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Some feelings I introduced it through Chicken Eating. Generally speaking, there are bright spots, but at present, there are a few problems that I think are problematic. First, the world view and setting are not clear. With 200,000 words, the reader's impression of the world is still hazy, mainly because the protagonist is autistic and cannot understand anything, and the author does not introduce much. Second, the training system is very thin. A well-formed training system will inevitably develop into a functional one. The career system is diversified. It is impossible for a person to learn a few skills in a lifetime, so the probability of survival is very low. Professional skills are specialized, and general skills can cope with different situations. This is inevitable. This may be because the protagonist does not understand anything. Let's look at it again. Thirdly, the protagonist's personality is also very strange and unlikable, and the character's inner and outer appearance are very inconsistent. As far as the inner character of the protagonist is concerned, he has the outlook of an ordinary person and is not autistic, so he must have necessary social needs, and it is impossible not to communicate with others. This kind of need cannot be controlled, and even if it changes, it will take time, but for some reason, he appears to be autistic, arrogant, and neurotic (in the eyes of others). The article emphasizes many times that the protagonist is an adult, and the outlook is determined, but in my opinion, this kind of character still lacks social education. Fourthly, the plot is bland, and overall there is always a weird and unnatural feeling. To be honest, this is not a bad point, but every time I feel this way, I go back and browse the comment area, and then I can't watch it anymore. I can now read it through inertia in one go, but once I put it down, it is difficult to pick it up. It may fall off if I order more after it is put on the shelf.

Through this work, you can probably understand the author's character. Let's start with the early stage. Miaoshan left two funny girls in the end. Miaoshan City of the Seven Star Sect was occupied by Jin Kun for hundreds of years when he was uncertain about his own life and death. The nominal supreme leader of the secular world returned it to her, as well as the last Fen Yin, who had deprived him of such a huge benefit, even if he didn't kill him, and even supported her to become a true immortal. In short, the protagonist of the whole story has never killed a woman. He only gave benefits to women for no reason. Men killed them, foreigners killed them, and the Zerg who lived with him day and night and worked hard for him died. Women can't be killed, women can't use them, and they have to give benefits.

Obviously, everything written in the book is basically materialistic, but I just feel that Zhang Changkong is more like an immortal than most of the protagonists who cultivate immortality, which is very strange.

After the starry sky, the protagonist seems to have lost his wits. Formations and laws are not studied at all. Thousands of years later, he was crushed by the Housheng who grew up in the stars in terms of IQ, strength, and opportunity. Almost all the knowledge he gained from bugs was given to others. His part-time job is Chairman Jiang, the captain of the transportation brigade... After entering the starry sky, I had no sense of immersion in this novel at all. The first half could have been a god, but the second half was useless. It would be better for the eunuch not to write.

In the past, I was more of a nuke, so it made sense that I didn't need to socialize with the Insect King's Token. Continuing the story, after being promoted to the Manifestation, he directly changed from a demon cultivator to a deadly tsundere, and then raised a holy mother. I thought that this was not a light novel, and inaction turned into laziness, which made the protagonist particularly ignorant.

There are so many updates at once, and I'm afraid you'll have a flashback and won't be able to stand it anymore.

The author has published a new novel, Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Separation of Family, it is particularly outstanding, come and read it! Even though I have become the leader of the demon sect, I am still not invincible, so I won't even write it if I'm scolded! The new novel is so wonderful, it's all my fault.

After all, you still have to pick up the pen by yourself😭

Can the author tell me about your condition, or is it just water? The protagonist Zhang Changkong's personality changes suddenly after entering the starry sky. The journey of life is measured by ten thousand, and his personality will not suddenly change in a desperate situation. I think Chapter 22, Life and Death with a Smiling Face, has a bit of a feel to it. I feel that the author did not describe the hardships that the protagonist endured through actions and interactions with the environment, and the subsequent changes made people uncomfortable. A true hero cannot be subdued even if he breaks off a few fingers A real hero will not be transformed into a terrifying person even if he pulls out two nailsThe devil👿 My humble opinion. Everyone is welcome to join the discussion

It feels like the protagonist has nothing to do with the three words "traveler", and his thinking has become like that of an aborigine. The words "not interested" are indeed not the thoughts of a time traveler. For example, people who are overwhelmed by big data interest analysis (such as Kuaishou Douyin UC and so on), APPs think what you think, do what you want, and give you what you like, and have lost the ability to find new things.

It's update time, why haven't you updated yet?

It's too cruel to suppress the protagonist. He doesn't know anything and doesn't ask any questions. He doesn't ask whether there are any higher-level skills and spells than what he has. He just knows that he will do it alone. The victory in spell combat is unclear. Many places are mentioned in one stroke without connection (this is too much). There is no one with a lot of minor poisons. There is no one in the protagonist except for one who thinks he is arrogant. Advantages: If the only protagonist in this world has an insect master, he can still endure it. There are obviously beast masters in the sect, and they never thought about whether they could get their hands on it and learn from it. The author of this book suppressed the protagonist too deliberately, and there was no point that gave me the motivation to pursue it. This is a good thing, I can see it on the shelves, and that's it. The writing is too hazy, and I can't make up my mind. The innovation is very good and the writing is good but the plot is not that good. It deserves a vote.

Others say this book is good, but I think it's just average. It's really not good to talk about the character of the protagonist without talking about anything else. Also, it's silly to rescue and take in deserters on the battlefield. I just want to ask you about your chicken feathers. Later, it was said that it was kept to study bugs. Wouldn't Pig's Feet go outside to recruit some people? Pig's feet suddenly change their behavior and their character is ruined

To sum up, the results are not good, and then everyone says that the sword will be given away, even though others don't want to give it away. Everyone says this, and even fewer people subscribe. Then the author saw no hope and simply ended it hastily.

🔨🔨Xiaoshanzi is really unreasonable. I am a poor student, but I support the genuine version just because of you. 😐 I have not been willing to replenish my votes for many books I have read before. I watch you every day to feed me my defense 😭😭 I am really overjoyed to see you come back after half a year. The book is finally getting better, so you have to persevere. If you can't be a full-time writer, you can ask for a leave 🤐 and tell everyone in advance. It's not incomprehensible. When you write a book, you don't read the comment section, and you don't listen to everyone's feedback. If you write well, you will definitely have nothing to say, but now you write badly, you just copy it on your own whim, ruining your popularity with passers-by 😡😡 If you write a book based on your own interests, don't post it online 😠. Isn't this poisoning everyone every day? What kind of evil person😭😭I don't believe you never read book reviews, so you must severely criticize Xiao Shanzi. After Zhang Changkong wrote, I didn't even know what he wanted to do. Please hurry up and get out of here. Originally, when the stone monument came out in the future, I thought there would be technological Zerg species😳😳 I just happened to take it with me to explore the Black Sea of Death 😅😅 With that kind of strength, I just gave up when faced with many God Lords and races with the best bloodlines😃 No matter how cheating the small world is, it can't compare to the Great Wilderness😃 In the end, those Realm Lords are not even the agents of the Great Wilderness World. According to your settings, you still can't beat the world-class scourge. Why don't you just go away and write the Shadow City in the book so that everyone can read the book and have an ending? 😡😡 Just grab the stone tablet and bring the God of the Earth back to transform it. Just like Zi Zi, he uses Ghost Abyss and you use the Black Sea of Death to add more transformed Zerg. Then add more strength attributes to yourself. Simply sink all those continents and feed the future stone tablets some distortion laws. Build some Zerg monsters and you will be Leader Zhang of the Cult of the Mechanicus. You two will directly exterminate the entire wild world and become maggots in this rotten apple😜😜

Hurry up It's been almost three years since I finished this book.

I feel like the author didn't save the manuscript. Please revise the latest chapter. It doesn't matter if you take your time. Don't crash the setting.

Monthly tickets and recommended tickets are all given to you, come on, duck

If the protagonist is not handsome, say important things three times, whether he is handsome or handsome 😐

Is it gone down there? Or is it gone down there? Can I go to the palace now? Is it really okay? 🤓🤓🤓

Wow, this Fenyin is so awesome, isn't it? He stole the protagonist's house, and then gave the protagonist some small favors and inventions, but the protagonist didn't say anything at all? Although it was obvious from the part about whether to kill the prisoners or not that the protagonist is a licker, I thought I should bear with it and continue reading. Although I still have this tendency, it is not too deliberate... Good guy, until I saw this Fen Yin, the protagonist really loves her completely? So when a person with a temper meets Fen Yin, he has no temper at all. I will give you whatever you want? I really can't stand this bitch anymore.

Thousands of people are asking for more posts. The author keeps going. Please support me.

I read the entire text in two days, and I can't say it's bad. Although there are some minor flaws, it's overall pretty good. Especially after reading the full text, there's a certain flavor to it. Maybe it's the author's style of writing, just like Chen Dong's grandeur, banana's delicacy, and rolling away. It's obvious that the words and sentences are not very good, but you can automatically ignore these poorly written things as the plot develops. As long as the author improves his writing skills such as character description and plot development, then he will be a proper master. Finally, the second half of the plot is a bit rough, not as smooth as the previous one, and the plot develops a bit too fast. I hope the author can re-plan the outline 🙂🙂🙂

Book friends who think the previous article is good, you can run away when you see Sanskrit

I specifically deleted this book, but I couldn't help but come back to read the comments. Finally, someone felt the same way as me. My suggestion is to put it on the blacklist permanently. You are also a talent if you can carefully create a character like Fanyin who is specially disgusting to readers. No one asked you to get out of here. The enemies basically can't survive more than a few chapters, but since those who have disgusted the protagonist are basically not killed by the protagonist, you are abusing the main character!

Fen Yin: "Is Zhang Changkong dead?" Crowd: "Dead." Fen Yin: "Oh! What a pity!" Crowd: "Why is it a pity for the fairy?" Fen Yin: "I don't have a car, a house, or a deposit!"... "Eh! Isn't that it?" Fen Yin turned around and pointed at a desolate figure. Everyone turned around and looked and said in shock: "Fairy! That's not Zhang Changkong." Fen Yin: "Then who is it?" Everyone quickly replied: "That's a dog!" Fen Yin: "But I always think it's it, why do you think it's not it?" Everyone puffed up their chests and said, "Because only licking a dog will lead to a good death."

If the author can continue to update, my Silver Alliance will brush up

Open a post and call on anyone who dares to write to Spirit Gu Inheritance to be blocked. I didn't mention it last time. What's the reason for doing so this time? Do you have any vital interests? If you write such a disgusting plot, make a thread, block the author immediately, and follow the thread together to let the author see how disgusting the shit he wrote recently is. I didn't talk about the setting last time, but I'm seeking death again this time.

It's not that I can't stand giving gifts, nor that I have any objections to the existence of a character like Fanyin in the novel. What's really disgusting is that what Fanyin pays is never directly proportional to what he gets. All the knowledge he gets from the protagonist is basically a waste of money, and he gives the protagonist a beating. As long as you are a normal person, after watching the previous plot, you will think that Fanyin and the protagonist are hostile, but you still give her a treasure. The plot is the same as that of Tuo Mitian. The protagonist has just obtained the eternal sacred weapon, and the Sanskrit spent thousands of years researching the formation of eternal protection that has been passed down for hundreds of millions of years. There is no logic at all. The co-author is just to let Fan Yin crush the protagonist.

That person named Carosha is Zhen Ji in the comment area, what is Fanyin? She is a female boss who was trolled because of her gender. You are the only one with so many people in the emotional comment area, right? He also posted that paragraph everywhere explaining that Fanyin could grow to this extent without sucking the blood of the protagonist.