Signing in to Eriyi Starts with Hayate Swordsman

Post to criticize. To be honest, quite disappointed. This book perfectly describes what it means to open high and go low. Highly popular and highly collected, the new book issue is not only the top-notch work of the same period, but it is also a number one. Let's not talk about the writing style. My experience after reading the whole article is that the author did not make a good outline and the story he wanted to tell was fragmented. Sometimes this character's skills will be mixed in, and now that one will be involved, and later I want to add a Zhutianliu chat group. The mess is like a ball of yarn that cannot be sorted out. During this period, I couldn't grasp what points in the work excited readers. In the middle period, when a group of people finished watching the foreshadowing and planned to watch Sweets, Lu Mingfei forced himself into the scene for ten chapters. Discourage most students from pursuing their studies. Everyone is watching Eri Yi making sugar and having to interact with the whole League of Legends golden finger, which is so confusing. The summary is that the author wrote it for fun, but he didn't expect it to become popular. As a result, I couldn't hold on and wrote to death.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Did not start the plot but ended, so I don't need to use the common name, this is the end, the full order is more than 450 fan points, and the speech costs 500, I don't want to say more about the appearance, someone has already said it below about the plot, so I won't repeat it again. Let's just play around with writing a book. In fact, I have always felt that I am quite a loser. I talked about generating electricity for love, but then when I saw that the results were not good, I immediately pulled the plug.        ：，， I don't have good grades and no income, so I don't want to write: Ah, I'm just writing for fun, but I don't have grades, so I won't write. Let's re-open a book, it should make more money. The plot is broken, and I don't know how to write it: Oh, I'm just playing for fun, please be more considerate, I will definitely pay more attention to re-opening a book than I am now (and then repeat it) Some of the more stupid people just write the ticket at the beginning. Then when various problems arise and they don't want to write, they just refer to the beginning. The ticket seems to have become an excuse for the unfinished work. What I dislike the most is that after the end is unfinished, I continue to shamelessly ask for support. Trust seems to have turned into a leek. Once you cut a stubble, it can grow back and continue to cut. To be honest, I am not an author, and I don't know much about the "hardship" and "hardship" of their writing. However, I think it is the basic principle of the profession to love one's profession, and it is also to make money. Why don't you give it a try at work? Why did it change when it came to writing? I'm not very good at writing, and my typing may be a bit messy. I feel like I haven't finished what I want to say, but I just smoked a cigarette and suddenly I don't want to say anything anymore. Things are bad enough, so why should I poke him twice? That's it, goodbye, never see you again.                                                                                                                                                                                                           since

Open low and go low, or have my taste improved/poison resistance decreased recently? Nothing impressive about it

Xia Zuo wiped the blade of the knife, and when he turned his head, he saw that Eriki was almost touching his face. From such a close distance, he could see himself reflected in Eriki's eyes. "What's wrong?" He asked, putting away the knife. "Want to go out to play? Not today, I have to go out to meet someone." "Meeting someone?" Eli Yi grabbed his left hand and wrote slowly, her big eyes showing a kind of mischief that she would not usually show, like a child who had succeeded in playing a prank. In some ways, she is indeed a child. Xia Zuo scratched his head in embarrassment and struggled for a while before speaking: "A... Netizen, a very close netizen, has let her down many times. This time I can't break my promise again." "Yes. Will you take me with you? She must be someone very important to you, right? Eriyi also wants to see her." The corners of her mouth raised slightly, and her face turned red for the first time, and she held Xia Zuo's hand tighter. "Shall I ask? After all, this can be considered..." "A date?" Eryi wrote quickly, which actually interrupted Xia Zuo's speech. Xia Zuo was slightly startled and nodded. "Then just ask, she will definitely agree." Xia Zuo took out her phone a little strangely and found Zirandai, and typed and asked: "Can I take someone on a date? /Awkward/Embarrassing/Embarrassing" Eli Yi quietly took out her phone and typed quickly. Transcript: "Of course it is if it's Darling. She must also be Darling's favorite person, right? /Hug/hug" Xia Zuo subconsciously glanced at Eri Yi holding the phone and replied, "Ah, yes, she is very important to me, really important." Transcript: "It's very important. How important is it? /Expectation/Expectation" "I'm used to having her by my side, maybe... I can't live without her anymore, right?" Xia Zuo was still about to say something, when she felt something bumping behind her. Eryi's hands wrapped around his waist, she leaned her face on his shoulder, and kissed the side of his face. What's going on? Xia Zuo put down his phone and had just sent out the words "I like her very much" in the chat box. When he was about to turn around and say something else, Eriyi blocked his mouth. She kissed carefully, like a child who had just received candy and was reluctant to eat it in one bite. She took small mouthfuls and savored the deliciousness of the candy, slowly tasting the thing she had been waiting for for a long time, which was more delicious than candy. She left a free hand and wrote on Xia Zuo's hand that had no place to rest, "I am majesty's natural lover, and I like majesty the most." Xia Zuo was stunned for a moment, and suddenly remembered what Mai Shutoku said, and then he suddenly realized that his wife had always been by his side? Eriyi's eyes were full of smiles, Xia Zuo also smiled and said: "Why don't you just say it?" "Love needs little surprises, majesty is my biggest surprise😘" Eriyi wrote with a smile.

To the author. I felt quite emotional after reading the latest announcement. Brother, have you ever thought that this book only contains 170,000 words. Brother, have you ever thought about how many people come from next door? The university next door has proven that fellow dragons can also become gods. Just look at how many Dragon Clan fandoms have emerged recently and you will know that this subject has a large audience. Brother, have you ever thought that even if you write the same theme again for Dragon Clan Eriyi, it will only be updated in one month. I don't want to put pressure on you, and I understand why the author's mentality collapsed. But really, 170,000 words of an online novel means nothing. How many people don't read anything less than 400,000 words. If you can't get into Sanjiang's book, do you have no chance? This ability overwhelms the recently popular single female protagonist, Dragon Clan, and the treasure of dog-food novels. But how do you know that the next book can still beat the wind? The number of people who tipped it has proved that the subject matter of this book is correct. I have read it. But are the tipping and collection data fake? I consider myself an old bookworm. This result is really not bad for a new book with less than 200,000 words. The author's thinking is correct, which means that if you stick to it, you may not get a better view. If other book friends agree with my point of view, please click like and let the author see how many people support him.

The writing skills of the author can be seen to be very good. There are relatively few people who write about the Dragon Clan fan series, and even fewer who write well. Generally, they rarely give direct rewards for the sake of fan value. They always subscribe until the fan value is enough before speaking. Having said so much, I just want to say: The author writes very well, come on! If I maintain this quality, I will continue to subscribe (wait until the paid chapters are released)

Author, when you write about Lu Mingfei and Little Monster, it feels like the protagonist is being ntr. The protagonist has been with Little Monster for so long, and the relationship is almost in person online. Originally, it felt like they were about to be together, but suddenly Lu Mingfei intervened. It feels really uncomfortable. I feel that Lu Mingfei is really inappropriate. (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it'

Since I raised my speaking permissions, there are finally no trolls anymore.

You need 500 fan points to speak, so I rewarded you with 500. When I saw the seventy-sixth chapter, the protagonist did not appear in 10 chapters, so there was a little scene of what the protagonist was doing in the middle. Even when the boss said he sent a video call to the protagonist, he didn't describe the protagonist. So what are these 10 chapters describing? They are all about Lu Zongbi and Hui Liyi. The little devil wants to use Lu Mingfei's hand to control Hui Liyi. However, I have been reading books for so many years, and I have never read a book with more than ten chapters that does not write about the protagonist but instead writes about the NTR protagonist. I can only say that the author is cheating!

Eri Yi will always be a pain in the hearts of Dragon fans. I hope the author can write her well.

Why don't the other positions of Operations Officer go to whoever gets the most rewards? Doubt? ? ?

The reading experience is good at the moment. The author will continue to work hard and slowly optimize some small problems and should be able to reach LV3 this year. This is almost the first wave of milk in the new year. The successful wave of milk last year still gave me some confidence 😁

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Lu Mingfei can be written to death, and when he broke into Eriyi's bathroom, I... I was still upset after all 😰

Finally I came across a fanfic with Eri Yi as the heroine. I am very happy to read the latest chapter in one go. To make a small comment, the cheat the author gives in the book is the system flow of lol. However, during the reading, I felt that the system chaos did not play a good role in promoting the plot of the novel (for example, the more classic one is Yao Lao in Dou Po. Although Dou Po is very short, every time Yao Lao appears, the plot will be coherent, rather than simply adding the power to promote the plot). For example, in another Dragon Clan fan that has become popular recently, Lin Nian's character runs through the entire main plot, but the additional powers he displays are only one or two words and spirits. When I read the latest chapter, I found that the author introduced too many additional powers to the system. As a novel this is not a good thing. Numerous and complex additional abilities will only make readers feel fragmented while reading and eliminate the sense of involvement in fan works. With less than 200,000 words, each of the chapters that has been published is enough to open a separate book. If you can dig into one item separately, your reading fluency will be much better than it is now. Hopefully the appearance of the system can be slightly diluted in the future. When empowering the protagonist, add as few new elements as possible. I like this book very much. I would be very happy if the author could see it. I would be happier if I could adopt it! ~O('▽')o For the sake of so many words, please don't delete the post. Damn it.

Why did the Feng Mo Family kill the person who saved the protagonist, and why did the protagonist join the Feng Demon Family? The author's writing style is niche, and the writing is a bit like a pretentious and profound literary novel, which may dissuade some readers.

This is my first time to pay for a reward. I want to speak up and express my own opinions. The main reason is that I really like this book and I hope the author can read my opinions. Only my personal opinion: 1. I personally think that the biggest reason why this book collapsed before may not be Zero, but about Lu Mingfei and Eli Yi. Although I know that the author is pure love like us and cannot write about cows, but the things about Lu Mingfei and Eli Yi in several chapters are a bit stomach-ache. I hope the author can complete these foreshadowings as soon as possible and make Xia Zuo and Eli Yi sweet as soon as possible. 2. Foreshadowing. The author mentioned before that Eriyi is Xia Zuo's online dating partner. Although the author said that he would write about it later, I still want to remind the author to use this foreshadowing quickly! 3. Regarding Lu Mingfei, this may be the biggest point of dissuasion in my mind. The main reason is that he has too much contact with Eri Yi. Although I know that Lu Mingfei is more or less unavoidable when writing about dragons, it is really uncomfortable to watch, but I believe the author can handle it well. 4. It's about the male protagonist Xia Zuo. In recent chapters, it can be said that his presence is almost zero. In fact, what readers want to see most is the scenes between Xia Zuo and Eri. Although the scenes with Eri in the early stage are not particularly many and sweet, they really attract readers. This is also the reason why readers want to read more. Although Xia Zuo has fewer scenes now and has little contact with Eri, I believe the author can write and control it. 5. I just hope that the author can work hard ^0＾~ and write this book with heart. This book is considered very good among current Dragon Clan fans. As long as the author writes with heart, Sanjiang will definitely be on the list! This only represents my personal opinion. Good luck to the author＾0＾~Write well! Xia Zuo and the little monster rush together!

Hui Liyi Image source watermark

To the author. The previous plot was uncomfortable to watch, and some of our readers reported that it was because they loved this book and didn't want to give up. The temporary reorganization affects the update speed, and rewards will also decrease as a result. Today, while I was waiting for the update with great anticipation, I suddenly saw that it would be hastily finished. I felt quite disappointed and uncomfortable. There are too few fans writing about Eriyi, not to mention that it's pretty good-looking. You said you would open a new account and write a new book. Congratulations, your results will be better. But the energy you spend on this book will only become less and less, and you may not be able to find the same feeling as before. I can see from the announcement that you're in a bad mood, but I hope you don't give up on the book. I didn't think it was enough before, so I asked if there would be more updates after it was put on the shelves, and the result...

To be honest, there is really no need. As the previous brother said, this book has hit the appetite of many people. If you open a new book, the author, can you still do this? Unless you now write a book with similar themes to Eunuch, but obviously you can't do that. In that case, why not write well? What's more, this book has a good score of 170,000 words. If you fail to write, just adjust your state and start writing again. It's really not a big problem. Besides, isn't every book your hard work, so why don't you just end it and finish it in three months? Moreover, it is only one Sanjiang. Since ancient times, there have been countless people who came from behind. Is it necessary to give up directly?

Lu Mingfei, Chu Zihang, Caesar and Renata The camera angle is not good. . Um. . This is a poster. .

😵 The first part is okay, but the more I write in the later part, the worse it gets... If it weren't for the fact that all the chapters have been ordered, I wouldn't want to read it after a hundred chapters... I gave it up and gave it up.

Latest news, latest news, the author said that as long as the number of orders for the book exceeds 500 within three months, he will continue writing

No one says more than me

The group of readers who paid five yuan seems to have disbanded. I was just about to join in to ridicule him. If there are still people who want to read his books, remember not to spend five yuan to join his group account.

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In order to post, I spent 500 coins. I keep this book, and I thought of it today and took a look at it. The first four chapters left me full of questions. There was no connection at all, the plot was inexplicable, and I couldn't sense the existence of logic and timeline. I quickly opened the comment area, and that's it. As expected, it was rotten. There are only a few dragon clan members, and there are even fewer who mainly paint pear clothes, so you have to do this. 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿 🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿🌿

The good guy will die if he keeps it.

At first I was supportive and wanted to wait for more information before watching, but now I just feel okay and don't have high expectations...

It was okay in the beginning, but the plot started to get confusing at the end.