The Cautious Mage of the One Piece World

Boss, could you please let the protagonist train a bit? Out of these 150+ chapters, only two or three actually show him cultivating. He's just a level two mage, yet he's causing trouble everywhere. I'm genuinely afraid he'll get killed. Whether it's a fantasy novel or a shonen anime, can you at least let us readers see the protagonist grow?

Stop playing it safe! It's not that my writing is bad, but if you keep playing it safe in the One Piece world, the book becomes pretty useless; it doesn't fit the style of that world. It's like trying to explain science and logic in SpongeBob SquarePants—it just feels weird. One Piece isn't One Piece if it doesn't exude passion and excitement.

The first of the three golden chapters is Black Iron.

Does the author really like huskies? Why not just make a husky the main character, a simp-like protagonist?

The synopsis sounds like a story about a top-notch babysitter from One Piece, the kind where the babysitter pays the girl.

940,000 Words and still no books published, truly writing a book out of pure passion.

Hmm, after looking at the main character, he seems like a goofball, but he's actually just an idiot.

The article repeatedly emphasizes stability, yet it ultimately feels like self-indulgent writing. I'm outta here.

It's been a long time since I've seen any decent One Piece fanfiction.

Too drawn-out. Arcane sorcerers are actually better suited to constantly exploring new planes and conducting research. Having a babysitter is only for fun; there'll soon be nothing else to write about, and this drawn-out, tedious writing style just gets boring.