The All-Round Literary Soldier

The author offers some advice: I'm an active-duty soldier, and I've never seen a recruit in basic training dare to hit their squad leader—at least I haven't. The military operates on a system of obedience to superiors. You can express different opinions after the task is completed, but you can't contradict your superior when they assign tasks.

Dude, the scenario of a store looking down on you for buying a computer is really pointless. It's unlikely to happen in real life. No business turns away customers. It's not like you're the only one selling computers. There used to be stories about people being looked down on for buying cars. Regardless of whether you buy or not, if a big store gets a customer complaint, it's a very serious matter. Please use some common sense when you write things.

Seriously, I can't stand it anymore. The title is "Artistic Soldiers," and while writing military novels and composing military songs is fine, writing albums for celebrities is ridiculous. What's the difference between this and those other entertainment novels? Just a soldier's guise? And then there's the cell phone thing...

I found that the author wrote about an idiot.

Being manipulated by a system to the point where you can't even claim all the rewards. Giving only 15 out of 1000 reward points and then consoling yourself that you understand the system and are just giving it a little treat. Extremely toxic... A sure way to quit.

I've read up to chapter 155. The protagonist has completed so many missions assigned by his superiors—killing robbers, capturing fugitives and drug dealers, and offering so many suggestions for military reform—yet his superiors haven't given him any recognition? After all that, he's still just a corporal. Does the military not even have a clear system of rewards and punishments?

I can't take it anymore. I initially liked the subject matter, but the author is just too... Well, never mind, swearing isn't nice. Goodbye.

I won't say much, it's toxic and full of old tropes. Even buying a computer gets you looked down upon, I can only laugh. The corporal character just seems to have a screw loose. And that system—if I could rate it, I wouldn't give it even half a star.

After reading over 400 chapters, I'm a bit taken aback. It's understandable for a soldier to develop the economy and start companies, but starting an arms company is baffling. Doesn't the protagonist have enough money with so many companies? What's a soldier doing starting an arms company abroad? Is he planning a rebellion? Or is he trying to steal business from the country? Are you just going to use any random proxy to fool them? Do you think the national intelligence agencies are idiots?

Are you sure you can write the whole "Bright Sword" story? Aren't you afraid of being attacked if you write the later parts?