I Teach Kendo in Tokyo

I haven't seen such a simple book for a long time. The so-called simplicity does not mean that it is simple because it writes about ordinary life, nor does it mean that it is simple because it is brainless and retarded. It means that the author is simple. This book does not have a complicated story background, and the writing method is simple and unpretentious, starting and ending. Starting: The brother wants to sell the dojo in exchange for a better life, and the sister wants to keep her remaining memories, which leads to conflicts, and this is where the story begins. Multiple: Because the dojo failed to sell, the Yakuza intimidated and threatened the protagonist's family. In the middle, the grandma who sold snacks gave up her ancestral business. It was the trend of the times that individuals could not resist. Reposted: The Yakuza prepares to kidnap their sister Chiyoko and coerce their brother Kazuma to hand over the dojo, but mistakenly kidnap Mikako. Kazuma begins his first confrontation with the Yakuza, and finally successfully defeats the Yakuza Nishikiyama Heita. He understands the importance of the heart (la ya la). The past of Nishikiyama Heita is also inserted in the middle. It turns out that he also fought, failed, and eventually went to the evil path. This also indicates that if Kazuma fails, everything will be lost, and there will be no compromise. Together: Nishikiyama Heita was defeated, but ushered in a darker and more evil Yakuza. After two persecutions, Kazuma finally realized that the so-called swordsman can take out all things with a sword, and he also had an awakening. Life has been like a dream for fifty years, and there is no one who is immortal. Facing the darkness that is powerless to fight, only by risking your life and wielding the knife in your hand can you fight for a glimmer of hope, Nan Wu San! Just when Kazuma was about to step into the world of evil and evil, Hakuba shot a bullet and saved a young man who was about to make a mistake. The story has temporarily come to an end here, and Kazuma has also ushered in temporary light. However, with the arrival of Uesugi Soichiro, the plot seems to have taken a turn for the worse, directly casting a shadow on Kazuma's light, and finally made a promise to Tokyo University one year later. But Showa is about to pass, and Heisei (abandoned houses) is the future (laughs). Finally, I want to recite a poem Looking at the sea Landing the Jieshi in the east to look at the sea Where is the water, and the mountains and islands are standing The trees are thick, and the grass is luxuriant The autumn wind is bleak, and the waves are rising The journey of the sun and the moon, if it is out of it The stars are brilliant, if it is out of it Fortunately, I sing to sing my ambition

There are many problems with this book. In the final analysis, it is a problem with the author's characterization and plot grasping ability. This is directly reflected in the characterization of the protagonist. The first is the character of the protagonist as a time traveler in the early stage. As a sales person in his thirties, the protagonist's early temperament and ability to handle events are basically the same as the main body's physical age - that is, at the level of a high school student. Secondly, in the later part of the book, the protagonist spends a lot of time jumping back and forth between procedural justice and resultant justice. The author does not have the writing power and experience to make the story more attractive, and the result is that the article is stinky and long. I can understand the story of a young man who, when faced with the Yakuza, sought help from the law and the police to no avail, and finally determined to change everything, but I cannot understand why the protagonist takes the law so seriously. The protagonist clearly knew the powerlessness of the law in this book better than anyone else in high school, but it was not until he graduated from college and became a police officer that the protagonist did not think about this issue? The protagonist went into hibernation a few years ago, right? This is also a problem that many book friends criticize about the growth of the protagonist. An uncle in his thirties is as naive as a high school student after his rebirth. Until he becomes a policeman, he is still as naive as a high school student. The third is the main line of the book, that is, the protagonist's determination to become the police director is also very problematic. No matter where you are, if you want to climb to this position, you must have at least two or three skills, strength, background, and emotional intelligence, right? The main character in this book really only has kendo prowess and a mysterious background. He offended all the black and white bosses from the beginning. The author also had to make the main character tie his hands and feet and dance in shackles. Wouldn't he just be defeated everywhere? Watching the protagonist behave in the later period is like watching Don Quixote charge at the windmill, but Don Quixote is at least a satirical masterpiece, and the author's writing power can only depict the protagonist as a clown. Fourthly, the eunuch's nature broke out, which resulted in a lot of foreshadowing in the middle period of the book being wasted. Almost all the villain-related cases in the middle period were left unsolved and simply "passed by" without beginning or end. Five is the author's bad taste. We are not here to see Yangchun Baixue, but the jokes can be vulgar, but they cannot be obscene. Throughout the book, you can see the middle-aged greasy uncle-like aesthetic of jokes and his deep confidence in his creative ability. The author's preference for NTR is also unflattering. Sixth is the repetition of routines. Who can count how many times a hero saves a beauty in this book? Whenever a key point in the plot is reached and inspiration is exhausted, kidnapping is used to push the plot forward. After watching it, people will feel bored and want to vomit.

At first I thought the writing style was pretty good, but the more I read, the less I liked it. It's chapter 21, and I haven't gotten to the point yet, and I'm still feeling terribly aggrieved. Is this male protagonist really a person who has been mixed up in society? He looks like a young man. There is a saying that you should adapt to the environment rather than the environment adapting to you. His mind is not firm and he drifts with the crowd. He talks about his plans all day long but has no actual plans for the future. For the Yakuza chaebol's persecution, they only wanted to immerse themselves in hard work and did not have any preventive plans for possible risks. When others come to kill them, they can only become helpless and furious. I really wonder if many people have abandoned the book, so I set the fan value to 500 and earn the 5 yuan.

How can I put it this way? I'm thinking of starting a new book before I finish this book. I feel that the author is unexpectedly irresponsible, not to the readers but to his own book. This is the first time I've encountered this kind of thing after reading a book for a year or two. Let's just leave it at that. I won't subscribe to it in the future. I'll just let the next books go. If the reputation is good, I will support it. If it doesn't work, just let it go.

It's so messed up. Three years later, the plot was terrible. Before that, the protagonist still had a heroic spirit, but after graduating from college, he became a bad guy. I have made so many choices in order to become the leader of the police force, but I still have to get out of the mire and push the plot forward by running into obstacles at every turn. Even if I have friends with the underworld and the police boss, I can't do it even if I make false promises. But the ending is still dark. Instead of going around in such a big circle, it would be better to graduate from high school and join the Kanto United. As soon as the plot couldn't progress, the villain attacked the female character. In the later period, the villain pattern was so small that it felt like someone else had to write it. In the front is the kbfz with lofty ideals, and in the back is the angled leader with an absurdly small layout. The last few dozen chapters felt like a throwback to the past and ended up being completely unfinished, with a lot of foreshadowing left unfilled. Even if the finale chapter explained the situation in the harem properly, it would have been much better than this ending.

I only found out about this book when I saw it recommended by the APP. I read the end of the fourth volume in one go. It was really enjoyable. The author's writing skills and cooking skills are really outstanding. The use of various jokes is really good. Whether it is battle scenes or daily life, various pictures appeared in my mind while reading the text. It has been a long time since I have seen such an attractive book, and the number of updates is also very full (compared to other books with less than 3,000 updates per day). Author, please keep coding and don't stop🙏🙏🙏

The last 40% of the content is unfinished, so just subscribe and watch it. After the protagonist becomes a policeman, the plot outline is basically derailed, and the quality is GG.

Let's draw a conclusion first: this book has completely deviated from the title after the high school chapter. The plot structure until now has been a hammer here and a stick here and there, and it feels like the author is going wherever he goes. It does not rule out that the author has the idea of ​​recycling foreshadowing. However, the foreshadowing has been buried for too long, and due to the pace of updates, if readers don't remember where it appeared, then it would be better not to add the foreshadowing. The plot summary of the police chapter is that Hippo tried to use the power of the police to investigate that technology, and then he was buried in the first step when he entered the workplace. Even before the company took action, it was already difficult to move forward in the police world, and the method of using strength to overcome cleverness that it was good at before was no longer effective. I found that instead of watching this crappy policeman get his head smashed and bloody in the police force, it would be more refreshing to just go to the extreme. The Yakuza itself wanders on the fringes of society. It is not easy to investigate an external company. The most basic thing is to send people to follow and monitor the movement of personnel, to further sneak into the investigation and click on a bug camera. It is illegal and there is no need to abide by the law. The members specifically look for people like Asuke, who are in trouble but have a heart of gold, to teach them the way of swordsmanship and how to behave in the world. Some people may say that such a disciple would be particularly difficult to find, but only one such disciple can stand alone, and the stand-ins themselves are attracted to each other. After the protagonist's name is announced, many ordinary people who are suffering from society will definitely come to the protagonist for help. The protagonist can also rely on the ability to read entries to discover potential stocks. Like Whitebeard accepting his son, he reaches out to those who are trapped in darkness but still want the light: Be my disciple. It's no better than the current situation where I don't know where I went off topic. When the author chose this title, the core should be swordsmanship and dojo. It can also be developed into the protagonist's own society, which is united by teaching swordsmanship and the way of life. Fighting against the evil Yakuza, and even all the illegal forces lurking in the darkness, being the Dark Knight of Tokyo is more interesting than this crappy police detective?

I saw that I was about to fight Uesugi, but I really felt that there was something wrong with this outline. L The main theme of the book I saw should be the teaching and competition of swordsmanship, fighting particularly exciting battles with the blessing of a small number of supernatural beings, participating in the redemption paths of different people, the ups and downs of all kinds of people, and the opportunities and subsequent crises of the economic bubble in Japanese society. After entering society, he struggled to survive between two extremely powerful giants during the Cold War. There will be vague hints and glimpses of the supernatural, but it will not be fully revealed, and even if it is revealed, it will be very late. But now it seems that all these have been abandoned in the early stage. Even the characters have become a bit frivolous and casual. The handling of the incident is a big problem. It is not as smooth as the two generations. Even if the blood of the reborn boy is boiling because of the swordsmanship factor, he will not be helpless and choose extremes in the face of this situation. This time the incident is understandable in terms of saving people, but the method is really problematic. If you withdraw directly from the police station, it will really be a joke. Even if you are really successful as a private detective, no one will take you seriously. Please, the author. I want to see the protagonist who the police express their gratitude to him from the bottom of their hearts when he saves Haru. It's okay to tear down Tsuda and Shirakine, but there is a big problem with this person's murder! But now with the Uesugi Sword Master in a head-to-head confrontation, it doesn't matter whether he wins or loses. If he loses, he will be even more depressed. If he wins, the combat power setting will collapse. I don't think the current protagonist can beat the level 90 Sword Master. Unless you are prepared to insert a third party in the middle of the fight, and then fight side by side with the Juggernaut and one of you dies? It's even worse to end. Isn't this three-year jump so big that I can't stand it? It feels like it has become something written by two people. Can you let me get back a little bit of my previous feeling? The Dragon of Kendo doesn't want to see him change. This change cannot be regarded as growth, but can only be regarded as growth.

I feel like this is a story about being a swordsman on the surface and running a harem secretly. I would like to call this story of one thing on the surface and another behind the scenes called "I built a plank road in Tokyo"

I originally wanted to write about not forgetting my original intention, but I always wanted to be new and different, but I found that my level was just like this, just like Kazuma after stepping into the Sakurada Gate. The author said that there was a lot of inspiration waiting to explode, so I suddenly crossed over from the college life I was looking forward to, and entered the society where we are all struggling and sinking. Society is a river and lake, and rivers and lakes are not just fights and killings, but also human relationships and accidents. The truth is correct, but the legendary stories spread in the rivers and lakes have never been like this. Li Xunhuan, Lu Xiaofeng, Ximen Chuixue, Qiao Feng, Guo Jing, Yang Guo, etc. Maybe not everyone likes these characters, but every character is so vivid. Why? Because they all have their own hearts and are following their own path. I don't even need to explain them one by one. I believe anyone who knows these characters can tell you something. So I have to ask, where is Kazuma? I once thought that he would also have his own heart and walk out of his own way. I once thought that Ksitigarbha Bodhisattva on a rainy night had pointed out the way forward for him. I once thought that Horatius was also his guiding light. What I thought was just my imagination. Maybe the Kazuma who walked into the Sakurada Gate was what the author wanted, but not what I imagined. Did the author ever think that Kazuma Kiryu, a lonely dragon, would sink like Hiroshi Nanjo? The police were like shackles The same applies to him. This is not the swordsman in my heart, nor is he the holy moonlight that once guided the way forward. The villain of Welfare Technology is actually not well portrayed. Although he has been consistent since college, it makes people feel that he is dispensable. The entanglement between Kazuma and them is not even as painful as the brother who was stabbed to death by his father to protect his girlfriend. Kazuma entering the Sakurada Gate makes me unable to see where his path is, until now. When I saw the novel that was interrupted for four days, I suddenly remembered that this is a novel. The author is the heart of the protagonist, and only the author can explain the protagonist's way. Hahahahahaha, what am I worrying about? Maybe like other book reviews said, maybe when those three years passed by, this book has already ended in some people's hearts. When Kazuma walked into the Sakurada Gate, it was the Kiryu Police Department, and the author's various descriptions are no longer as affecting as before. My heart is broken. The former second grade is like losing youth. It reminds me of the Haruhi Suzumiya I have always loved. The Haruhi Suzumiya who was unwilling to be ordinary and wanted to make the world more lively. Unfortunately, the bastard author Tanigawa Ryu may want to take the ending of the story to the grave. That's it. Know your own way, keep your original intention, and encourage everyone. It's a long journey, so let's meet again in the book world 🙏

This book is really wonderful! It's full of a two-dimensional picture, and there's a lot of resonance between the lines. There is often a certain point every few lines that arouses the desire to comment. I have been reading books for many years, but no book has ever aroused my desire to comment so highly. Therefore, although there is only one chapter per day, the time it takes to read this chapter is enough to read three or four chapters of other works, because there is a lot of time to post comments. Therefore, a large number of comments can form a brainstorm, similar to how Netflix allows the audience to conceive the follow-up plot. Similarly, everyone can actively discuss it together and maybe give the author some inspiration for creation. I sincerely look forward to the author's subsequent creations! Come on Kazuma! Come on, author!

How should you evaluate this novel? Advantages 1 The author has a very humorous and natural writing style 2 There are many interesting details, which can be regarded as popular science for me, and some even make me want to understand more deeply. 3 I think the character creation is very good. Every character in the dojo has grown up and has a character arc. The supporting characters are also three-dimensional, with stories and logic, such as Jinshan who came here smuggled in, Amao's father, and the first opponent in kendo in the university. Even for "clown"-shaped characters with dancing faces, such as the one who was first in the class in the early stage, such as Touji of the mobile team, you can see why they are dissatisfied and why they are like resentful wives. 4 The daily life written by the author is really relaxing and beautiful Disadvantages: 1. The excitement of this novel will not be concentrated in the system, in the harem, or in the face. It is scattered in seeing the author's funny knowing smile, or the relaxed and natural daily description, or being moved by the growth of a character. So his main audience may be quite vague. 2 High school chapters, college chapters, and workplace chapters are different stages of life, each with its own characteristics, but even such environmental changes lead to different readers (but conversely, this way of writing is closer to reality). So those who only want to watch the academy, games, or the workplace may not be comfortable with it. Summary: This is a light novel cover, uh, how should I define it? A new online novel? It probably means solid content, full characters, and breaks away from many traditional mindless novels. It is good to read, but you have to be patient to read it.

After thinking about it, this book can be called fairy grass in the early stage. Although it pulled my hips later, I still feel a little uncomfortable. I wonder if the author can see it and open an if line to chat and masturbate. First of all, Kazuma, who is well aware of the chaos in the neon police world, has decided not to join the police. Perhaps having a classmate or friend who is a high-ranking police officer can consider it. After all, there are people in the government who are easy to handle and have better information. After deciding not to join the police, the family's financial resources were limited to the dojo, so recruiting disciples became a big problem. The ordinary yakuza wanted to come, but Hippo would never take this opportunity. After much deliberation, I saw that my younger brother who was a good student came up with a good idea and made the first pot of gold from these students who still had hope of becoming a good student. Here we can link up the protagonists and supporting characters of hot-blooded stories such as (I am Big Brother) (Hot-blooded High School), who have potential, passion and drive, and teach them to follow the right path as the protagonist. As for after completing their studies, if they want to continue to go to school, they can go to school. If they don't want to go to school, they can set up a security company. In the early stage, the resources can be obtained from the Nanjo family. Then there are the security companies in the public eye, but secretly there are a few people who are wandering on the edge of black and white who are helping Hippo keep an eye on Fusheng Technology. During this period, the disciple was involved in a gangster dispute. Hippo could use this to intervene forcefully, drive away tigers and devour wolves, support the gangster faction close to him, and hide himself and his disciple in the dark. Murders and disappearances have nothing to do with the protagonist. As long as he keeps an eye on these evil forces and don't cross the line, and at the same time, he can gradually reduce Fusheng's tentacles by watching the small moves of Fusheng Technology. For example, the corruption in the police can be brought out through the raccoon cat's line, and it can be exposed with the help of friends in the police or Mikako's diplomat. The final outcome is of course that with the combined efforts of many disciples, the World War II veteran's society was uprooted and replaced by moderates who strictly adhered to the bottom line. Fusheng Technology was exposed, and the police bosses implicated in it were also disbanded. Hippopotamus looked at the many harems and the disciples who had grown up to be independent and returned to everyone's home with a smile. The common dojo for everyone_To the point, I opened a dojo in Tokyo, not only teaching swordsmanship, but also teaching the way of life.

I feel like the author is a little too ambitious and wants to write too much but the expression is really slow. I can understand the author's desire to write a shady story, but this plot is really too long, so long that I dozed off. Furthermore, no one who likes to read this book cares about the Japanese officialdom. They just pretend that they are in Japan killing little devils and picking up girls. It is really meaningless to have such a deep main line. If you really want to write about it, joining a team to fight against the gangsters is actually a good main line for one day. No matter how big or small the layout is, at least it can hold a lot of things. It can write about conspiracies, street fights, and police shady stories. Tearing away the darkness step by step in the battle is really more exciting than official detectives. The most important thing is that this book is still based on kendo. If you can't even lift a sword, we are still looking at it!

"But Miss, you can't be sure that Kiryu-kun will choose you in the end! Can you really get Kiryu-kun's love? Can you really compete with other ladies?" "I don't care!" Nanjo Honami proudly declared, "That doesn't matter at all. Even if I don't succeed in cultivating with Kazuma-kun, I will definitely be able to find everything that belongs to me elsewhere. In the past, I was a caged bird, and I could only hold on tightly to the few things in the small cage. "But now and in the future, I will have the power to fly freely. The world is so big, there will always be branches that belong to me, so I don't care! " I hate harem novels I hate those various Girls with different personalities are fighting for a three-legged toad, twisting themselves to compete with others, and finally becoming supporting characters without names, just like twisting plum blossoms and peonies together, tying lilies and lotus flowers together. It turned into a gorgeous bouquet, which looked extremely gorgeous at first glance, but for that moment, it completely lost its true nature. I just entered the trap yesterday. I was attracted to it when the protagonist and my sister were fighting in the dojo, and I stayed up all night. I've read almost half of it, and what attracted me was the writing at the beginning, the story, and the "spirit" of the protagonist. Men will always be young until they die, but the subsequent direction may not be quite what I thought... To be honest, I still hate the protagonist's non-initiative, non-rejection and irresponsible spirit, and he is always flirting with girls. It's really old Asashi, the Kanto alliance is becoming more and more like an excuse. If the protagonist's attitude towards Nanjo and Mikako can be said to be that he doesn't want to involve them and doesn't want to break up, it's really nonsense to join the committee later! But the protagonist is disgusting, and the girl is still there! It's cute. I just hope that the author can remember what he wrote. In the foreseeable future, there will be more and more girls, but since these girls already have their own personalities and goals, at least, don't let these people fight to the death for a man and lose their image. That would be too ugly.

If you want to read it later, you can just read the college part. The latter part is not interesting. The author will just start a new book in the later period. Hey, actually, it is better not to read this person's book, but to read the story carefully and get angry at the end.

I finally have enough fandom. I saw someone say this book is too cheesy to read. I think this book is really a bit of a middle-schooler. I don't think I'm a middle-schooler, but when I read this book, I found that he was a middle-schooler very naturally (I like it very much). It can be seen that the author probably likes some of the culture of Japan, he must have done some homework, and the writing is very good, so that even a person like me who is not very interested in these things can enjoy reading it. What really makes me want to post this book review is that after the author expresses his love for some Japanese culture, he clearly writes his own position (it should be easy to see from the protagonist's attitude and some plots about the Fushou Gang, but it was not obvious before (anyway, it was only in the last few chapters that I could clearly see it, and it should have been there before, I didn't pay much attention)).

Is the author from Cantonese? Will I be eaten just by looking at it? 😠

If you add more updates, it will be a sunny day.

You don't have to subscribe even if you want to, You know what I mean?

It's a good book that's very enjoyable to read both in daily life and in the main plot. I offer it with a monthly pass. I hope the author will continue to work hard! !

Let me express my feelings. Now that I have fully ordered it, my love for this book has gradually turned into indifference and disgust. Where did you like it before? A young hero with a lonely voice, a hymn of justice and wisdom. Where is the indifference and disgust now? The plot is seriously watered down, with too much meaningless dialogue and too much knowledge; the author frequently outputs opinions, but they are either second-hand opinions (mostly from bedtime messages), or extremely shallow. For example, the latest chapter says that the fruit of the poisonous tree is unreasonable. Have you ever thought about how many people's blood and tears are hidden in it? Of course, my post is nothing, and I don't want to teach authors how to write books. I just feel that some of my subscription points have been wasted, so I want to complain. Fortunately, the first half of the book was good, and Vera who posted it and the ghost book friend in the book review are also very cute, so it's not too bad.

Original! It's Mikako! The first to appear and the last to appear in the character design. Woohoo. I will always love Mikako!

I haven't read your book for so many years. I didn't expect you to start writing light novels now. Your writing is still so good, but I still feel that it is quite unworthy. After all, I can say that I have watched you slowly become a great god, and I will silently support you. Come on, Chendong.

In the pajama party chapter, my sister likes Amao, which is really poisonous and a cliff-edge blow to the reading experience. The protagonist has not traveled through time for a year, and he is not estranged from his sister. The sister and the protagonist have gone through hardships to save the dojo. Not even half a year later, she suddenly likes Amao, who was the gang of Yakuza boys who kidnapped her before? Even though Amao has turned around, and I don't dislike Amao as a character, the author was too excited to think that my sister and Amao have been together day and night for a long time? The author has been writing for a long time, but the timeline of the plot is not very short. Before, they had a deep love for each other as brothers and sisters, but suddenly they fell in love with Ah Mao. This is a novel, which is about reading experience. I didn't write anything out of the ordinary before. The fact that my sister likes Ah Mao is a bit unnecessary and ruins the reading experience. It's very dramatic.

Not everyone can get used to eating shit 😐 As beautiful as it is in the front, it's more poisonous in the back 😅 After watching the story about Amao's father, I decisively ordered the whole movie. However, reading the workplace chapter now makes me want to vomit. The purpose of Mikako going abroad is to tell everyone to run away quickly and not to watch any subsequent plots! Don't look! Don't look! Abandoned.

**The author and what he thinks are** the plot, a good beginning, an abstract middle and a garbage ending. I heard that this author has published several books. I can only say that contemporary netizens still have the brains to see the problem. It's true that the book has not become popular after writing it for such a long time.

The protagonist is just a waste in the end. What about your mother's bourgeois legal rights?

I really don't understand how a loyal young man who broke up a group by himself turned into such a hesitant person later. He was obviously a benevolent hero, but ended up looking like a hesitant person. Such a person would probably give in when threatened by the Yakuza in the beginning. The most annoying thing is that according to the setting, the permanent entries of Morning Star and Lone Dragon are still there at this time. It is obvious that the stars are dim and Lone Dragon is locked.