The Magical Daddy in the Cyberpunk World

I think the author of Chapter 10 has done a better job. The evil god is too humane. I'm sorry for the evil word. He should be more violent. The immortal witch won't be able to survive after using it up, and the witch shouldn't care about this. The three evil gods should also be in a competitive relationship rather than peaceful communication. Yi Also, the evil god has too much human side. It feels like he is just a strong man who is not recognized. There is no evil feeling. It is a bit different from the feeling that you cannot look directly at the first chapter. I feel that you do not have a positioning for the evil god and do not reflect evil. There is no need to polish and ruthless Only the tyrannical ones have the feeling of evil gods, it is better not to be humanoid Then there is a sense of justice in the general public, but it does not achieve the effect of protecting the food Then there is the protagonist, who is still a little more humane, I suggest you change it later, be nice to your daughter if you can, and be indifferent at other times Be calm, be evil. For example, if you go to his wife, you will feel angry, but there is no need. In your setting of three hundred years of solitude, you must have a matching personality. Just smile, it will give people a feeling that if you catch you, you will be finished And if you follow this old-fashioned drama The love story is probably gone. I feel like I have to think about the plot behind it. All the novels about the nanny have a plot with her father in the background, and then they pretend to slap the family in the face. I vomited, don't do this, sooner or later pogai, this routine is too old, I don't think the heroine is needed, the invincible novel about the nanny is still there. It's old-fashioned. It's written according to the previous routine. It will definitely be ignored by everyone. It's hard to get through and sign a contract Anyway, if you read so many invincible novels, you can persuade a lot of people to quit if you have a heroine. Then you will be a dog-licker and meddlesome (the key depends on the setting. Your setting is the evil god, Three Hundred Years of Solitude, come back. (It's for my daughter), and then he loves to make trouble and look for trouble. It's easy to end the fun, and then he has a childish personality. I'm sorry that he has lived for so many years. This is the most poisonous, and it is best to be ruthless. After all, it is a bit unreasonable to remain human in a mysterious world for so many years The writing is okay, but I don't have much idea about evil gods. It made me feel uncomfortable writing such a long article. I feel that the dark fairy and the jungle are more evil than you, the evil god. I should read more suspense books. That kind of book is called evil god. I feel that it is too polished. There is a contrast between it and the first chapter.

A dedicated building for the Black Knights, which collects various Black Knight settings. The format is: Black Knight number ➕ Life experience ➕ Personality characteristics ➕ Catchphrase

The previous title of this book: "The Evil Daddy in the Cyberpunk World"