Fantasy Advent: Mechanic

When writing about female supporting characters, just write about supporting female characters. Can you not be so vicious? Can Xiao An, the protagonist next to her, be more sensible? She gets jealous and gets angry from time to time and makes her own decisions. At first glance, she is a troublemaker. She should have been allowed to receive lunch together with her father in the first place and be poisoned to death.

I am the author Regarding your feedback, I will reply here. Many of you didn't see the back, and you just slandered me here, saying how disgusting the plot was, how you vomited, and so on. As for the people around the protagonist of the novel, the two sisters Wang Ruyuan have left the protagonist's side a long time ago and followed her sister. Let's talk about Xiao An again. How should I put it, I didn't portray it well. I originally planned to write a shield around the protagonist. She is an eight-year-old girl and the only relative the protagonist has. Her father died at the hands of the same kind, so is it normal to be hostile to people who are close to the protagonist? And her father is a hermaphrodite. People who are close to red are red, and those who are close to ink are black. Isn't it normal for her to be a little bit weird? But you all can't stand it. I have deleted this character and replaced it with artificial intelligence_Meowth, which is used for daily life and guiding branch plots. That's all. I hope that more people will not give one-sided definitions and make malicious speculations here after reading the beginning that does not suit their own feelings. Some people even think that the heroine is Wang Ruyuan's. Do I have any inclinations? The most I've ever had is one line that expresses the protagonist's attitude toward her character. Finally, I am a newbie, and I welcome everyone to express their opinions. However, if you do not understand the situation and make random comments and define behaviors, I will not reply next time. Thank you 🙏

It seems that a doomsday novel must have a few beauties at the beginning to be able to continue. It won't work without it. 😰😰

Talking about learning from Super Mechanic Not only depends on the layout and writing style, but the most important thing is that there is no female protagonist in the early stage. There are not many authors who can write emotional plots well. Why do they all make this mistake?

I have a suggestion for the author. The main highlight of The Super Mechanic is the various wonderful characters with distinct personalities. If you, the author, do not have that kind of skill and cannot write rich and distinctive characters, then you will start with machines. More novel mechanical soldiers and more novel high-tech weapons give people a refreshing feeling. After all, many of the super machines in the later Super God Mechanics have actually gradually faded away.

She says she doesn't want it, but her body is very honest. She can't live without hypocrisy. The native uu nurse doesn't want it. She insists on picking up a broken shoe. She has great NTR potential! Does the author have female votes? If so, how many neighbors do you need next door?

The author's performance of this book is not good. In addition, due to the National Day break, readers have lost some time. If the author wants to write a book, I suggest that he finish this book. Just finish it with 2 million words. Just treat it as gaining popularity and qualifications for the next book. If you don't want to write a book, just go to Eunuch

If the author doesn't know how to write about women, just focus on the main plot. You can also learn how to write in the get-away style.

Don't worry about female supporting characters, you may not be able to control them. Focus on settings, fantasy worlds, and career-related issues, and there's a high chance you won't overturn it. And this female supporting role is useless and keeps causing trouble.

The explanation is too weird, why bother making a system announcement? Special explanation of the game system? Help? You can tell at a glance that he keeps opening back doors for the protagonist. It's too obvious for newbies.

This book is very good. I have followed it. I hope the author will talk to you soon. Also, can you clearly explain the role of the potential point?

I can't stand that Xiao An anymore.

The protagonist is a person with a bottom line. He will save someone when he is harmed. Even if he doesn't save him at first, he will save him for various reasons later. There will also be a little follower behind the protagonist. That little girl's father is dead. That little girl should be particularly talented or have some other characteristics that make the protagonist take her with him whether in public or private life. He also saved a strong woman who was said to be a drag, but she must have turned the tables again later. How outstanding was this strong woman, so that the protagonist valued her again, and then took her with her? This kind of protagonist is very principled at first glance, and does not steal, rob or touch. He is really a doomsday Lei Feng. He will save anyone who is in trouble, usually girls, and those experiences will make the protagonist very angry. For example, the girl is raped by someone, and then the protagonist, you know, drags her to join the protagonist's team. In the front, the strong woman is treated as a weirdo, and then she is rescued and followed by the protagonist. This kind of story is really common. On the surface, it is not a drag, but in fact, all the talents in the back are added. In the first few pictures, it looks like she has brains, but in fact she is a hypocritical virgin bitch.

Mechanics are engineers, not scientists, pure researchers. Top mechanics like top engineers only have a small amount of research and development capabilities. As for asking them to study basic science and technology and publish papers, they have no idea. Their main business is to look at drawings and make things.

There are almost 150 chapters in this book. It's time for a heroine. The heroine should be strong or have a profession that matches the protagonist. For example, a driver or a weapon warrior. Just don't be a vase. It's best to keep one to four heroines, not too many. After all, everyone has basically read enough harem books. {"NickName":"My Kun is at full level","UserId":342583738}

I feel like the female supporting role is just a troublemaker

Can anyone tell me if Wang Ruyuan appears behind me? If so, I will leave.

Author, please update more, but there are so few.

In fact, I think that girl Ru should wait until she recovers from her injuries and let her fend for herself. Where's Xiaoan? To transfer her to a new job where she can survive would be an act of benevolence and righteousness. Then it's fine to walk alone. Later, the author made it okay for the two women to disappear and disappear. To be honest, the female nurse handled the beginning quite well. The protagonist lured the monster and took her to a safe place to leave. She was both humane and rational.

In fact, I think this novel is okay. Although it is a bit poisonous in some places, it is definitely not as bad as other reviews say.

Is Andariel so miserable? It was gone right after it came out?

I want to ask, where did that little girl go? Did I miss something?

It's been a long time since I've seen a good work like this where fantasy comes to reality, come on! ! ! ! ! ! Don't enter the palace!

A very good novel, recommended by Liangcao. Dimension advent novels, with systems to defeat monsters and explode equipment. Occupation: A very meaty mechanic who can manufacture various high-tech equipment, robot armies, conquer various dimensional worlds, and obtain resources.

The background of the character directly persuades me to quit. After all, to be a mechanic, you have to understand mechanics. Any car repairman can become a top mechanic. Are all the students and scholars who really do research and tinker with mechanics waste? Rely on the system template and rub it. Do you really think it's a game?

I've been keeping it for a week and I've updated a few pictures. It's not enough to read. I'll add more soon. 30 Pictures together look great.