The Cautious Mage of the One Piece World
海贼世界的稳健法师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.9M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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718Chapters
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7.6kRecs
7.1kFans
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Boss, can you let the protagonist practice some practice? In your plot of more than 150 chapters, only two or three chapters are about practice. The protagonist is only a second-level mage, but he goes around causing trouble. I am really afraid that he will be beaten to death. Whether it is a fantasy novel or a hot-blooded series like this, will you let us readers see the growth of the protagonist? It's not about letting him take the initiative to fight, it's about letting him hide his cards and become stronger. The story in your novel has become a daily routine, and there are many other supporting characters described in it. The protagonist has unified the East China Sea, but is only a second-level mage. Do you think the protagonist's strength is worthy of his power? Your description is a bit mismatched. You want readers to see the strength of the protagonist instead of the power of his subordinates. But now what we readers see is the protagonist shaking off a so-called clever baggage from time to time. This is too boring.
Don't be stubborn, it's not that the writing is not good, it's that if you continue to read it in the world of pirates, this book will become very useless, and it is inconsistent with the style of the world you live in. It would be weird to go to SpongeBob SquarePants to talk about science and logic. If a pirate doesn't show off his passion, he wouldn't be a pirate. If you want to rise, you should suppress it first, but it would be boring if you just shrink back and continue to be stubborn. With your writing style, if you add a little passion, it will improve a lot.
Three golden chapters, the first chapter is about black iron
Does the author like Erha very much? Let's just let Erha be the protagonist. He's like a dog-licking protagonist.
Looking at the introduction, it looks like the gold nanny of One Piece, the kind of post that is backwards
940,000 Words have not been published on the shelves. I really wrote a book based on my hobby.
Well, I looked at the main character who looks funny but is actually an idiot.
The article always emphasizes stability, but what is expressed is a self-exciting article. Slipping away
It's been a while since I've seen a well-written Pirates fanfic.
It's too boring. Arcanists are actually more suitable for constantly exploring new dimensions and doing research. You can only have fun by having a nanny. Soon there will be nothing else to write about. The grinding stuff is boring.