Konoha's Fake Sharingan

Being 19 years old doesn't mean you can hit spots with one hand and step on the ground with one foot, you don't say Kage level, and we don't say elite jounin. However, no matter how useless you are, you can still cultivate a jounin in more than 10 years, right? Ordinary chuunin? That's it? That's it? How did you survive the Great Ninja War?

The proud Uchiha clan forced their jounin to sell barbecue? What do you think? Even a jounin who doesn't open his eyes is still a jounin of Uchiha, selling barbecue? Where is Uchiha's pride? The protagonist's grandfather, a retired elite jounin who values ​​the glory of Uchiha more than anything else, can sell barbecue? How can you still be exterminated if you have such a powerful weapon?

A few suggestions 1. You can write fan fiction with secondary settings, or you can add original works, so that you can write longer. After all, you are traveling through time, familiar with the plot, and Goldfinger. With normal logic, Goldfinger only needs to keep at it if you want to cheat like this. Sunsend Technique should be able to push Konoha to the end of the Uchiha clan 2. Add some new ideas, now the whole network is I wrote the fanfic as a fantasy. At least Naruto can change. The upper, middle and genin are the professional titles in the original. There is no need to say what ninja is on the panel. It's boring. Elites are elites, ordinary are ordinary. The standard original is graduate genin. After the chunin exam, you are chuunin. Jounin is the plural chakra changes. Like a bitch, you are an ordinary jounin. Kakashi Kai, you can say that they are elite jounin, and genjutsu masters like Kurenai are special jounin. This way the fantasy smell is much less. 3. The protagonist is a time traveler, and he has a lot of information about some well-known figures. With his small knowledge, he can become a real ninja. Assassinating information and killing some well-known figures is a good way to become famous. Now there are a few people in Konoha who know the protagonist. It is reasonable and reasonable to at least bluff people. I have assassinated Orochimaru and Kazekage. Just pretending to be in the novel is not as satisfying as talking about the strength of the Jonin. 4. Create original fights with some characters, collect intelligence, and fight back to extend the life of the novel. When facing the original characters, they will be instantly defeated, giving readers a sense of refreshment. 5. Just like there are almost no 3-year-old Jonin and 6-year-old Kage level now, you can reduce the description of the rating and write more about the training content. This is at least better than the rating. 6. Counter-routine, either bragging or washing, boring, just do it and it's over. Watch Naruto fandom just because you like a certain character or a few characters, and don't give them what they like. If the protagonist defeats them, it will be over, and he will be kicked off the altar. Just like in the past, the protagonist was a rich and handsome man, but now the rich and handsome man is the villain. If he gets tired of watching it and is blown away by it, he will directly defeat them and directly criticize them. From the perspective of a time-travel reader, who hates homogeneous praise, then you can do the opposite, which will also give you a sense of satisfaction.

Chapter 21 successfully persuaded me to quit. I will tell you two things that I think are poisonous. Firstly, after the protagonist selects the stage goal, his mind keeps dinging and cannot be muted or turned off, which makes the protagonist depressed. I don't understand why the author set it like this. I want to scold the system... Secondly, the importance Uchiha attaches to the Sharingan in the article can be said to be abnormal. As long as an Uchiha has not opened his eyes, he is a waste. Even if you are a Jonin, you are also a waste. In the article, the father and grandfather of the protagonist have been very dissatisfied with the protagonist for not opening his eyes. Then the protagonist took the Jonin exam and passed it but did not tell them. Then they were very dissatisfied. As a result, the protagonist was asked not to go out to work in the barbecue restaurant owned by his family (I don't know how to complain)... Similarly, I completely don't understand why the author wrote Uchiha like this? To put it bluntly, if the Uchiha in the article were exterminated, I think it would be described in one word - well... To be fair, Uchiha must know the conditions for opening his eyes, right? It takes a major stimulus, such as the death of an important person, to open your eyes. So I completely don't understand Uchiha's attitude toward the Sharingan in the article. Uchiha are indeed proud to have the Sharingan. I understand that you write them as arrogant, looking down on the weak, and even looking down on people other than Uchiha in their hearts. But like in the article, it is clear that the protagonist is not weak (he was an elite chuunin before, and became a jounin in Chapter 21, but he still looks down on him), but he just looks down on him without opening his eyes... I can't understand at all

There is no way that Jiraiya and Tsunade are still in the village. Anyone who knows a little bit about Naruto should know that the author has never seen Naruto at all.

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Some poisonous points are too discouraging, such as communicating with the system and so on.

If you can't come up with anything new, don't do so many bloody eliminations. The composition and attributes are different, but the performance is basically crushing...

This Akatsuki has no cells. I have only seen it once. Is it possible to casually study it and find out that the blood succession is eliminated? If so, it will not be a dust escape in the end.

There is no barrier outside Kumogakure's large warehouse? There are no guardian sentient ninjas? People are practicing melt escape right under their noses? Isn't that funny? Are everyone else blind?

After mastering the Sun Senjutsu, so many blood successors were eliminated, but then I met the Akatsuki organization and fought for a long time without leaving anyone behind. It was really a bit useless. I even wrote "secretly happy" several times. I don't know what I am happy about...

My core things are no longer visible to others.

The writing is indeed not very good. Those who say good things are all trolls.

Different Sharingan

Why lick Konoha? I don't understand why I handed over the magic to others later, and I also don't understand. The Chinese always hide it, and then you take it out selflessly. I believe many people won't like it. Show your trump card? My own strength exceeds that of the village, and yet I still make all kinds of compromises and drag out the plot. Will the United States reason with Iraq? Isn't it easy to deal with the tribesmen once you have the strength? So funny

First, the details, the details are not handled well. For example, the awakening of magic is related to the sun and weather. Then the previous article said that one percent is awakened every eight days. What is the relationship between awakening and weather? Second, the text describes this aspect. When awakening, how to reflect the power of magic, um, golden finger. This all needs to be described in detail, such as increased attributes and increased chakra, to give readers room for cognition and imagination. Finally, the plot arrangement is lacking in strength. You discuss the meaning of life with Uchiha Itachi and make some saucy remarks. People just think that the protagonist is crazy. Why can't the author arrange for the protagonist to escape from Uchiha Itachi's mouth after awakening as a senshi? In this way, the plot arrangement effect and reading quality can be greatly improved.

I feel like the protagonist is stupid. The plot of Sora Ninja is actually on point, and he is almost killed. Lang, who has no confidence in his own combat power, faces Orochimaru Danzo, Gen Ninja, and the Kumogakure Mission all by himself. I always thought it was a shadow clone battle.

Vomiting blood, Uchiha is a clan of lunatics, and they are arrogant and think they are naturally superior to others. Selling barbecue does not exist. Even if the protagonist goes voluntarily. Uchiha would object or even force it. It is even more impossible to force you to do these things that Uchiha considers to be done by inferior people. Even if you are the most useless person in the Uchiha clan, the Uchiha clan will not let such a thing happen. To them, this is shameful, humble, and harmful to the family's face. The author doesn't know enough about Uchiha.

I feel relieved to see so many readers complaining.

After reading Chapter 99, I felt like vomiting, "I am the messenger of immortals, you can call me the messenger of immortals." Uchiha Hide smiled slightly, which made people feel like they were breathing in the wind.

I feel like I'm going to collapse. It's almost time to become a eunuch.

Genin - Chuunin - Special Jounin - Jounin - Elite Jounin - Named Elite Jounin (Next Generation Shadow Seed Player) - Shadow (Strongest Combat Power in the Village) Five Village Brawl Eyes Legendary Ninjas in order from lowest to highest.

There will be a pile of blood and weeds out, so what's the point of precious essence rather than too much? One move can be eaten all over the world. In the world of martial arts, only quickness can't be broken. One kind of power has reached its extreme. One sword can defeat all kinds of magic. One sword's sound can destroy all kinds of magic.