This Overlord Is Clearly Incredibly Powerful, Yet Far Too Cautious

Too much nonsense!! And overly silly conversations just seem ridiculous and stupid!

To be honest, I think this book is a poisonous weed. I won't go into details, but that's my assessment.

Fine, you cut it. Why complain about the environment being bad and not daring to write, or about poor grades? Everyone wants everything to go smoothly; is that even possible? Don't you think about how to write better?

This is just filler, nothing much to say. The premise is good, but the writing is clearly weak, with tons of unnecessary dialogue and a forced attempt at showing off – awkward. It feels like a completely different author; is this the quality of a level 5 author?

The protagonist's character design is disgusting, and the system is idiotic. It's fine if you don't compete for supremacy, but your reasons for not competing are ridiculous, or rather, disgusting. Also, was the protagonist a popular celebrity in his original world? He must have had a ton of stupid fans.

Is this the start of focusing on writing this book?

I don't see what this has to do with being cautious.

How come there are only two thousand copies of this military novel left? How many were actually cut?

A bit too pale... 😒😒

How could the author forget about the training corps? Wasn't the training corps' job to set an example for the protagonist's army?