Dream of Conferring Gods

1. All the relatives are dead, just like nothing happened. 2. The first reply to the player has no logic at all. 3. The real and virtual settings of the game world are confusing. The protagonist can actually pass through the wooden bars of the cell? Anyway, it's just whatever is convenient for the protagonist.

The subject matter and setting are very good. The beginning of the chapter is eye-catching, but the writing is a bit confusing between the dream reality and the game. If you can understand it, it will be very interesting. The various game worlds and game dungeons in the middle have not been developed. Those lines are useless even if they are buried, and the dungeon products cannot keep up with the protagonist's upgrade pace. Furthermore, as the protagonist is a prehistoric/ancient person, he should do more dungeons of the ancient world. The dungeon of Tyrannosaurus Rex is actually meaningless. You can definitely write more about each dungeon. You can write about the interaction, struggle for hegemony, and management between the protagonist and the natives. You made me feel like I had just read a detailed synopsis after reading it. I can't say it was watery, and it felt like there was a lot of content. Even though I read it all at once, I didn't remember anything... I also like this heroine very much, but I didn't write it out. As a result, except for the protagonist, all the passersby, I feel sorry for your idea. There is still a bad ending. When I saw the title, my heart skipped a beat. Sure enough, one chapter became a god, two chapters completed the book, and it was more of an outline than an outline. What the hell. After reading the chapter review, an old man said that the author's other books are similar, with good settings and weak writing. I am not going to read them either. I now regret why I didn't just read it yesterday because it was free, and I bought the last few chapters. Oh my god, it made me autistic. Come on, author. In the future, you can open both books instead of double books. Forget about the names of people in the middle. I always feel that if you finish this book, it is for the sake of another... It is better for you to write less in each book than to finish it.

Come on, author, write well. Don't be like the last book, where you always feel that the protagonist of the undead is stupid. He is not playing a game, but being played by the game! This time the protagonist Wang Liang is a former official, so if he is not a monster in terms of his worldly manners and IQ, he should at least be excellent, right?

I can only say that the author has so many books. I have read the author's "The Invincible Water God" and found it to be more interesting. The rest are not my cup of tea. Today I will try try this one

The levels here are too confusing. Even a dignified Yuanying can't fly, so he has to rely on a kite. The most annoying thing is that he fought with Lianqi for a long time, giving him the sense of martial arts. In the end, he couldn't beat Lianqi and died. . . What the hell?

The game has been upgraded to level 40,000 and has almost 1,000 chapters. The 1,000-chapter chapter of the Myth of the Undead has now been upgraded to level 6, and it is now level 10 after only 10 chapters. Will it be level 999 in one go? 🤭🤭🤭

Isn't it tiring to open several books at the same time?

Introduction: Strength persuades people to quit. Pig's feet that don't know how to become a god

It's another early-stage fairy grass and suddenly poisonous book. The Desert Treasure Delivery dungeon was pretty good at the beginning. But after the dinosaurs came out, it became very verbose. After the dungeon was released, I used the artifact to buy a house.

The advantage of Yumin Boss is that it has a wonderful imagination, each book has a new setting, and the background story is very grand. However, every time I go to the end, I feel that the protagonist is very busy and has no time span to sort out what he has gained. He is constantly fighting monsters or being beaten, constantly upgrading, and a large number of settings that could have written a book (I was shocked when I watched the second part of the game 40,000 Years) were smashed into a dozen or even a few chapters. The same thing happened in the last book of Necromancer, with a hammer in the east and an ax in the west. It feels like every few chapters overturns all the previous settings. The most damning thing is that the writing power of the Yumin boss is able to rationalize this overthrow. The various fighting scenes are quite exciting and fascinating. But the protagonist is really busy! Obviously this is a game with a time span of hundreds or even thousands of years. Other people's layouts start from a hundred years. The protagonist feels that the time is too long even every other month. It is necessary to detail the settings to not only give a sense of substitution, but also to say orz in a few words. And I always feel that such a thing as an outline does not exist in the hands of the Yumin boss. It also corresponds to that sentence. Life is a live broadcast. It cannot be done without rehearsal. You never know which surprise or shock will come first.

There are too many messy elements! After reading the first 46 chapters, I was able to read it evenly. Later, the protagonist quit the game and all kinds of messy stuff in the real world came out! Not interesting. There are all kinds of adventures in the game, but you can't live comfortably in the real world. Don't you feel too tired? I'm tired from reading even if you're not tired from writing. Just tighten it and loosen it, okay? Just relax to a certain extent, right?

It can be said that the setting of Feather People is one of my favorites in the starting point, but the plot and writing level are really infuriating. I've read several of them, but I've always started high and low, and I haven't even finished the free chapter of the last one. Hope this can change🌹🌹🌹

Can we finish this book before starting a new one?

I just hope it will be faster. I can update three or five chapters a day. I don't mind at all.

Here's a suggestion, don't spray it if you don't like it. Can the author consider using less words like "just right" and "looks like XX"? If these are used too much, it will give people the illusion that the protagonist relies on luck when fighting, and it will also give people the impression that the author himself is not sure.

The background of the protagonist is really complicated. He is the nephew of the Supreme Emperor. He was reincarnated many times and failed to become an immortal. In the end, Huang Liang had a dream. He dreamed of becoming a high-ranking official with both civil and military skills and was eventually demoted, and then entered the game. There are many layers of matryoshka dolls. The nephew of the Supreme Prince is on the first layer, Huang Liang Yimeng Lu Sheng is on the second layer, Wang Liang, who is both civil and military, is on the third layer, and Wang Jilong, who is versatile, is on the fourth layer.

1.，，，，NB，，，NB，，，， 2. The protagonist upgraded too quickly, and received generous rewards in the first plot game. It can be said that the plot requires it, and it is understandable. However, from the second plot game onwards, it feels like pretending for the sake of pretending, forcibly lowering the IQ of the supporting character, and using various details to make the supporting character feel that the protagonist has an extraordinary origin, although the protagonist's real background It's very powerful, but shouldn't you write about people playing games in the Tang Dynasty, the collision of ideas between ancient people and modern people, and the ancient people rising step by step in the collision and competition with modern people? How did I become a NB with my background? I have good relationships with all kinds of big guys, and all kinds of opportunities come to me easily, and modern players kneel down and lick the protagonist. 3. The content is confusing, the details are not rigorous, and the game background is also a mess. What is the world of modern players like? It seems that players are like NPCs, but they just add old settings to the previous NPCs. It feels like this immortality game is prepared for the protagonist.

How inexplicable! The whole book is a bit strange

I haven't read about 40 chapters now, so I looked through the book list until the end, this paragraph. Jingyanggang Tiger is not over yet? ? Generally speaking, verbosity means boring...

I was shocked when I saw Chapter 16. The protagonist at level 10 killed a level 35 person in a duel, which is equivalent to killing a person at the Nascent Soul stage in the Qi Refining stage, and it was a single kill without any moisture...

Aeolus Pterosaur

Why do you want this one, Eunuch? Did your other book get better results than this one?

Reading this book so far, I find that there is no female protagonist. It is concluded that the author cannot write emotional lines.

I feel like I can write a lot more 😓 I just finished it for free for a limited time

Author, do you understand what you wrote?

Fellow Taoist, please stay, the Black Panther Immortal has arrived 😅😅😅

Very creative and interesting. Come on.

I read the comments and they all said I couldn't understand it, so I didn't know if my guess was right or not. I saw that the protagonist thought he was Wang Liang at first, but slowly discovered that the history was different from his own memory. After quitting the game, he discovered that Wang Liang's memory was a fake dream. He is Lu Sheng, the protagonist of Huang Liang Yimeng. And I saw that Lu Zu said that the emperor specially arranged for the protagonist to have a dream and gave him a dream that can be entered into the game. Pillow, although it was not explicitly said that it was the Supreme Being, there were only a few people who dared to do this under the noses of Yuanshi Tianzun and Tongtian Cult Leader. Later, I saw Lu Zu saying that he was not qualified to accept the protagonist as his apprentice, and he had not guessed the protagonist's background. As a result, part of his past life memory was restored. I guess that the protagonist's previous life was the nephew of my nephew who was reincarnated by the Supreme Being. He was reincarnated because he was not convinced that he could not become an immortal.

The theme and imagination are very good, and it reminds me of the days when I was chasing big adventures. Chapter 40: I don't like it very much. A piece of artifact equipment was exchanged for a haunted house. The setting of the protagonist is also not good. Others and readers know many things, but the protagonist knows nothing, and then he is stupid and suffers. This kind of setting cannot be used as a refreshing point at all, but looks awkward. I don't know if there will be any changes later. How can I give you a monthly pass and subscription like this...

Author, you have a lot of wrong data in your book. In Chapter 12, the bow and arrow is at the control level. You wrote it as mastery. In Chapter 2, the innate Qiankun Gong said it has an upper limit of level 70. In Chapter 12, it says the upper limit is level 60.