Lord's Secret World

The biggest poisonous point in this book is the physical training of knights at the beginning. I just want to know, if a lord does not have good mysticism, he has to become a knight. Is it convenient to cultivate him later? There are also emotional scenes that are so embarrassing that the child bride also wants to make me laugh to death.

The plot is too bloody. Well written as a lord and being of extraordinary power. . . .

It's a very interesting setting, and the explanation of the origin of the system is also logical. It doesn't just happen out of nowhere.

It would be nice if there were fewer typos

I can only say that the first one is a little bit poisonous. An adopted daughter helped the lord take care of her. She touched her pig's feet and slapped the lord directly? No respect? Your system posted a message asking her to stay for one night. I don't understand what it means? Which method is not suitable for transitioning the plot? It has to be transitioned from a woman. The subject matter is very attractive, but unfortunately the emotional drama is a failure. I would rather replace the adopted daughter with a butler than this. The subject matter itself is niche. How many people who read niche articles are novices?

As a lord, he became the slave of his own maid, and became a death knight for the sake of her?

Is the protagonist really licking, speechless, and giving up to his adopted daughter just because she is beautiful? The predecessor you traveled through time was bad, but it's none of your business. It's like you made a mistake and acted like an idiot.

I think the setting is more attractive, but the plot is very flawed. The fiancée is very poisonous, and later she even goes crazy for the maid. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, he should have died long ago. If the emotional drama is not good, then don't write it. This kind of protagonist is really discouraged now.

The political affairs of the territory are all managed by the foster daughter, but when something goes wrong, it's all the male protagonist's fault? ? ? What kind of logic is this?

What is a lord? A lord means that the territory belongs to me. The common people use it and I collect taxes. However, the common people are hungry and it doesn't matter what the protagonist does. It becomes the protagonist's problem. If so, is it a lord? That's a slave

To be honest, the style of the article is wrong. Anything related to anomalies should be serious. It should not be playful or flirting, because once there is an abnormality, it means uncertainty. If you are not careful, you will pay the price of your life. The author puts the protagonist in such an environment, but the protagonist does not feel any tension or anxiety. Instead, he is carefree and relaxed. The sense of immersion is too low. You don't write much now, but I hope the author will think carefully. Since you want to write a book, then calm down and write well, don't be impatient, shape the character better, bring yourself into that environment, and think about what you would do, right? Are you trying to defeat all odds or making plans? This is a problem.

An adopted daughter actually beat up a nobleman. In the Western world where the world is judged by blood, a mere adopted daughter dared to resist the nobles. This article is really not ordinary garbage!

The first illegitimate child has no status, let alone an adopted daughter! Is the second nobleman a fool? His whole family is

I told you to quit in the first chapter. If you don't change, you will never think about how many people will read it. Say goodbye 🙏

Personally, I hope to grow up and farm.

The foster daughter's territory is so rubbish, what's wrong with the protagonist?

Personally, I think it's better that the maid is not resurrected. After all, the protagonist is a lord and he always has to go through some life and death separations.

It was originally a good book that the heroine's seed turned out to be King Arthur, and all the elements of the Holy Grail War were written in. Goodbye, I won't delete the book. . . What a great potential book written like this!

There is indeed a reason why this book is not popular. Don't you ever read the novel you finished?

Originally, the other settings were quite eye-catching, but the setting of the knight was eye-catching. It was already a fantasy and weird world, so why would there be such a disgusting and unimaginative setting with fighting spirit?