I'll Come Clean: The Players Are My Underlings

I just finished reading the free chapters. The writing style is okay, and it's a decent read, but it's just too slow-paced and not exciting enough. Let's not even talk about "If You Are the One" (非诚勿扰). The plot is completely excessive for the sake of being excessive and doesn't help the overall game at all. Instead of writing about that, I'd rather write about foreign reactions to the game.

I just want to ask if the requirement to play games is a bit too frequent. I find it annoying. If you were the protagonist, that would be fine, but since you're nobody, why keep writing about him? It's really irritating. He's already famous in two worlds; do you want him to stay number one forever? Just write properly.

It cracked after the wasteland was destroyed ㄟ(▔ ,▔)ㄏ

Let your little Cai Luoli drown in your arms.

The story after the first fantasy world is completely incomprehensible; I even wonder if the beginning was written by someone else.

This book is still quite good, but it got a bit boring after the wasteland arc. The plot changed too quickly, and each world was treated as a separate game in the early stages, which became tedious after a few times. I hope the next book will be set in one large world so that the map doesn't change so often. I was just getting into the wasteland when it ended, and then a new one came along. I hadn't even gotten into it before it was over, which made me feel tired.

I set up a fan value system for comments and specifically ordered a chapter for comments. What kind of nonsense is this? Everyone just loves Cai Luoli, why don't they just keep calling me LKD? As an audiobook listener, I'm so sick of it, what kind of garbage is this?

I suspect the author wrote this book on a whim. They conquered several worlds, but only used one post-apocalyptic world. I don't know what the point of conquering the others was. They supposedly developed their own small world, but they didn't explain its progress at all, leaving us readers to guess. The protagonist's strength was also completely unrevealed.

Why write about blind dates? Do you think your grades are good enough that you're poisoning the readers? Seriously?

The beginning was well-written. The rest... Well, it's hard to explain. Is the Pokémon world just going to fizzle out? 😐