I Refuse This Time Travel.

After looking at the first few dozen pictures, I feel pretty good. The pig's trotter IQ is online, the memes are just right without getting boring, the subject matter and writing style are also good, and there are no typos. (Complaining: The villain is too standard, there is no suspense at all)

After reading almost thirty chapters, I can see that there are huge problems with the system. The protagonist's IQ is online when it comes to small things, but not at all when it comes to big things. I just can't understand why I'm going back to Bucheng? Isn't it nice to find a place to retreat and upgrade now that I have money and skills? Why do I insist on going back to Bucheng, a place of right and wrong? Especially when I go back to the Bai family, I can't understand? The protagonist? Isn't he the fake second young master of the Bai family? Is the Bai family related to the protagonist? Is it not good to use this fake death to escape? The training system is the biggest problem 1. Hot weapons kill cold weapons, and they can't even kill one level higher. It all depends on the Yin people to win. Although they are both cultivation systems, the methods used to perform them are different, so the power must be very different The power of moves similar to those used by top-notch techniques and those used by third-rate people must be very different. I just can't figure out how I can still fight half as well. How can we differentiate between hot weapons and cold weapons? 2. Don't just report your level. If I have a higher level, I will win. If it's 3.4 Levels higher, I'll forget about it. Are you so confident that you are so advanced? The most important thing is that you, the author, have designed the world and you seem to believe in this rule. It's a waste of time, let's report the level. Forget it about low-level automatic suicide 3. In all the previous bombardments, the protagonist didn't say anything about consumption. Yang Zhi shouted that he was out of mana after ten breaths of appearance? By the way, the monkey's mana consumption level has a way to fill the hole that was not set before. In other words, we deliberately impose restrictions on the protagonist, fearing that the protagonist will collapse the system in seconds. But you should explain this from the beginning instead of mentioning it now. Give readers a feeling of "I have taken off my pants, waiting for you to show off. Now you do this to me"? Who will see it and who will be angry Actually, I think the most important thing is that you, the author, have overly downplayed the power of thermal weapons and forcibly mixed the two into one system. A distinction should be made between the protagonist's thermal weapon system and other training systems in reality. Otherwise it would be really frustrating

​​The previous setting was very attractive 🙂 at first, but later on, the power system was messed up, needless to say, the old routine? It is no different from the white text before System Streaming. How can you draw your hot weapon? I didn't say anything. You refined falsehood into reality and created life. Do you have your own consciousness? Absolute control will not betray yourself? I don't know if you explained it later, and I didn't read it. I just saw more than 20 chapters and was poisoned to death And you are not a member of the Bai family, are you still addicted to it while pretending? Why don't you just pretend to be dead and leave the Bai family? Regarding the golden finger of the protagonist, I thought, for example, the Monkey King, in the first chapter, I originally thought that it could possess the protagonist, form a shadow, and then use the ability and time of the mythical character according to the protagonist's spiritual power, the seventy-two transformation skills of the Monkey King, etc., You just let them be your thugs? The setting of the power system is extremely rigid at first glance 🙂 The more precious something is, the greater the blessings it will receive. Haha, why don't you set them as high and low as the starting point? Difference in potential? (The weirdness, level, and potential of the ability have nothing to do with it. It all depends on your own development and use.) The protagonist's thing is given rules, and the rules for the protagonist's refining the fake to become real are very strong 🙂 And according to what you wrote, there shouldn't be many geniuses in your world. The more precious the thing, the greater the blessing. So what about some geniuses? There is nothing very precious, they have been promoted to a high level, so how should you write it? How should we fight with those disciples from big and aristocratic families? Did you eat your original setting after writing it? Isn't it okay to write the strength and weakness of the rules directly? Cultivation is equal to energy. How to use what you get after receiving blessings? Is it not good to rely on understanding, imagination, and understanding? The greater the blessing, what you get is written as a powerful and incredible ability, but you still have to rely on yourself to use it, just like the protagonist's ability. If you change it to someone who is very proficient in machines, he can play tricks for you I will just give my opinion (don't spray)

Seeing Liangshan written by the author reminded me of a book called Niangshan 108

How can I watch enough for 10 minutes?

When I saw the world consciousness tricking the protagonist, I knew I couldn't read this book.

Spirit? ..... The one with Asakura Ye?

I refuse time travel, but the plug-ins offer too many 😃

The writing is inexplicable from the beginning.

It feels okay at the beginning, but the further you look at it, the less attractive it becomes.

The author himself said that he was crazy about it, so I won't read it.

Hopefully it won't be the same as this book. . . There are too many pitfalls and I want to write too much, but it's hard to get involved and add them in. It feels so boring. Come on this time, you are following the last book. . . . . See the embarrassment. .

It looks fine, but the update is a bit slow. I don't know if I should save it again.

I originally wanted to vote for the recommendation, but then I remembered that the author is not a woman, and she is also a foot-picking man, so I decided not to vote for it.

It would be like that if the protagonist married Liu Tang. 😜

To have a good time travel, just travel through it! Why did you have to travel through thousands of worlds in the end? If you can't defeat it, just travel across the world. When I came back, I wrote it all badly and gave it up.