The Comprehensive Comic Begins with Obtaining the Flying Thunder God

To be honest, in Marie Joa, the author weakened the characters too seriously, especially when the protagonist was fighting Sengoku. Just banning the Flying Thunder God protagonist made him weak by an unknown amount. It gave people the feeling that the protagonist couldn't do anything except Flying Thunder God. Moreover, with the Flying Thunder God, he could fight with Sengoku, Aokiji, and Akainu for three days and three nights. Without the Flying Thunder God, he could fight with Sengoku and paddle water, and Kizaru shrank. Then it was a bit too much to forget that I knew kendo. After five years of teaching kendo, I forgot about it as soon as there was a fight. In the end, Koushiro was about to die before he remembered it. This was really over. The rest are some minor problems, such as the suddenly dramatic modalities, the Minato Tailed Beast chakra that has no sense of existence at all (the self-healing effect is not visible, and you can still kneel down when confronting others), the time jump is too abrupt, etc. I won't go into details. I hope the author can pay attention to it.

Keep it up first, don't watch One Piece

I gave you the monthly ticket, don't be an eunuch, don't collapse. The electric shock enabler v6 is enough to destroy the world. I think v5 is enough, otherwise it will collapse too easily. An angel descended from the magic prison, and a single spell can destroy the world. The introduction of v6 is that if you listen to God's will with a mortal body, you will become a god. It is estimated that becoming a god will not be weaker than an angel. Even if you are weak, you can be on par with Whitebeard. Don't collapse.

The main reason is that I don't want to click on the flying thunder god when I see it, no matter how it is written. I found that many authors really like to write flying thunder gods, but if you throw a kunai and then go to the kunai, if you can directly predict the traces of the kunai, there are too many bugs in this skill, and it is not as comfortable as teleportation.

Seriously, isn't it better to start with the Blade Ruohuo? No matter which world he goes to, he is the top power. The flying thunder god's bells and whistles are of some use. Is it to show his opponent that he can transform into a living person during a fight? Flying Thunder God requires excellent combat IQ, does the protagonist have it?

The author will reply after seeing this. Your book is very problematic. The prize pool of the Thunder God is not as sensitive as the fourth generation, and the electric shock user does not have the corresponding computing power. I am wondering if you will not put computing power in the prize pool when there is a loss control in the future. This is directly useless.

The combat power began to collapse from the lv6 Electrical Envoy. The author must not have understood the power system of the Demonic Forbidden City. At lv6, one reaches the sky with a mortal body. To put it bluntly, he becomes a god. And there is a detail. After the uncle uses Black Wings and is unconscious, he will murmur an angelic language, which will cause pain in the skulls of those around him. If you become a god, you can explode other people's brains with just a few words. Not to mention that there are people like Right Fire who are theoretically weaker than lv6. Under certain conditions, people who are weaker than lv6 can build warlocks to obtain enough star-destroying power. If you are lv6, you can just wave your hand to burn glass.

Not only could I not understand it, but I also felt inexplicably embarrassed.

The first part is pretty good, but the protagonist doesn't know why, and will be maimed by everyone he sees. He has inexplicable strength, and the invincible style means he is invincible to the end.

Didn't the author understand what level LV6 is? It is completely possible to walk sideways among the pirates. Even all the pirates can be defeated in one move. LV6 is already a star-destroying star

Chapter 20 makes me sick. The navy soldier was just obeying orders and was killed like this.

Didn't the DNF one come out? I ** you **, you said limiting the number of times is okay. You didn't show the time, and you didn't take out more than five thousand? You need to write clearly, otherwise you won't write about this character! Forcibly lower your IQ!

I just watched it... I'm a little confused. During the fight, why don't you throw a kunai into the sea, and then fly the Thunder God close up to take the fruit-powered person down?

One thing to say... DNF characters are basically extremely powerful, especially those who have been awakened. I feel like... Erkye's DNF character can basically defeat One Piece at will. However, it may be because I don't know much about One Piece, so I misjudged One Piece's strength. But it should also have the strength of a DNF, right? So I feel that DNF characters after the second awakening can basically destroy stars and directly blow up the earth in your One Piece world.

As I write this, I feel like the author has nothing to write about. As for One Piece, you can actually go to Fite after finishing Okara and stay here tonight.

Those who keep books, don't keep them to death

The key is that the author shouldn't care about the protagonist's age, okay? It's obviously a manga, but you are the first author I've seen who cares about the age of the protagonist, who is almost 30 years old. . . How close are you to the real author?

The end of One Piece World was so chaotic, all kinds of messy stuff came out

After more than 30 pictures, the style of painting has changed It feels like I have let myself go.

It was written as if someone had changed.

I think it's good 😊