It All Starts with the Wizard

After reading the small climax from Chapter 16 to Chapter 19, the protagonist Roman took me into a mysterious room, unfolding like a smooth narrative shot, the adventures and secrets, the protagonist's wit and brave expression were all immersive. I even thought of the sense of deja vu when Lilith appeared in the new promotional video of Blizzard's "Diablo 4". I have seen the same scene in "The Secret", but in this article, I think the author is better at describing the details of the interaction between the "head-down zombies" and the environment. This is a non-excellent fantasy, dark and weird online novel. I think maybe the author spent a lot of thought on "conflict setting" and "enjoyable adventures". As long as the author doesn't delay the update, it will be good. It doesn't matter if it has less excitement. The focus is on the relaxed and balanced narrative and the complete story. Because I took it out of context, I found that the author's portrayal of the supporting characters, that is, Gary and Krent, was uneven. Krent was very complete, but Gary was much less. In a group novel, it is not easy to create multiple characters to complement the protagonist. I hope the author can find a balance between the details and the rhythm of the writing, so that the subsequent plot will unfold more smoothly and the readers will have more fun. Story: The story of a man fighting to death, with a strong wit and a wonderful world. This will be a fantasy world that can make people concrete, suitable for readers who like Cthulhu, occultism, Castlevania and other dark styles. Structure: Large-scale descriptions are generated with smooth brush strokes. The author's writing is very strong, but it cannot be like this for the whole article. When there are too many details revealed in the text, the transition will appear to be watery (not really watery, but superficial). This requires the author to make more updates to solve the problem. Aoli gives. Creativity: It should be a group story. This is a popular genre nowadays. If it is wonderfully written, it will become a god. Every character in the story can resonate with it, even the villain. Writing style: Dark, mysterious, and strange. Powerful men from another world arrive in the medieval castle and try their best to kill them. Well, we all know blood is green. (The author actually didn't write "red blood", thumbs up!) Rhythm: There is a small climax in four chapters, leaving half a suspense (the woman with "blood on her lower body"). Too many details and long paragraphs will not be liked by white readers, but will be enjoyed by old book fans. But this also means that there is a lot of foreshadowing and foreshadowing that is not explained in time, so no matter what, there are inevitably some plot loopholes that are a bit inconsistent if you think about it too much. Update: This book has been signed and put on the shelves, updates are stable, and you have subscribed. If you like this type of genre, I think you can follow it with confidence. I suggest saving three chapters is more appropriate. Perception: It took me 40 minutes to read these three chapters once and a half. The only place where I got stuck was because I was not familiar with the characters at the beginning of Chapter 16. Then it read very smoothly and I couldn't skip reading. It had a unique flavor when listening to the book. A good work worth fattening and slaughtering. General comments: Flaws do not hide the advantages. The "thick soup" article that makes you fatter and better for eating has complex and high-end ingredients, and the chef's skills are profound, so you need to wait patiently. The author also mentioned the problem of structural development, and suggested that it is okay not to fill in the small holes, but to grasp the main line and highlight the protagonist's story. 😁

The writing is very good, why are the recommendation votes decreasing?

It looks good for now, I'll give you the vote. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I was disgusted when I saw the woman who wouldn't kill her. The protagonist is being hunted by the church. The other party wants to kill the protagonist, and then runs away without killing the other party?

The so-called Cthulhu is just that the Americans who deceived themselves found that they did not have any philosophical reliance and ideological depth. In the increasingly frequent international exchanges, their philosophical level was repeatedly attacked by various civilizations, especially for the Republican Debate. No matter how they demonstrated it, the correctness and advancement were increasingly clear. They began to doubt themselves and evade themselves, creating the Chaos Escape series [Cthulhu]

Ah, it's been a long time since I've seen a Western fantasy that I like so much. I'll keep chasing it. I'm more interested in Lancelot's knights. The male protagonist should become enemies with them in the future [? The plot is quite attractive, and there is nothing toxic about it for me. The annoying female supporting character is killed after she has taken advantage of it, which is great, I love it. The male protagonist was a bit miserable in the early stage. I feel so distressed. I am just waiting for the day when the male protagonist becomes invincible.

If it weren't for dark novels, some people said that this book is OK. I really missed this book and have already tried it. It's completely OK.

I've only seen Chapter 24. Everyone in the town is dead, and I don't know why? I don't know what forces will come to investigate? The protagonist just stayed in the town, smoking and drinking, and what was even more disgusting was getting drunk. When I wake up, I have to redeem myself and comfort myself.

I couldn't stand watching the beginning. I couldn't stand the unscrupulous dark wind. He actively persecutes others and then gets benefits. He is a refined egoist, so it is normal to have this score.

I read the introduction, then looked at the table of contents, and found a problem. The introduction said that the masters of the world are knights and the divine power, especially wizards, and then said that the whole world is actually the pasture of wizards. This is a bit contradictory. It is not fun to read the table of contents until the main character has not been exposed to the wizarding world. This may be the reason why this book is not popular.

Make decisions before taking action/Cigar Guest/Be a low-key person and do things in a low-key manner/

After coming out of the small town, I didn't know what to do. The quality has dropped significantly, and when will the world of The Witcher unfold?

I don't know if the author noticed that the chapter reviews plummeted after the protagonist left the small town. Your twist was too hard and rough. See you soon (I thought it was just another book)

The author is a data genius. There are only a few thousand residents in the town in the first ten chapters. Those with more than 20 brothers can only be considered slightly famous. Then there are more than fifty of the thousands of small town patrol members, divided into ten teams, not counting the private security guards who are about the same. As for the protagonist, one of the ten teams divided into about fifty people, there is the protagonist, Silen and a few young team members, and Les and a few older team members. . . What is this number? Positive 1 or zero?

Um, I hope the author can see that a healthy civilization is at least white on the surface. A place of inheritance like a special school is definitely to protect the seedlings, because it involves issues of inheritance and civilization progress. Anyone who cannot be a single person and is civilized must abide by the rules of the group. Since the rules of the group must be abided by, inheritance must be taken seriously. The system of wizards is the science of change. The family system does not pay attention to the growth of the new generation. If the older generation dies and the new generation cannot take over, the civilization will regress. It is most outrageous that some geniuses will be strangled in the cradle. Do you think any country will kill potential scientists now? It is too late to train them. The more top talents, the better. Research-oriented geniuses are dead, and conspiracy-type idiots have taken over. This is a common problem among all wizards. Civilization must be crushed openly, rather than relying on conspiracy and trickery to win. Maybe conspiracies can take advantage at the same civilization level, but a civilization lacking top talents will not be able to develop as fast as a civilization with a large number of talents, and it will easily be crushed by the civilization level. This is my reaction after reading a lot of wizard novels. The author can read it but don't let me influence you.

A super good-looking Western fantasy novel with basically no poison (the only poisonous point is not valid). The main character is a dark and selfish character. It is better than some assembly-line cool novels. This dark novel is really hard to find, and it is even harder to find a dark novel that doesn't kneel down and lick the heroine. This novel is also a eunuch. Even if you are a eunuch, you can't deny that this novel is good.

Um, is this introduction serious? I felt so embarrassed and was successfully persuaded to leave.

I have read more than forty chapters so far. How can I put it in words? It's hard to put it into words. I feel constipated. The first dozen or so chapters are pretty good, but then the fights just keep on going. It's very different from the wizard-style painting style, and it's irrational. Moreover, the power levels are very vague, like Naruto... After reading this, I'm not a goblin.

It feels a bit like a child playing with a machete. His strength is not enough to allow him to walk a tightrope on the edge of a crisis. However, he likes to write like this again and again. When he is rubbed, it turns gray and his bones are shattered when touched. It feels very inconsistent. Moreover, he is easily killed and injured on a large scale, but only one of him survives, ha! She doesn't give any sleazy development, she just likes to get hard on her suddenly. It looks quite unexpected, but it doesn't look good, it really doesn't look good 🙂

It feels like a protagonist who relies on various chances and coincidences to survive and make breakthroughs.

There are already 300 pictures, and I haven't broken through to become an official wizard yet. I need to write more than a thousand pictures for this book.

There is no heroine, sorry to bother you. It's even more disturbing.

There are no major flaws or flaws in the first few chapters, and there are basically no major mistakes. Why are there so few votes? Is it that people don't like this type of game anymore?

I have absolutely no feeling for Cthulhu-style wizards. They are basically out of the human category. Not only are they ugly, they also have only the same abilities. They are vastly different from mage practitioners.

After reading dozens of chapters, this is the first time I have seen such a shaky wizard.

After more than a month of rest, are you feeling better?

Under what circumstances why was the book completed?

In fact, the fighting is well written, but the characterization is very toxic.

There has been no update for 5 days. Is it useless? 🥵

Good! Great book! A reward of 500 starting coins has been given. The author should continue to work hard and finally find a book that matches his taste.