Jody's Magic Notes

After reading the first few pictures, let's talk about accepting apprentices! After the test, let them go to a place a thousand kilometers away to board the ship. Seeing that there is no protection in this situation, and he will receive credits as an apprentice! ! ! No protection. Are you really not afraid of someone killing them? There are many crazy people. If you really kill him, you'll get a fucking credit! This is too...

I'm so blind. I hate watching people like this who have traveled through time and space and always want to find their way home. You're so fucking stupid. What are you doing going home? You might as well have a sense of accomplishment by changing the world. The original world is just a waste of talent.

Since I became a disciple, I don't feel like a wizard anymore. I mentioned equal exchange before, but in the end, one person will give you something and the other will give you something. In Chapter 71, a stranger casually came over and tapped you on the shoulder. Now that you have stepped into the world of wizards, even the people you know will not act like this. And that Yesiah, he has this kind of character.

This book is recommended for people who have never read other wizard novels, otherwise you will feel a little uncomfortable. It borrows miscellaneously from other wizard novels to become a completely different novel, and the settings in it are overturned by yourself. . . .

A little suggestion, the author should read his work from beginning to end. The purpose of a novel is to tell a story that convinces everyone. Has the author sorted out the personality of each character? Have you recorded your settings? It seems so uncomfortable to contradict yourself all the time! ! !

The writing is good, but there are some details, such as the title, such as how to greet a high-ranking wizard. The following ideas are different from the wizard novel. Most of the wizards who pursue knowledge are rational and greedy. They will not attract hatred for no reason. The wizards who are reduced to intelligence are worse than mortals. They rush to do things that are not beneficial to attract hatred. The book changed later on. Fantasy wrote a fantasy and brainless plot. There is always a big fool who comes out to cause hatred. If he fails, he calls the teacher. Then the villain's teacher is also brainless. He doesn't ask who the protagonist's teacher is and starts fighting directly. Then the protagonist's teacher comes out and fights back. Similar plots are repeated many times in a row, it's too deliberate. The protagonist himself has also been subdued. If others don't know, just take the initiative to say who his student is, and it won't be a big deal.

The protagonist has too many obstacles in his heart, right?

For The Third Magic, there are typos in the introduction, and I'm too lazy to add a bookshelf

I feel that the content is incoherent in many places, and the content of the next chapter and the previous chapter are not next to each other at all.

There is a typo in the introduction, "Yu San" should be changed to "Yu San"

It's almost 400 chapters and I haven't become an official wizard yet. This is a book with thousands of chapters to write! The content is not attractive yet

A chip system from Goldfinger is no better than that book. Even if you record things, you still have to have time to study. There is enough time. Also, there is a mastermind coming from the beginning. This is not a fantasy routine 😰😰😰

After reading a few pictures of Youxian, I didn't handle the details well. I felt that the nobles in the book didn't have that kind of temperament at all. The dialogue between the protagonist and the fat man made people feel very vulgar. Looking carefully at their dialogue in the third chapter made people feel that they...

I don't know why, but I think this book is very similar to "Super Dimensional Warlock"

Looking at the catalog, why are there so many betrayals? ? The protagonist's halo must become stronger after encountering betrayal, right? ?

Mathematics feels like the most magical subject. Just looking at it gives me a splitting headache, and I don't have enough mental energy to do anything. I dare not sit and think for fear of fainting, it's so scary.

Chapters 75 and 76 are too IQ-degrading. You can tell the teacher's background and you're done. Why do you have to shoulder the burden yourself? Are you really not afraid of death?

There is too much illusory nonsense, and it is incoherent and confusing.

It's painful to watch! The author wanted to learn from the multi-line narratives of some masters, but what he wrote was fragmented narratives, scattered and fragmented! The chapters are incoherent...