Perfect World: I Took My Younger Brother's Supreme Bone from the Start

My point of laughter is so high that I was even made laugh by you upstairs.

I feel that if it were me, I would definitely lick more than you. If I were to travel through time, I would definitely go to the Holy Ruins.

There are very few Perfect World fans. First of all, I would like to support the author, and secondly, I would like to point out some of the problems I have seen. First, returning the bones is not just a matter of wanting to return them. Reconciliation will leave sequelae. Otherwise, in the original work, why would almost all the tribe elders side with Shi Yi? Because Shi Hao has been abolished. If there are no sequelae to return the bones, the Stone Clan will not leave two supreme beings alone. Secondly, the protagonist is a time traveler, and he has such a deep relationship with Shi Yi's mother? Are you dragging your seriously injured body to seek medicine? Third, I don't think Shi Ziling did anything wrong when he injured Shi Yi's mother. You dug up other people's bones and you think you've paid off by returning the bones? It's like you broke someone else's son's leg, then took him to the hospital to pick him up and let it go? Finally, I hope the author will get better and better.

? ? ? ? ? ? ? What is the age of this protagonist? I was 4 years old at the beginning, I was 6 years old after wandering around the wilderness for half a month, I was 9 years old when I went home to practice for two and a half years, and then I was 15 years old the next day when I went back to have a drink! ! ! ! The problem is that I read it back and forth 3 times, and what I wrote is that I went home and had a meal of Jiefeng wine and woke up the next day and I was 15 years old? Are you Conan?

Shi Yi didn't even have to wash his mother, he just went to kill Xiao Shitou.

I found a problem. As long as it is Chen Dong's novel, the time traveler is always inferior to the indigenous protagonist. It's so strange.

In fact, anyone who has read the entire Perfect World knows that this is actually the second world of Emperor Huangtian. Everything happens in the past, and everything is unchangeable. The entire Perfect World has formed a perfect circle of time. You can only fill it in, but you cannot alter it. Those who want to alter it. For example, An Ran, the Corpse Immortal Emperor, and the three Future Fighting Immortal Emperors all indirectly accelerated the growth time of Erzhoumu Huangtian Emperor. Sometimes I really admire Zhoumu Huangtian Emperor. Under such circumstances, he can fight the world alone. It can be said that one person is perfect, and a group of people can cover the sky.

I have read it twice. Overall, the writing is pretty good, but there are some places that are not very good. Let me talk about the timeline and some issues. 1. The part where the empress wants to kill Shi Yi is really poisonous. Let's not talk about whether the empress comes from the future and can kill him. Let's talk about the relationship between Shi Yi and Emperor Huangtian. If the empress dares to reveal her murderous intention, she will definitely die. If you want to kill Emperor Huangtian's brother, whoever doesn't will die. Besides, the future Shi Yi will not stop him. Don't tell me that Shi Yi has no future now. 2. In the part about marrying Ye Fan's daughter, I want to say that Ye Qingxian seems to be Ye Fan's granddaughter. I don't know clearly. I didn't understand it very clearly. Then I really want to curse when I marry Ye Qingxian. The difference in seniority is a hundred and eight thousand times, for no reason. I won't say anything when you call me Senior Ye Fan. After all, Ye Fan is the future incarnation, but if you call me Ye Fan's father, isn't it too weird? In the current timeline, Ye Fan has not even been born. In the future, you will be worshiped by the Immortal Emperor and call Ye Fan Father-in-law. Doesn't it seem weird to you? After all, Ye Fan, who is of the same generation as Emperor Huangtian, will have to respectfully call Shi Hao "Senior, come to you" in the future. . . In general, these are just a few bad points, the rest are pretty good. I read it twice, but I just can't stand that the future empress wants to kill Shi Yi. No matter what she does, she shows murderous intent towards me, so I decided to let him know what it means to respect seniors.

In fact, I think the first paragraph was a bit dramatic. The protagonist's mother removed Shi Hao's bones, and then Shi Hao's father must have been very angry when he saw it, and beat the protagonist's mother. Moreover, this was originally the protagonist's mother's fault, but the protagonist punished her on the spot. Taking out the bones made it impossible for Shi Hao's father to step down. Shi Hao must have suffered more pain than the protagonist's mother. However, the protagonist's actions transferred the conflict to Shi Hao and his son, making readers feel that it was Shi Hao's father's fault for beating people indiscriminately. Although there is no big problem logically, I just feel a little uncomfortable. Why did you take my child's bones? In the end, it felt like it was my fault that you returned the bones.

When I saw the title of the book, I suddenly had an idea. One of the key points is that Shi Hao struggled to survive after being taken away from the Supreme Bone. This also became the motivation for him to become stronger in the early stage, and later the Supreme Bone was reborn and became stronger. If Shi Hao's original natural potential can rely on the Supreme Bone to become a Supreme, after Nirvana, his potential will undoubtedly be stronger. Without this experience, would Shi Hao become weaker? If other novels can eliminate the protagonist and take advantage of various opportunities to steal the protagonist, but in a perfect world, if Shi Hao is treated like this, then the dark turmoil will have to be carried by himself, which is basically indifferent. Moreover, if Shi Hao is killed, it is basically impossible for readers to buy it. Moreover, Shi Hao is the soul of a perfect world, so he has to either be friends with him or lick him, but he is really not qualified to be a master. If it's a brother's expense, it's probably necessary to have a good relationship. Eliminating hatred is the most important thing. But whether Shi Hao can become as strong as the original without hatred is open to question.