The Screen-Dream Fulfillment Project

Yangon, Donggu, and Lashio are three key cities. Detailed descriptions are interspersed in the novel.

The reward is 500, which is not much, but I hope it can help you (ง •̀_•́)ง. Also, you know the author's crazy hints. Jpg

Let's discuss something. From today to next Sunday, there will be a test push on the PC side. The results of this recommendation are very important. If you like it, you must save it, so I won't mention it. Let's get more recommendation votes next week, add 300 new votes, advance the ranking to 3,000 miles, and add a chapter of 4,000 words, how about that? If you agree, vote for recommendation. (now 564 votes)

The title of your book is a dream, and you have to understand what dream it is. It means that you can make the plot of the novel that everyone is uncomfortable with feel comfortable. Generally speaking, the tragedy becomes a comedy, and the comedy becomes more comedy. It's best for novels to be universally known and universally unhappy. Do you understand? What the hell is the mayor of Chicago! It's best to browse the website or post forum to see what plots people are very unhappy with. So much so that even if I talk about it in my heart, I am no longer satisfied, so I have to complain and argue online.

After reading a few chapters, I have something to say. The title of the book is "Dream Realization", which means that the protagonist has watched the TV series and is even very familiar with the content and each character of the TV series. However, I have read more than a dozen chapters. The impression given to me by the protagonist is that he only knows the name of the TV series, has plug-ins in hand, can do anything, and brags about his skills in the book group. The overall feeling is that a plate of delicious food with good color and aroma looks good, but when you go to eat it, you find that it tastes like chewing gum and leaves you with a lump in your throat. I hope the author can do better

Does the author know why subscriptions dropped so much? Because your style of painting has changed. Everyone is confused by looking at military time travel. The plot of "My Captain, My Regiment" you wrote is also good, but the second script is turned into a gangster movie. In the first chapter, he is a general, leading thousands of troops to fight against Japan, and in the next chapter, he becomes a gangster wandering the streets. This feels too inconsistent. If you want to write it like this, it is best to have an over-plot in the middle. It would be too blunt to jump to it all at once.

The pace is too slow and the plot is seriously delayed. It will collapse sooner or later if this continues.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I found that the pig's trotters are really weak. The golden fingers are useless and incompetent. I feel that the pig's trotters are useless compared to the most ordinary aboriginal. In the real world, where science and technology are so advanced and people know the history, they are not even as good as most aboriginals. It's so vicious that I can't stand it anymore.

The title of the book is wrong and it doesn't feel like a garden dream. The setting of this book is different from other time-travel novels. From a certain perspective, the protagonist can set whatever "ending" he wants. But the author wants to disgust the readers and turn it into a "tragedy" and turn the protagonist into a saint with no desires and desires. You can write a novel without a heroine and everyone can read it, but you also want to write about a female reporter who loves the protagonist especially, which is completely digging a hole for yourself. It's a bit like a third-rate bloody drama that insists on some insignificant tragedy. The female reporter has no role in promoting the plot. If you don't write that bit of ambiguity, a male reporter will do.

I still like to watch my leader, but I don't really want to watch Chicago.