I Use Onmyoji to Subvert Naruto

Author, you replaced the power of Onmyoji with spiritual power, and the power of monsters with demon power. Why do you still use chakra? You wrote that the protagonist of Onmyoji should use the power of Onmyoji. If you use chakra, the protagonist is a ninja, but a ninja wearing the skin of Onmyoji.

How to say it Just like cold weapons and hot weapons, I can bring cold weapons into the era of hot weapons. But in this era, hot weapons have the final say, and cold weapons are only auxiliary The same principle applies to "Onmyoji System VS Ninja System" since it wants to subvert the entire ninja system. Then the Onmyoji system must be inherently higher than the ninja system, rather than being equal to each other. Especially when I saw the protagonist learning ninjutsu and other things to improve his strength, I really couldn't understand it. If the strength of Onmyoji can be improved by learning Ninjutsu, then the entire system is simply a system of Onmyoji assisting ninjas. The core is still the ninja system, which is a complete subversion. To truly enhance the strength of the Onmyoji system, one should develop its own unique spiritual system. Cooperate, fight, and develop new abilities with shikigami. Even the same shikigami has unique abilities that can be coordinated, trained, and created by different masters. Instead of learning chakra and ninjutsu to improve strength, what else is it called an onmyoji? How do onmyojis, especially those without ninja qualifications, improve their strength? By slowly improving their physical fitness? Finally become an alternative version of taijutsu ninja? Especially the various knowledge about onmyoji, the protagonist should spread it and take root in this world. About the protagonist's drawing of cards is all provided by the time conversion of students who practice the Onmyoji system, then the protagonist should vigorously develop the Onmyoji culture. Open schools and recruit students from all over the world. Instead of just showing off in the mountains If the protagonist wants the entire Onmyoji system to flourish, he should teach his students well. Instead of relying on random fabrications of Yin-Yang escape theory, he truly teaches various knowledge of Yin-Yang masters. Let students go out and train new students instead of playing behind closed doors. The most important thing is that the protagonist's strength is really rubbish, at least he started as a jounin. Otherwise, if you want to play your sister's subversion of the world? Even if you don't have all your hair, you will be slaughtered by ninja victims in minutes or locked up and handed over to the shikigami. What's more important is that readers are really not in the mood to watch the protagonist develop strength from scratch.

A very strange book. Strange setting, strange protagonist, strange plot. The first few chapters contain all kinds of lofty ideas and lofty ideals. As a result, after meeting Zabuza, his IQ was eaten by a dog. In the blink of an eye, the character and main plot established by the three golden chapters were overturned. The further you go, the more inexplicable it becomes.

When I saw Chapter 166 and the title of Chapter 167, I lost the desire to read any more. From the beginning to the present, the protagonist has been repeating the process of "pretending--being hanged--escaping from death". Originally, this subject could be written about farming, recruiting disciples, accumulating strength, and then breaking out and becoming king. Or focus on the little onmyojis who have been given power and write about the mastermind behind the scenes. It would be a bad idea to write a pretentious and slap-in-the-face story, where the protagonist will defeat the ninja world all the way. But the author insisted on writing the conventional fantasy routines of ten years ago, and tried to use a little bit of any style. The result is that now it is neither fish nor fowl. Every time the protagonist pretends to be awesome, but within two chapters he is beaten until he vomits blood and I am speechless... And then starts to repeat the routine of "pretend to be awesome - get slapped in the face", please be the protagonist. If you want to write a pretentious article, don't let the protagonist always be disgraced and slapped in the face. If you want to write a story about a weak person gradually becoming stronger, don't always describe how handsome and charming the protagonist is, and how many people admire him. One second he was like the calm and self-possessed Chu Xuan, and the next second he turned into Zheng Zha, the hairless chimpanzee who charged into battle and vomited blood and fought hard. It was really uncomfortable to watch.

I feel like there are too many descriptions of the protagonist, and the descriptions are very strange. It looks so embarrassing 😥 And why does Onmyoji use chakra?

A village is so popular that it really belongs to you.

The most poisonous point of this book is: your great Onmyoji system rewards pig's knuckle ninjutsu and chakra;

I can only say that the writing style is too bad. The idea is good but the writing style is too bad.

Why do you need chakra...

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C Hahaha, Kakashi made me laugh within five seconds of the introduction hahh

The writing is very good, and it's not like other Onmyoji novels. It's really good. Come on.

There are always inexplicable plots that appear once or twice, but I can still watch them. If I keep engaging in plots that have nothing to do with Naruto, I just give up.

My contribution points alone are greater than those of the entire circle🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

In fact, the soul of a ninja can be captured and refined into a shikigami, which can achieve an effect similar to turning around.

It feels weird 😅, a bit embarrassing after watching it

Author, don't be lazy, should you add more updates on weekends 😏

When writing about Onmyoji, just write about Onmyoji. If he becomes a ninja and has no blood, he is still a waste. The rhythm should be well controlled and don't keep adding water to the story.

Do you remember where you died in vain?

After finishing this book, the author can write a novel about the profession of samurai in Naruto or Japanese monks. Nowadays, Naruto fan novels are all about ninjas.