Her Loyalty to Me Scares Even the Emperor

The writing style is a bit, um, stream of consciousness? Radio system? The setting should be good, but it looks a bit abstract.

It's too messy. I can vaguely see what the author wants to express, but the reading experience is not good, and I always feel that a lot of description is missing.

After completing the hero's mission, he was reborn in the original world and then lost his memory? Still have not traveled through the timeline of another world? Is the heroine here early? The stream of consciousness is a bit confusing

The writing style is okay, but the writing is very messy. This is an online article, and you can't expect readers to slowly understand it on their own. What should be explained clearly should be explained clearly in advance. I was attracted to that elf girl because of her unreserved trust. Whether it's affection or loyalty or whatever. But be able to trust without reservation. It's a pity that I can only say that I personally don't understand the protagonist.

The writing style of the work really makes people read it clearly, it is simple but can bring emotions In terms of plot, I can't understand what you are writing about The story is too short to mention for now But the content is really too radio, I can't understand it at all

If you think something is wrong, please leave a mark in the relevant chapter and paragraph so that I can try to modify it.

Very to my taste, author, don't be a eunuch

Too messy, too little foreshadowing, too little foreshadowing

There are also typos in the radio article. It's very tiring to read.

There are too many typos and omissions, which makes me tired.

Is it entertainment, part-time, or full-time?

I can't quite understand the development of the plot. I feel that the protagonist's body changes very suddenly 🤐. I can understand what happened, but why and how it happened can't be understood from a God's perspective.

The author writes well. The book is good. If you stick with it, it will definitely be extraordinary.

It's true that it's radio waves, but it's okay if you accept it. Come on, author.

😭Without your book, I feel like there are ants crawling in my heart😭

The writing style is great, but I don't understand why the male protagonist is afraid