Brilliant as the Sky

"Brilliant Sky" actually doesn't have many characters, but each one is very distinct... The pig-nosed guy as the savior was used to create a lot of foreshadowing... It led to many main-line tasks, "Little Lingyan is looking for her parents", "What is the strange red ghost star", "The savior is looking for a host", etc. ... One thing I find interesting here is that the male and female protagonists always have changing personalities due to various reasons... For example, the male protagonist is either a woman or a child (transforming into a child), and the female protagonist is either a maid or the male protagonist's little fangirl. It is quite interesting to deliberately reverse their personalities. Hmm... And there are actually some settings that I quite like, such as the snipe and the clam fighting, such as the Wangchen Inn... Of course, the most important thing is that the various descriptions of sunny days are really great! ! ! ! Bangshakaraka! Bangshakaraka! Come on sunny days☀️

The late 1,000-word review is here, please sign for it. I have already read several chapters, but every time I write a 1,000-word review, I have to read it from the beginning again. I write it while reading. So far, I have only written two or three 1,000-word reviews. ٩('ω')و. Also, I don't feel comfortable writing a review for a book with this subject matter🙃 1. The introduction doesn't need to be so "comprehensive" about the protagonist, give the reader some room for imagination! Then there is the final early stage ~ middle stage ~ ending ~ well, I suggest it would be better to remove it, because it is really unnecessary. Finally, the introduction can be streamlined, it's up to you! (My humble opinion🤫) 2. In the first chapter, the world view is emerging. It is relatively grand at the moment, but it may be hard on you later, because writing a book with such a big world view requires not only high writing skills, but also high requirements for logic, persistence, etc. Of course, this assumes that you are not in too much of a rush at the end of this book! Instead of scribbling the ending, the effect and story will be better if you tell it slowly step by step. Just practice writing. It may be helpful for future books٩( 'ω' )و. Then the heroine, um, feels too aloof and cold. Let's classify this book! To use one word to describe it as "nondescript", I feel that it is mixed with many other styles, such as fantasy, Western, science fiction, etc., Etc., All of which are more or less a bit abrupt. But like you said, those who understand will naturally understand, and there are all kinds of weird things waiting to be unlocked later, right? (The two of us also discussed this at the beginning, haha, is it an old matter again😂) 2. The encounter between the male and female protagonists is a bit abrupt, and it feels very awkward, and there are problems with the logic, but these are small things, but I still choose to point them out. Han Xiao's strength and Lingyan... Weren't women strong and men weak in the early days? A spirit girl and a proton, it should be obvious who is stronger and who is weaker! 3. Chapter 6, I laughed, haha. Both of them are tsundere, but why does it feel like Lingyan is being overpowered by Han Xiao? Now comes the interesting part! Let's wait and see... I guess who will have the last laugh, I'll bet on Han Xiao! Intuition is reliable? 🤭 4. That rule is a bit strange (●°u°●)​", but the meaning of favoring boys over girls is also expressed to the extreme, and the "normality" in life is introduced into the story. I like this very much. It reveals the reality and likes it (｡ò ∀ ó｡). There are really too many older generations with this kind of thinking, and as far as I know, all I see is that women favor boys over girls! I don't know what the reason is... It's more of a feeling of heartache and disgust! I can't change anything, I can only try my best to deal with the people and things in my position and make them develop in a good direction. 5. The women's clothes came, and my mother burst into laughter. The TV series about Li Yifeng and Ma Tianyu slowly came to mind📺. 6. Okay, the time has come, invest, come on! When I wait for your success, I look forward to... 7. When snipe and clam compete, who will be the fisherman? Fortunately, I still remember the text from elementary school and have not forgotten it. Thank you for strengthening my impression, haha. Coke It's a bit of a joke. 8. It is recommended to deepen the contrast between the ugliness and beauty of human nature, and make the contrast stronger. This may be another surprise point, there will be unexpected effects, and there will be no shortage of attractions. 9. Who is the fisherman? Maybe there isn't one at all, or maybe it's just "you", who knows. I like the daily fights and bickering between the male and female protagonists, well, it's very interesting. One of the highlights is that the two people, one cold and one "hot", complement each other. This is well written and very interesting. The writing is (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. 10. Chapter 12, now that you have seen this, let's make a short summary! Overall, I like the sense of immersion that the description of the environment gives me the most, followed by the plot, such as the snipe and clam, the preference for boys over girls... And then the male and female protagonists. Overall, the storyline is smooth, and the branch plots are also unique, but a bit bland and not amazing enough (actually, I am wondering if my requirements are too high 😂 haha, I will review it myself first, 😝) 11. Don't look down, next is my monologue time. Lingyan's identity is still unknown, but I guess you have already made arrangements, or you are still doubting, but just take your time, take your time. Han Xiao! As a proton, there is no need to talk about his life experience, and he is also one of the babies sent in. Being able to face life like this is a great courage in my opinion. Dare to resist, and go looking for it, calm and not lacking in good looks... It went astray (●°u°●)​". The little wolf dog is pitiful (ಥ_ಥ). These are the only characters I remember in the article. As for the second female lead, I don't have a deep impression, or maybe I don't remember it! I can see that you are a cheerful and lively girl who likes sunshine~sunny days~ Then I wish that the sunshine under three centimeters is yours, and spend every moment with tenderness and beauty. On a sunny day, free and unrestrained, fearless, out of the dust... Is a symbol of beauty in the world, represents everything, and has interpreted everything. But I also know that maybe you are not like this, maybe you are "pretending"? But no matter what, I will always be with you. I believe that at this moment, we can all shine brightly. Shine in this unyielding world, smile (*^ω^*) Up to this point, there should not be a thousand words! I... Tried my best🙃. Finally, take care of yourself, believe in yourself, and wait and look forward to the moment when you become a blockbuster. To borrow that sentence: Dare, you are shining brightly... PS: It took more than three hours, I hope I live up to it. Come on ٩( 'ω' )و and encourage each other.

Loss of chapter evaluation ability. . . The new book is really good to read, I'm looking forward to it. I think the heroine is a bit naughty 😁

The writing style is very good and very contagious, and people are drawn into it unconsciously. Moreover, it is different from the beginning of other fantasy novels, which makes people feel very novel. Hope to continue working hard. 😄😄

I just want to say that in the first chapter, the key point is to persuade someone to quit, the 'savior'. I have seen that big bosses in fantasy movies are all addressed as "Zun" and "Emperor". Savior? ! The biggest start? ! Did you go to the wrong set? ! Then there is the content. Spending so many thousands of words describing the world is not as good as describing it in a few sentences and expanding it when you encounter it. Finally, there is the protagonist. It's okay not to explain the background, but the character must be clearly written, right? ! She has nothing, she looks like a tool~

A new book has been opened. It is purely for love. I write casually to please myself. My ability is limited and I only use it to practice writing

Writing is more or less like realizing a dream, and often every word and sentence is carefully crafted. Giving up your time for other things to code is enough to show your love. Maybe your writing style is not mainstream, but at least you tried; maybe you can't meet the unified standards, but at least you tried hard. The so-called mainstream or not, maybe AI has a standard. I believe that real people will have different opinions when reviewing it! In this case, we must never forget our original intention and stay true to our original intention. (I'm sorry for posting this out of the blue, because I have recently seen some books that are almost the same, with different covers, and are a bit tired of aesthetics. Some of them have been replaced many times and have learned to meet the standards, but I feel that since we want to introduce new things, we should innovate.) I may still follow the existing ones. Some writing styles, write hard, because I like the ancient style of writing, and I also like to read the ancient style of writing. If you also like it, you are welcome to leave ❤️ For the rest of you, whether it is a dream come true or not, let's work hard together 🌹

Change the author name and cover! Original name: Zero Degree Binary, current name: Ichishang Sunny

Sunny Day ranks fourth on the newbie list ✊

It's another day when I don't want to write anything, so I come here to complain on a sunny day.

Sunny day, blue sky and white clouds ฅ(*°ω°*ฅ)*

First post: 🌸The title of this book is a homophone for the male and female protagonist! (Ling-ling Xiao-xiao) is also a metaphor for a love story in which the male and female protagonists are as bright as Lingxiao, because Lingxiao is the name of a flower. 🌸This book was originally called Dead Ghost Couple. The male protagonist calls the female protagonist Ghost Girl, and the female protagonist calls the male protagonist Dead Guy (This is at the back, please be patient.) Later, I felt that the word "death" on the cover was not good, so I changed it. 🌸The pace of this book should not be slow, but I am working hard to revise and improve the first three chapters. I welcome your opinions. All kinds of opinions are welcome, thank you♬(ノ゜∇゜)ノ♩ Second post: Hanxiao is 188cm tall, cynical, rude and kind-hearted, with average skills and a decent brain. He is currently in the jungle stage. Please wait patiently. The main reason is that the women's clothing is too beautiful, and one beauty covers all the flaws. Lingyan 173, (so tall that the author is envious,, վ^վ,,), aloof and casual, prefers beautiful men, an all-powerful little witch, a great goddess descended from the sky, a mage and archer, and can provide assistance when necessary! The old lolita from A Mian 163 is lively and cute, but has an unforgettable past. Is she an assassin? If he doesn't exist, he's just an incompetent mage at best. Fu Nian is 185 years old. He is a super cute little wolf cub with a black belly. He is good at being a shooter. Is this what you think?

I like to read romance. The author writes well. I collected it first and will update it later. 🙂

Hehe (*°∀°)=3, here I come

I'm here too, come on, duck 😃😃😃✌️✌️🌹

By the way, will it be signed and put on the shelves?

I recently discovered that... Writing is really difficult. Those who can persevere are little angels☀️(*°∀°)=3 Then the question is, this summer vacation I...

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I have read all the updated ones and think they are well written. The story of the alien continent is quite fantasy. Now that I have seen this, I feel that the heroine has a good design, she has the image of a cold and spiritual girl, but also has a hint of cunning. Da Da also laid some foreshadowing in the front, and the writing style is also very smooth. However, I think the introduction could be better written and more attractive. Come on, work hard to update ＾0＾~

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival! May all your wishes be fulfilled, all your wishes be fulfilled, all your expectations be fulfilled, and all your thoughts may be in the galaxy!

1. The title and introduction of the book are both acceptable. The introduction is really interesting. 👍👍👍 2. The big character is portrayed very well. I confess to the spirit girl, and she feels like a little dragon girl. 3. The writing style is good, very good, delicate and exquisite. 4. It is also very comfortable to read in sections. There is an ancient feeling between the lines, and the flavor of fantasy is also revealed. Come on (✪▽✪) I'm optimistic about you

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival, come on! ! !

The combination of modern intonation and traditional intonation is full of rhythm and rhythm, and the introduction is very contagious and attractive.