Kindred in the World of One Piece

On the one hand, this book tries its best to vilify the navy, and on the other hand, it makes the protagonist lick the navy. If you want, write the character of the navy better so that the protagonist doesn't feel disgusted when he licks it. Otherwise, step on the navy hard and let the protagonist kill decisively. Look at what lines the navy has. Another cold smile, another cruel smile, and another indiscriminate attack. Besieging others can also say "Boy, you have gone too far." Crazy, this dog-licking protagonist was framed by the navy before and was surrounded and killed without killing anyone. Now that the navy is surrounding him and killing him, a counterattack would be too much, or else he would just stand and kill him? That navy would say such cerebral palsy? Isn't this vilification? There are also 3 lines of coming and going. "That's it, kid" "Don't get too carried away, pirate" "Death to this, pirate" "Hugh's so arrogant, pirate" "Don't be too arrogant, pirate" Crazy, fight well, the above are what the navy said when fighting. Fighting with you means getting carried away, being rampant, and being arrogant. You fight with your mouth.

By the way, this won't even kill the naval admiral who framed the protagonist! It's understandable not to kill ordinary marines!

I like optimistic and cheerful protagonists, but this kind of noodle stall man can be avoided. The author is so boring and obscene. I want to come up with a cool and cold style, but I can't write it. A wave of blacklists. You put poison so that I can see it, so I'll tell you. Not bad, tell the truth.

Isn't Qian Jue a female? ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

I would like to make a suggestion, the protagonist is already so powerful in just twenty chapters, and his power has grown too fast, so your article will not be long, and he has been fighting alone, and there is no plot.

The archer theme is good, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง