I'll Come Clean: The Players Are My Underlings

I just finished reading the free chapter. The writing of this book is okay and it is good enough, but it is too slow and not enjoyable enough. If You Are the One, I won't go into details. It's just an overdone plot just for the sake of being excessive, and it doesn't contribute to the whole story at all. Instead of writing about this, I'd rather write about foreign reactions to the game. And it's really not cool enough. I managed to gain control of the first world, but it ended up being used to screen players when opening a new world? There should be no limit to the number of people who can fully obtain world power. Why not transform it into a world where players with quick minds, calm personalities and engineering experts can be screened? The protagonist's sense of existence is too low. The benefits of gaining world power can be taken away by simply injecting the T-virus. Not to mention all, at least some of the special abilities of some zombies can be written down. The participation of national forces is written too little, and there is not even a single person in the army? Whether it is to quickly gain world power (soldiers are definitely better than ordinary players in terms of character and skills) and with the support of the country behind them, countless think tanks will analyze the character according to the original work to better contact NPCs. The elite of elite players did not feel it and only saw the take-off of the European Emperor players. My suggestion is that you can write a real engineering boss, and then enter the game to make gunpowder, and use your bare hands to make a simple musket or homemade grenade. Recruit a group of minions, use them to attract attention, and plant explosives to almost kill the final boss or kill the boss to open the door to a new world for players.

I just want to ask if the one who must play the game is a bit too often. I feel very annoyed. It would be okay if you were the protagonist. It's not what you keep writing about him. It's disgusting. He is already famous in both worlds. You still want him to always be the first. Write it well.

The wasteland cracked after that (▔ ,▔)ㄏ

Hold your Cai Luoli and drown her to death

I don't know what I wrote after the first fantasy world. I even thought that someone had to write it at the beginning.

The writing of this book is okay, but after the wasteland, it felt a bit boring. It changed too quickly, and each world was treated as a separate game in the early stage. I would get bored after reading it twice more. I hope that the next book will be in a big world, and I don't need to change the map frequently. After all, I just feel a little bit about the wasteland, then it ends, and I start a new one. It ends again before I start to invest, which makes it easy to get tired.

I set up a fan value to speak, and specially ordered a chapter to speak What should I write? Send it, everyone only loves Cai Luoli, why don't you just say lkd, listen to the book party, me and him, my mother wants to vomit, what should I send?

I suspect that the author wrote this book in a flash. After conquering several worlds, he only used one apocalyptic world. I don't know what the use of conquering other worlds is. They also said that he was developing his own small world, but he didn't write at all about the extent of the small world, leaving us readers to guess. The protagonist's strength is not revealed at all. The writing style is actually quite good and the writing is quite interesting. I really hope that this book can be written better, but it seems impossible now. Alas...

Why are you writing about a blind date? I think my grades are good enough, but I'm poisoning the readers. I'm done with it.

What was written earlier is quite good. Later. . . It's hard to put it into words, is the world of Pokémon coming to an end 😐