
I Am Cultivating Immortality in a Mysterious World
我在诡秘世界中修仙
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 72k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Rules Horror
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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34Chapters
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Xie Xin's new book "They Call Me Uncle Nine 2" is here. I hope book friends will like it.
[Reflections on Shennong's poison experiment]
Pranks such as giving laxatives to one's teacher and even causing the teacher to break his muscles and bones are outrageous. Although after seeing her life experience, one can understand why she is so rude but these "pranks" are too much
I don't like the protagonist in your book very much, but the writing is good. I give you a recommendation vote. I can still recommend it to everyone. But I don't think much of the author. I really haven't written the golden chapter at the beginning. It's almost 20 chapters in, and I haven't released the golden finger practice method yet. It's a bit slow. Watching the plot develop into the original Liaozhai series, the trend of masters recruiting disciples, and the plot you created is a bit too early. The female disciple who likes the protagonist has already made an engagement at home. Her sister is an immortal cultivator, and the person engaged is a powerful and arrogant young master from a wealthy family. The female disciple didn't want to tell her mother anymore. She had been taken over by the protagonist and she was the protagonist's person. Although it felt cliche, it was fortunate that the thing that didn't become a poisonous point was that the protagonist didn't mean it. He really treated her as a disciple. It didn't feel like a college student going to be a tutor for a junior high school student. What a bloody plot, and the arrogant young master didn't directly find someone to kill the protagonist. Instead, he asked the protagonist to go to his mother-in-law's house to explain that the plot was probably conceived by the author. The young master and his apprentice's family all knew the temper of the second lady, so they didn't take it seriously. Hurry up and get on the right track. It's already 20 pictures.
The protagonist's behavior is inexplicable (눈_눈). Why are you pretending to be out of revenge for murder? What's wrong with someone who is not strong enough to stop the outbreak of evil energy and wants to leave? Why didn't I see you stop the villain? Not to mention that the Taoist saved the protagonist's life. Do you think decent people are easy to bully? Besides, no matter how you say that you are alive now, it has something to do with the jade pendant that the Taoist priest took out. If you return it, you will not owe me anything? What three views. Really, it's inexplicable to write since the emergence of immortal cultivators
Holy mother bitch! It's only been 3 years since I traveled through the past. I faced monsters for the sake of my neighbor's children and sacrificed myself to save others.
The characterization problem is serious. The protagonist can turn into a reckless man and a coward. He can be smart and stupid. He has a changeable personality. He has to pretend to take revenge and trample people under his feet without killing them. He insists on letting people rescue him. Instead, he tries to kill the Taoist priest who saved his life and Qinglong who gave him a chance to take revenge. This protagonist is really a "good guy". The supporting character, the young man in white, completely follows the villain template from ten years ago. He acts impulsively and without brains, and kills people when he doesn't like them. To be a genius from a famous family simply insults the reader's intelligence.
Another book destined to hit the streets
Not very good... He was going to die at that time anyway, why didn't Mao kill that jade thing all at once?
I found out that the name has been changed... I can't comment on whether this name is good or not. I can only say that if it was the name that came up, I would never click in.
You and that Ninth Destiny have the same brain circuitry, which is different from ordinary people.
If you don't kill decisively, what kind of immortality can you become? The plot of the protagonist is too bad, and he deliberately abuses the protagonist. I don't know whether he will become a gangster, but our family can't stand it because his temperament doesn't get along with him!
It's okay, let the protagonist have the means to fight the enemy as soon as possible
I almost left this book in the first three chapters
Maybe this is because my brain is not working well, I am a mortal, I want to save the world, I am really invincible, everyone should pretend to be cool before
Warn those who want to watch to have a calm mind
The plot is quite good, but the character created by the author is really emmm, which gives people a very awkward feeling, a feeling that the character is forcibly shaped and then slightly reduced in intelligence.
I think the protagonist is definitely a schizophrenic. Even the protagonist is not well portrayed, let alone the supporting characters. They are just like the mainstream configuration of ten years ago. Now, not only is it unpleasant, but it's also a bit disgusting.
Give me a fair review First of all, the title of this book feels weird to me anyway. I don't understand what a mysterious world is when I write it this way. I feel that this world view is like a Chinese fairy tale, and the mystery is more Western, but it does not affect reading. Second, this early stage is too frustrating and a bit abusive? Personally I feel a little bit. Third, it's chapter 30 and I haven't started cultivating immortality yet, so the pace is slow. The plot is a bit old? Anyway, I can guess most of them. Advantages: The author's writing is good, and I think the characters are quite reasonable, but it may lack some excitement. Well, so far I haven't found anything exciting. It's quite bland, even though I couldn't get excited about the revenge part! As for Golden Finger, the Azure Dragon Patriarch, well, it's quite an ancient setting, but he's still reincarnated. Let's see what the author writes. Finally, I can only say that the author should speed up the pace appropriately. The protagonist can't do anything now. He didn't explain the protagonist's current abilities. He only knows that his body has demonic energy, which makes him much stronger. It doesn't make you feel immersed in it!
Indeed, the title of this book is really a bit baffling. The pace is too slow and needs to be speeded up.
Is there a clear update time?