned well.

Personally, I find it very annoying to watch.

I have finished reading the first volume. I have read light novels before, so I read it carefully. Although the plot is a bit confusing, I feel it is okay. I just don't know why it feels too bland. Sometimes I feel irritable while watching it, as if there is no climax after watching it for a long time, and I have no expectations for the rest of the content 🙂

The fate of the eunuch

Phew, how long has it been? It's only over a hundred chapters, and you're really one of the worst books I've ever read. It's been over half a year, bah bah bah.

It feels very imaginative, and Goldfinger is also very interesting, but the characters are a bit confusing, the names are a bit too many, and I don't have the NTR or Yakuza plot that I want to watch the most.

Please, let me finish Touko's story

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