The War Begins with Bright Sword
战争从亮剑开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 152k Words
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
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53Chapters
2kRecommendations
33Fans
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The criticism in the comments section is normal; the protagonist is like a rebellious teenager. Anyone who's watched "Bright Sword" knows Li Yunlong likes him; I admire capable people. But after reading 17 chapters, I haven't seen any redeeming qualities in the protagonist. He has no real ability yet feels superior; if he doesn't change, he'll be doomed sooner or later during the War of Resistance.
Dude, you're writing a book. Please carefully consider the characters' dialogue and see if it's appropriate to say something like this. The protagonist hears that it's Li Yunlong and wants to go see him from afar, but when he meets him and someone asks him what he wants to say, he internally says that he doesn't want to say anything, he just wants to see him. There's a reason why it's not popular.
The protagonist is a time traveler, not a native. As a time traveler who knows the course of history but doesn't have any cheat codes, why doesn't he hurry up and join the Communist Party and cling to its coattails? Instead, he's always thinking about going home to do business. Isn't that ridiculous? Where is your home? Do you even have the capital? How can anyone watch this?
The protagonist is too immature. In a chaotic era of war, instead of trying to get closer to the organization, he wants to run around alone. This is just asking for trouble.
I feel that any modern person with a normal mind wouldn't go to the occupied territories to wade into the muddy waters. Even if they wanted to live a comfortable life back then, they would have had to go to Shanghai! This is just plot for plot's sake.
Hurry up and abandon this story! The protagonist's character isn't even properly developed! What era? Making money? Getting married? Without a country, how can there be a family? What's the point of time travel?
Honestly, I didn't understand. With so many chapters, what is the main character's role?
The protagonist's time travel is utterly humiliating!
I hate childish protagonists the most. Don't talk about adapting to them; I find them disgusting.
Author, I've watched Bright Sword... Please stop typing out the original script! It must be tiring. 😅😅