The First Witch Ancestor in History

No cp is already a plus, and the writing is so good

The so-called non-CP novels with all male supporting characters are the most disgusting, and they are being sold as dog meat

After reading Chapter 30, there are a few places that are really uncomfortable to watch. Lin Lang made a sneak attack in the middle of the night. After the heroine subdued him, he did not kill him but asked questions. This is understandable, but knowing that the other party has spare power, why not abolish his power (in fact, when asking questions, Lin Lang left if he wanted to, and the protagonist had no choice). Then, knowing that Lin Lang's captor was coming, the heroine had nothing to do with it, but she still asked questions leisurely instead of running away (the heroine was not strong enough. Deal with the matter), and then after the eight people from the opposite side came, they still remained silent and did not explain that they had nothing to do with Lin Lang (even if the heroine ran away at this time, the eight people would only pay attention to Lin Lang and ignore him), then Lin Lang exploded (if he didn't explode, the heroine would be finished), and then Lin Lang was seriously injured. There is no reason to accept people. The people who arrest Lin Lang have been arrested one after another. Accepting him will cause endless troubles (accepting a person who can attack children at will is really unacceptable)

This is the first time I see a novel of this type. Cheers to the author 🙂

The description in the article is messy, and the plot is disgusting. Lin Lang originally wanted to kill the protagonist, but also caused Qingfeng to disappear, but the protagonist still treated him and made him his younger brother? Lin Langhu fakes the power of the tiger, and the protagonist also follows this trick and treats him carefully. Evil, the protagonist of the Holy Mother, please tell me in advance in the introduction. I was very looking forward to it at the beginning. Who knows what the plot will be like later.

It's pretty good to read. The only uncomfortable feeling for me is that the gender of the protagonist is ambiguous. Every time I watch it, I feel that the protagonist is a man because everyone around him calls him "gongzi". The heroine doesn't pretend to be a man and she won't deny it. I understand that in a context where men are superior to women, you may want to hide something, but it's a bit strange to default to being a man in front of your own people. Maybe it will change in the future. After all, the title of the book is "The Witch Ancestor"

Why do I feel that the sentences in this article are not smooth to read? It is so confusing and difficult to read. Is it my problem? 😅

I read ten chapters. The author has many typos, doesn't use pronouns very much, has problems with sentence fragmentation, and the plot transitions are a bit abrupt. The ideas are fascinating, but the reading is not fluent and really puts you off. The author can consider revising the article when he has time. If the article is smooth, maybe he can click on it and upload it 😚

The setting of the heroine's age and body shape is really poisonous Originally 5 years old, now 2 years old, and only two years old But her logic and way of thinking are obviously that of an adult. You want to say that she has traveled through time, but she doesn't know what witchcraft is, and the system thinks she is smart. The God is Schizophrenic, and it's only two chapters short when she leaves the mountain. If she has traveled through time, she shouldn't not know it, and from the 40 chapters I have read, I feel a strong sense of violation. She is too young. I am thinking about how many chapters it would take to write her at the age of 2 at the beginning to make her grow up to the age of fifteen or sixteen in a normal novel, making her feel like she can be immersed in the story.

Sigh~ Why do many people still think that the heroine is a boy after reading more than 210 chapters? The heroine herself also says that she is a boy. Aren't all women grown up? You are 13 years old, you should be able to tell the gender! There are many ways to describe the heroine. Why do I sometimes use "he"? Am I understanding it wrong?