Tianyun Liuxuan

Write down your feelings: Firstly, it is rare for Xianxia novels to describe the six realms and beyond. I personally like this theme very much. It is very grand, although I can't see anything from the author's introduction (I suggest the author change the introduction~) Secondly, the beginning of the novel is very suspenseful. If I read it correctly, the male protagonist should not appear until the fifth chapter. What is rare is that the male protagonist is the last one to appear! It's different from the first-come, first-served idea. It's quite novel All in all, it's still recommended. Come on, author.

This book is really easy to bring a person into the environment of the book, and the writing is really good.

I hope I won't write too much later. The front is great and very attractive. Come on.

The writing style and plot are quite good, delicate and smooth, and suspenseful. However, the introduction is too discouraging... I suggest you change it.

Recently, I plan to start the explosive update mode and add updates every day. I plan to finish four volumes and then end it. I would like to thank all the book friends who have read the book. It is my first time to write a book, and there are still many shortcomings. Thank you for your tolerance ❤️ When I finish the book, I will be your long-term book friend. Okay, that's it 🌹

This book is relatively slow to develop, and the male protagonist appears relatively late. Please read it patiently ❤️ No matter whether it is a standalone or not, or what the outcome is, the novel will definitely be completed, and I will insist on finishing it.

Thank you for your support ❤️ Thank you very much. Feel free to comment (reciprocal visits are also welcome!). emmm I will pay attention to the paragraph setting of the works in the following chapters. We are fellow Taoists, so let's work together!

The author's writing is very beautiful, and the details are vividly described. It is rare that the Xianxia series has so much suspense. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง wait for the update

New book released! Welcome to the bowl of "Can Ruo Ling Xiao"~

My thoughts tell me that things must have a beginning and an end, and they must be updated 🙂

Actually finished? Come on big

Let me remind you about the new book 😃😃😃🤭🤭

I came here with great fanfare, but saw it was quiet here, so I silently checked in, clicked likes, and left silently/

Big, come on (ง •̀_•́)งOli!

Oh my god. My sister has finished the book. Throw flowers! Congratulate! Looking forward to the next one!

Come back and visit us, happy May Day 🌹

Looking forward to your new book🌹

Collect it first, prepare to learn it secretly, 😜 and see how the masters describe the narrative, come on!

Wow, this is so awesome! The book cover is so dreamy! ! 😵

Come and take a look. Happy New Year🎉🎉🎉, may all your wishes come true🎆🎆🎆

Wow, I discovered you again The last book was good, and the beginning of this one is also the same. . 😁

Is it because all the chapters don't have chapter names? Give me your opinion First, the introduction is too dirty. I don't mean dirty in that sense, but it's just too complicated to stick together. Second, in fact, I feel that few people use this in current novels Third, to connect with the second one, there are many golden chapters in the backend of writers introducing this. After reading the first chapter and the second chapter, it is very dull. The writing is okay, but it does not make me read. It is not simple, clear and direct enough Now the first three chapters need conflict cheats, or they are jokes.

Personally, I really like this kind of fresh writing style. I feel that Ling Da is very knowledgeable and has a good sense of character substitution. I voted for it. I haven't found anything wrong with the parts I've read. Please keep updating.

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This one is also stuck ~ hahaha

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My interest suddenly peaked in the second chapter! From the caution in the fairy world to the liberation of the mortal nature, the heroine's image is clearly outlined here, and the reader can even understand the difference between the fairyland and the mortal realm at a glance... As for the rhythm of the plot, the foreshadowing of the wedge is also used in the first chapter. A series of descriptions of the heroine's identity are described in the fairyland, and then in the mortal world. The plot is promoted with the description of the heroine's image. I think it is great! I think the possible problem is the text or tone problem that I haven't noticed yet. I will continue to read it and point it out if there is something strange. The book has been collected and the tickets have been submitted, come on! 😁

First of all, I want to praise the author's skill in choosing names. He does not want to choose names that are tacky like many novice novels. The names of the gods in this novel are all elegant. The novel has foreshadowing and twists, which is very attractive for readers to read further. I have collected it and look forward to continuing to update it! Come on!

1. The writing is beautiful, the concept is very good, and the character descriptions are vivid and immersive. 2. The author's description of details is not careful enough, and the use of punctuation marks is a bit lacking. I hope to correct it! 3. The character dialogue is a bit too ordinary.

After reading it, I felt that the writing was good, but the number of words in the chapters was a bit short. The layout is very big, so you need to outline it well, otherwise you will forget something as you write. The plot of the story is still very good. I hope it can be expanded upon more and it would be best if there are twists and turns. This is a good book, please keep on finishing it. Come on! Support! 😁 I hope you can update more often!