King of France

First, historical figures are animated and made into facial expressions. Let's not discuss whether the black and white binary is good or not, but whether it is appropriate to choose a character from the Animation Story Gallery as the basis for a historical figure. Such a character cannot support Bo Yun's weird and turbulent history. Facial makeup corresponds to the heroic view of history. Animation can let the story serve the character for the sake of ignition, but a non-fictional history cannot. The author uses the two-dimensional method to write historical novels. Then he can write a fictional historical work that is funny, everyday, and slap in the face. This is not a successful precedent, but he cannot use his favorite or memorable anime characters to "soul travel" to replace real historical figures. This will only hurt readers who love history, and will also put his writing into the dilemma of conflict between characters and the times. Secondly, the historical foundation is insufficient and the historical materials to promote the story are weak. Except for a few iconic nodes and names of people and places, this book does not show us the style and people of the old era at all. The rigorous operation of this world is not revealed when the protagonist joins or is passively involved in the tide. Not to mention the economic and political mechanisms, even the mechanism of human interaction becomes an endogenous push of atomized emotions. Except for the individual names that the author picked out from the history books, it is difficult for me to see the author making efforts to provide further historical information. The social relationships behind the characters in the novel are almost blank. People are the sum of social relationships. In any case, at least the characters in the story are not normal and complete people, and these people cannot lead us into that magnificent world. Thirdly, writing in desperation consumes inspiration and motivation. Based on the two main factors that the pre-selected topic was not in line with his own writing habits and the material was weak and difficult to support a complete story, the author chose to support the story through dramatization or, to put it bluntly, animation. The dramatic story advancement must also be supported by realistic logic, and the O. Henry-style ending is only because the result is unexpected rather than logically illusive. Dramatization is a small probability event in reality, and animation is an impossible event in reality. For the sake of the readability of the small theater, the author sacrificed logic, but when the plot collapsed and the whole world reached its inevitable ending, the author's weak literary and historical skills were unable to maintain its operation, could not see the way forward, and could not reveal an unimagined road. He had no choice but to choose the "corrective power of history" to forcibly reduce the difficulty of writing to the original text. But the past plot cannot be separated, so the weak points will be eliminated, and the turmoil of the French Revolution gave the author an excuse. Or die, or leave the center, at least the originally complicated relationships between the characters will be transferred back to the small theater of a few people. In short, the author can write a comedy in a small theater, use the interaction of distinctive characters to create interesting short stories, and then splice them together. It's normal for boys and girls to fight against each other today, but resentment will arise tomorrow. Even if it is abnormal, as long as the hero finds a second heroine, the plot can be arranged well, and it will make people who like harem beauties extremely satisfied. But this book doesn't work. The plot is too prominent, and you can almost use one plot to determine the basic color of a character. But there are only so many characters, and history has already given them basic colors, so it is difficult to change them too much. In this way, we have to make up characters, distort them, or even replace the characters after the characters are not arranged enough. All in all, the author can write a small theater, but cannot write a large epic. The book is over. This is a story about an author who tried to write a historical novel but failed due to lack of strength. I can't talk about anything else. The book is written by the author, and we are only responsible for reading it. At least there is still a lot of good content in the front. That's it, I hope the author takes good care of his health. The only thing that matters is physical adjustment. 🙂

LV.1? This familiar routine? Isn't it the trumpet account of the big internal manager? Tokyo Kendo almost killed me.

Comment on Chapter 215 According to French politics, if you control Paris, you control France. When the army at the front was defeated and lost all, the protagonist led the army into the city. Why did he still follow the parliament composed of bourgeois? This is very unreasonable, right? Can you directly take military control of Paris, set up a Supreme Presidium and a Military Commission headed by the Jacobins, systematically arrest the opposition, and just put them in jail? Isn't it your decision whether to be a royalist party or not? From the first six chapters to this chapter, one word: chaos. Chaotic Paris, fanatical people, and a bewildered and coerced general. This is my evaluation of these three chapters. After getting acquainted with the Jacobins before, the protagonist said that he wanted to suppress the Paris people's pathological enthusiasm for the Revolution. I saw that after the protagonist entered Paris, he drifted with the crowd like a puppet of the Parliament. Didn't he have any ideas of his own? Brother, you entered Paris to fight for your rights and establish your leadership of the Jacobins. Can you please stop being such a jerk? Still sitting on the fence? Did Beethoven and David not praise you enough? Your six famous generals don't worship you thoroughly enough? You don't have any ambitions. You are really a living saint. If it were me, I would have spiraled into the sky and taken off on the same spot, okay? With what you have done, even Chang Kaishen is better than you. Even if you have no ambition, is the small group that rallies around you still pessimistic? Finally, I hope that the protagonist will think about Lenin and the founding of the Soviet Union, break out of the strange circle of referring to the French Revolution in everything, and look at the history of later generations. Otherwise, you might as well just write the history of the indigenous people getting the Revolution. When Lenin was in the Constituent Assembly, because the Bolsheviks could not reach a majority, he directly dissolved the meeting, established a separate Soviet Russia, and even directly signed a treaty to cede territories to avoid foreign interference and concentrate on fighting the civil war. And can't the protagonist dissolve the parliament? What's the use of chirping with people in the parliament? A vote to depose the king, and you have to be forced at bayonet, you are like this, the sanctity of the parliament is gone, why not once and for all? You're making the opposition disgusted by giving this piece of land to you, right? Stop being indecisive and act in extraordinary times. As long as you defeat foreign interference, you will be the Caesar of France and the sun of the people. You will not be criticized for anything you have done before.

It is not a historical fiction novel that is recommended to be read. The setting of the French Revolution feels more like the French Revolution in the game. The author tried to restore the historical style, but the writing skills are obviously not good enough, and the character creation is relatively simple. The protagonist has not attracted me too much until now. He has always emphasized that the cobbler's son would be better off starting in the orphanage. On the one hand, I say that "Princes, generals, ministers, etc. Have their own kind." I have accepted the concept of equality for everyone since I was a child, but on the other hand, I enjoy the benefits brought by class privileges. In fact, I am not completely unacceptable, because I know that I may not do better if I am placed in a privileged class. But what if you can't bear it even a little bit? Does the fall of a free and equal soul require no time? Years of education and living environment can't have the slightest impact on you? We treat my protagonist as a modern person, not as an ancient person. And the author can check the information, even if you go to Baidu? I can only say that I feel indifferent. Reading this book makes me tired easily.

This is a big problem, but we can't forget it, it's very important.

Can the author end this plot quickly? Give me a nice word? Then he went to fight against the Prussian-Austrian coalition and came back to fetch Christina. Since you are writing about France, the protagonist should do as the Romans do, and stop thinking exclusively Chinese. Moreover, the people who read your book are all Chinese, and they don't like reading this kind of procrastination. Solve the major marital issues as soon as possible and then start working on your career.

First first

I don't know what the author's tone is. I'd say it's funny, but it's not funny at all. If you know the French Revolution, you know that it is a history of ideals and republican passion. You don't have to conform to the historical story, but you must conform to the passion and republican spirit of that era. That was the reality display left to the times by the great masters of the Enlightenment.

Tnnd, I have been banned from commenting on my new book. I don't know which sentence is the key reason. Why can those who call you eunuchs stay, but I have to be banned?

Following Napoleon's old path, but without Napoleon's decision-making! If that's the case, why would I pay to read this novel? Might as well read a history book! ! ! I first came across the French Revolution by playing the game Assassin's Creed, and then I got to know it more carefully. While sighing for the revolutionaries, I was also horrified by the bloody horror. So, the protagonist of this book, as a time traveler, clearly knows why Marat died, but instead of correcting Marat's behavior, he wants to arrange bodyguards for Marat? He clearly knew the result of Maximilian, but allowed it to develop because he thought he could theoretically stop it at any time? ? ? Laughed

The artillery arc was also created by this person, the style is so distinct Of course the key to solving the case is, I said 66 and was banned forever.

Megumi Norma Kato, is that you? Although I despise the spirit and character of your works, I still very much approve of the writing style of each of your books, the three views of the protagonists in the books, and the casual but not presumptuous feelings. If this is really your trumpet, I hope you can treat this book as your child, and you cannot kill or throw away a child just because he is bad or has done something bad. If this is really your trumpet, I will believe you again and continue to read the original version again, hoping that I will not despair.

Everyone knows that there are no more eunuchs.

The reputation of eunuchs affected the performance of this book

The great eunuch who killed a thousand swords, thanks to me I ordered all of them, fuck

To be honest, the new book Gunfire Arc is really interesting, but I didn't want to read it after I found out that it was written by this eunuch. The key is that there is really no substitute for this type of book, and there are not many books to read, so I have no choice but to continue reading.

This guy's new book: Artillery Arc, the famous god Wu Liuliu was banned forever just after posting this, I really can't afford it

I don't quite understand the necessity of writing about a princess... For a woman, among a lot of men, she has too much heart. Even if she wants to, can the Duke agree? If she is anonymous, she cannot become an officer at all. If not, would the recruiter dare to put the princess into the military camp? I always feel like this setting is just to satisfy bad taste.

Is the current plot really serious? He obviously has the ability to stop everything, and there is a better way, but he just said that he can pull the reins at any time and fooled him. The plot of Beethoven and others has been slightly modified, but the fate of deafness has been forcibly continued. It's not that readers cannot accept Beethoven's deafness again, but your plot is too rigid, forcibly saying that the world line is closed, including the current death of Marat and Robespierre's bloody policy. As a friend, you can obviously prevent these, but you do nothing. The bloody policy of the Montagnards is completely poisonous to readers, and their talk of a stable rear is really off-putting. At present, only the beginning of the plot is original, and the other plots seem to be written according to history. The part about the construction of the base area that could have been written in depth was brushed off. The part about going to Milan was good, but the description ended abruptly. As the protagonist, he entered the center of the stage of the great revolution, but there was no sense of tension at all. He still looked like a mess, and his image and character were not established at all. He was just a tool man, passively pushing history to continue according to its original trajectory. A dramatic effect once or twice is fine, but writing like this all the time will only discourage readers.

I rewarded you with 100 points, why? Because this author is suspected of being a Shenwu Liuliu trumpet. If you know how to avoid lightning, if you don't know, you can search and you will know why. If the author is not Shenwu Liuliu, then you can explain it. I will apologize immediately, but if my comment disappears directly, it must be Shenwu Liuliu.

The author has entered my blacklist. You don't like my change for three melons and two dates, and I can't stand your eunuch style. Let's break up.

Haha, as expected, it is still the case. A scumbag like Shenwu Liuliu has no professional ethics and still provokes readers to show off. I really regret subscribing to this book. If I had known that the author was that scumbag, I should have known that this book has no ending. In a word, it is so damn unlucky! ! !

I'm just a stupid idiot. Why did I still believe him for a while? When I looked back, I was still the twelfth on the fan list. It really made my face swollen.

After reading the commentaries on Chapter 314, I was relieved to find that everyone was scolding me. A dog cannot change () A witch cannot change his willfulness

As a long-time bookworm, it was gratifying to see everyone arguing about whether the protagonist should become emperor or not. More than ten years ago, almost all historical articles were about princes, generals and ministers, and readers were all very knowledgeable. If it had been that time, the vast majority of readers would have definitely supported the protagonist in proclaiming himself emperor. In recent years, readers who have been severely beaten by society have realized that they are not princes and generals, but ordinary civilians who are ignored in novels. Their positions have changed, and their tastes have also changed. Rather than proclaiming themselves emperor, readers expect the protagonist to become a complete revolutionary. After all, such a protagonist is one of their own. I don't want the protagonist to become emperor. In that case, the core of the book will disappear directly. More than half of the readers will definitely leave, the performance will deteriorate, and the author may become a eunuch. I hope that the protagonist will become a complete revolutionary, sending all the princes and nobles in Europe to the guillotine, and letting the fire of revolution burn throughout every inch of Europe. Think about it, what a magnificent and exciting epic this will be.

What other trumpets does this author have? Let me, Kangkang, be the chief priest, the Supervisor of Ceremonies.

What you do is really hurtful. As a student of mine, I have gradually started to restrain myself from free sex and use my pocket money to support genuine products. Your behavior really hurts my determination to support genuine products. It feels so bad.

{"NickName":"Book Friends 20190815041936568","UserId":337036447} Ah Liu, it's so interesting to let you break through the defense. Don't you want to talk to me for letting me achieve such an achievement?

I'm so stupid, you bastard is so shameless

What impressed me most was the "Incorruptible One" who always wore a green coat.