The First Witch Ancestor in History

I listened to the book for 400 hours to write a review I feel that this book is really cold haha First of all, the author's narrative technique is weird, and the sentence fragmentation in the review novel is still strange. I suggest that the audio book is easier to get into (if you can understand it This is a non-CP novel, without any emotional lines About the heroine The heroine is an emotionless existence, and all the emotions she shows are purposeful disguises. She looks like a virgin in the early stage, but in fact she doesn't. The heroine can do it for the sake of faith He can save 100,000 people with his own power, or he can kill 20,000 people in order to avenge his subordinates (some people here may think that the three views are not correct, so please persuade them to retreat) Regarding the plot, the plot pace is relatively fast, and I personally think it is not cruel (no one can assume the perspective of the protagonist) Don't like it), some plots are too fast to understand (? In the early stage, he bossed me around and in the later stage, he was all my little brother The ending was a bit rushed, starting high and going low, but the process was very interesting😍

No cp is already a plus, and the writing is so good

The so-called non-CP novels with all male supporting characters are the most disgusting, and they are being sold as dog meat

This is the first time I see a novel of this type. Cheers to the author 🙂

After reading Chapter 30, there are a few places that are really uncomfortable to watch. Lin Lang made a sneak attack in the middle of the night. After the heroine subdued him, he did not kill him but asked questions. This is understandable, but knowing that the other party has spare power, why not abolish his power (in fact, when asking questions, Lin Lang left if he wanted to, and the protagonist had no choice). Then, knowing that Lin Lang's captor was coming, the heroine had nothing to do with it, but she still asked questions leisurely instead of running away (the heroine was not strong enough. Deal with the matter), and then after the eight people from the opposite side came, they still remained silent and did not explain that they had nothing to do with Lin Lang (even if the heroine ran away at this time, the eight people would only pay attention to Lin Lang and ignore him), then Lin Lang exploded (if he didn't explode, the heroine would be finished), and then Lin Lang was seriously injured. There is no reason to accept people. The people who arrest Lin Lang have been arrested one after another. Accepting him will cause endless troubles (accepting a person who can attack children at will is really unacceptable)

The description in the article is messy, and the plot is disgusting. Lin Lang originally wanted to kill the protagonist, but also caused Qingfeng to disappear, but the protagonist still treated him and made him his younger brother? Lin Langhu fakes the power of the tiger, and the protagonist also follows this trick and treats him carefully. Evil, the protagonist of the Holy Mother, please tell me in advance in the introduction. I was very looking forward to it at the beginning. Who knows what the plot will be like later.

It's pretty good to read. The only uncomfortable feeling for me is that the gender of the protagonist is ambiguous. Every time I watch it, I feel that the protagonist is a man because everyone around him calls him "gongzi". The heroine doesn't pretend to be a man and she won't deny it. I understand that in a context where men are superior to women, you may want to hide something, but it's a bit strange to default to being a man in front of your own people. Maybe it will change in the future. After all, the title of the book is "The Witch Ancestor"

Why do I feel that the sentences in this article are not smooth to read? It is so confusing and difficult to read. Is it my problem? 😅

I read ten chapters. The author has many typos, doesn't use pronouns very much, has problems with sentence fragmentation, and the plot transitions are a bit abrupt. The ideas are fascinating, but the reading is not fluent and really puts you off. The author can consider revising the article when he has time. If the article is smooth, maybe he can click on it and upload it 😚

The setting of the heroine's age and body shape is really poisonous Originally 5 years old, now 2 years old, and only two years old But her logic and way of thinking are obviously that of an adult. You want to say that she has traveled through time, but she doesn't know what witchcraft is, and the system thinks she is smart. The God is Schizophrenic, and it's only two chapters short when she leaves the mountain. If she has traveled through time, she shouldn't not know it, and from the 40 chapters I have read, I feel a strong sense of violation. She is too young. I am thinking about how many chapters it would take to write her at the age of 2 at the beginning to make her grow up to the age of fifteen or sixteen in a normal novel, making her feel like she can be immersed in the story.

Sigh~ Why do many people still think that the heroine is a boy after reading more than 210 chapters? The heroine herself also says that she is a boy. Aren't all women grown up? You are 13 years old, you should be able to tell the gender! There are many ways to describe the heroine. Why do I sometimes use "he"? Am I understanding it wrong?

I'm not going to say whether the heroine's three views are correct. I'll just talk about what I've seen in more than 100 chapters. The heroine saved the lives of more than 100,000 people, and then killed more than 20,000 people for Lin Lang. Whether this counts as a poison test or not, you can see for yourself 🙂

Sometimes it looks a bit jumpy, as if there is a section missing in the middle. There are too many typos that really affect the viewing mood.

When I look at it, I always feel like there are missing words and paragraphs. Is it harmonized?

How should I put it? According to the author's god-level plot, if I practice my writing and sentence segmentation, I feel that I may have more recommendations.

Is the heroine a boy or a girl? Why do others call her Young Master?

Ahhhhh, I love this book so much. I just like the tone. It's hard not to love the ambitious heroine.

Since it's no cp, I'll read it.

See Heguo there. The concept of the book is good and the plot is good, but the author's writing is not strong enough. It doesn't show when it's time to install the pen. When it's time to be moved, the description is too bland.

Although it was a bit confusing when I first read it, there were no twists in many places, and I was confused when I saw it, but then I gradually got used to it. The plot is great, I like it very much, and I wish the author a good success with his next book.

What's important is why you didn't let Qingfeng carry him while he was only two years old and climbed mountains and ridges...

Look good, look good 🌹🌹🌹

The sentences are really not fluent!

I have never seen such a disgusting heroine

I found that the author especially likes to write many male protagonists, but the female protagonist is single. I really like this type of writing.

I finally found you. The author is very excited⊙∀⊙! . You know, I didn't have a mobile phone before, so I used the computer to read novels. After that, I typed a few words, and the book Witch Ancestor came out after a search. But I'm a little sorry. I just read it online. I follow your update speed, one chapter a day, and I'm very moved 😊. Then the website shows the popularity of one person's search, and that's me. You must persevere, I believe your articles will become popular. This text really suits my taste.