Human Bones

Well written, it's rare to see novels like this, but it's just too slow.

The beginning is good, it has the flavor of traditional literature, not like online literature. First-person description allows readers to quickly get involved, but it is also a more difficult type of writing. Fortunately, the author can still do it with a lot of skills. It is also a first-person suspense article, and the setting is also Japan. Looking at the author's big article, it feels vaguely like Murakami Haruki's "Assassination of the Knight Commander". The conflict in the opening chapter is handled fairly well, and it is not as slow as expected, leaving readers with the desire to keep reading. To talk about some shortcomings, the background setting is really... How to put it, a little unclear, or confusing. The Chinese and Fusang at the beginning, I once thought they were ancient times. (Maybe to pass the trial?). Later, the telephone appeared. Well, thinking of the country name in front, I thought it was in modern times. Then Achaishi made a phone call downstairs. It must be a mobile phone, which means it is in modern times. Then... The Eagle Eye Recorder... Is a high-tech product of the future. Overall, it is very good. The author is definitely not a novice author.

The writing is pretty good, few people write suspense anymore.

New works are like a girl who has just started to learn makeup. Although the beginning is inevitably not satisfactory, the makeup will get better and better, and the works will get better and better! Come on, author✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

👍The writing is strong, many paragraphs are wonderful, and the atmosphere is well created. I have collected it.

After some modifications, the content remains unchanged. I just put a few hundred words in the preface, which does not affect reading.

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Come to invest, the author cheers you up

The atmosphere is beautifully rendered! Interesting! Collected! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Is the editor serious? Can't you sign this?

It's very beautiful. It can be seen that the author has checked a lot of information, but the previous parts are a little blurry. Natsuki Castle and sword refining made me think it was ancient times, and then the phone and mechanical electronic eyes made me even more fascinated. But the writing is really good, and the fighting scenes are better than my fantasy writing. Come on! 😁

My computer is broken, so typing on my mobile phone is very slow and I am not used to it, so the updates are not stable, which is sad...

It seems like someone is watching it too? Why not invest in new books?

It's time to save the manuscript and sign the contract. I will update it once a day starting from today. After signing the contract, I will update it at least twice a day. I hope you will know.