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The author has perseverance. Even though he had poor grades on several books, he still kept writing and even finished the book.

Why save people, why not let them all die 🙂

I would like to make a small suggestion. The names of the supporting characters should not be too similar to the names of the protagonists. One is Zheng Hao and the other is Zheng Long. I really can't tell who is the protagonist? Of course, I only read a few chapters and ended up being funny to save my life. (Funny)

When will Huang Youyi be written to death? Women will only affect the male protagonist's brain!

One of the poisonous points of this book is that everyone who is rich and powerful becomes the protagonist's enemy. The problem is that the protagonist is one of the oldest players. They are so powerful that it would be outrageous for these people not to think about friendship but to think about revenge. Especially the ordinary man named Li Baoguo who was destroyed by the protagonist with extraordinary power in less than three chapters. Resurrection is how to rush to resent and take revenge on the protagonist. The frog in the well will resent the sparrow, but he is not qualified to look up to the roc. With all due respect, let's look at it from a normal perspective. For the protagonist group, the strongest organization in the game, most people are not willing to make enemies, let alone a businessman like the boss of the Jia Group. To offend the protagonist for a woman. There is a fart difference between this and urban stallion stories like Dragon King's Son-in-Law

The author is really very perseverant. Although the results of each book are not good, he still insists on writing. This is really amazing. Now many people in the author group are in this state: "If the results are good, keep writing, if the results are not good, I will cut it. If there are too many cuts, I will change to a new account." This is As a result, many eunuch books appeared. I don't know how many there are. I looked at the books that were all excellent. However, due to some reasons, the performance began to decline and the author stopped writing immediately. Some were mediocre in the early stage, but the books that the author insisted on writing eventually surpassed those of eunuchs. It is probably difficult for the author to get started with this book. Even if the latter part is much better than the first one, there are very few people who can catch up to it. As the author continues to write, his writing skills will slowly accumulate. This book is not to my taste and I can't follow it, but I believe the next one will be better. I'll give my new book a kick when it comes out, and I will support it. (There is a vicious cycle for niche books. If the book is not good, no one will comment. If no one comments, the shortcomings will lead to the author not knowing what he wrote wrong. The author will continue writing without knowing where he wrote wrong, causing the book to be bad.)

After reading about 100 chapters, I still gave up. The subject matter was okay, but the behavior of the protagonist always made people feel awkward. There are a lot of bugs described. For example, if you were in the sea two days before Genesis, if your basic clothes got wet, you should be prepared to freeze to death. It's not just about hunger and thirst.

Your writing is very embarrassing. Are you the protagonist or is that woman the protagonist? It makes me feel very bad.

Emmmmm The author wants to write a high IQ showdown. But judging from the fact that I have read so many such books, it is indeed not good enough (of course, don't ask me to do it, I definitely can't). The plot is too focused on the protagonist and has flaws in all aspects But it is still worth watching, but I heard that the second chapter is not as good as the first? I just finished reading the first chapter Isn't it 🔥 or my grades are too bad?

At least it's rare that the author is not a eunuch

This novel can be considered a good book. The emotional line at the beginning is a bit discouraging, but it's not that poisonous. Why are the results so miserable? The copy is also ok. It can be seen that the author spent time. Did the author offend Qidian?

I only watched Genesis and felt that the author's imagination was not very good. In fact, the power of words has not been used at all. The protagonist uses it like a weak chicken. In fact, the words can be used to write words such as shield, protect, dodge, and hide to avoid the damage of the pistol, and can be used to transfer to other places. , If you really can't go, you can use Heal, Heal, Heal to heal the wound. You can use a gun to get a weapon. You can even use Air to resist, Cut to attack, Jam to make the pistol useless, and Break to directly break the angel's sword. But look what the protagonist did? Just like what Xiao Tian said, this is an invincible ability. You give the protagonist a bug ability and the protagonist only uses it to do some inexplicable and confusing behaviors. You don't need to think about it to know that the following words are similar.

It's so miserable. Seven million words. Are you using love to generate electricity?

Two million-dollar books completed, so there are only so many book friends

It's still level 1 after more than 5 million words. Has the author ever thought about why? There is really room for improvement in all aspects.

At the beginning, when you meet a woman, you can't move and you have to show up forcefully. This is the starting point. Those authors who want articles but not words, who want pen and ink but not pen and ink are all in the same line, relying on flesh to attract readers.

Before reading the book, I liked to read the book circle 🥺, but it was difficult to read it over and over again.

Authors need to believe in themselves and don't care about what others think. There will always be people who will silently support you.

I read hundreds of chapters in one go. The author's inspired storylines are very good, but the writing style and the rules of the game are too delicate, and there are many small bugs. Some plots are more random, such as the great flood, resurrection, Sifang City, and national leaders. It would have been very popular ten years earlier.

Your story is too long, huh?

Friend, we are still waiting for you, don't give up

The author is really very perseverant, but I feel that he is really not suitable for writing online articles... There are too many things that he wants to foreshadow, and it looks very ink, and the writing style is not very good, the writing is not attractive, and the setting is not logical. It feels like it is written where it is. Basically, after reading a few hundred words, I have no interest in reading until the second game starts.

It's all written, it's awesome, come on!

I have seen two books that are worse than this book. One is Big Sniper's Time and Space Maniac. Unfortunately, not many people read it because of changing pen names and other reasons. 5 Reviews in the book circle are pretty good. The other is called Super Mario. 25 Reviews from book friends. I have written more than 300 chapters based on my interest. I have never spent any money. I only update one chapter every 1 or 2 months when I am slow.

I said you are awesome and have really strong perseverance.

Author, how did you manage to write nearly 7 million words? Still a level one?

This tells us that writing novels is a dead end