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My friend, your profile says nothing.

It's a bit short without the picture. I'll watch it after I've gained some weight. The plot is pretty good. Come on 🤭🤭🤭

To give you a small suggestion, I suggest you separate each paragraph.         ，50100，，ヽ(≧Д≦)ノ Otherwise, readers may feel a little tired. After all, putting a lot of words together will look very tiring. I hope the author will continue to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง!        ！ 😁😁

The paragraph is a bit too long. Judging from the introduction, the plot of the story should be very good. Just pay attention to the paragraphs 🌹🌹

Do you a favor, it's not easy for a new author

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The cover is good👍

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I've read two chapters and I think it's pretty good. I'm looking forward to the follow-up and leaving a post to support you. Thank you very much (I clicked in because of the title of the book)

What do you think? Your second chapter is too short... There is also too little description of the environment. When the protagonist wakes up from the treatment center, there is no description of the environment. Not to mention the problem of patients. A whole city has fallen and so many people are treating patients. Does the protagonist live in a single room... The protagonist is a high school student or a junior high school student. I don't know if I haven't written it. He sleeps with Li Qian. This is really to persuade him to quit. The college student nurse was criticized for being criticized.

I can get what the author wants to write, but the writing style seems a bit unstable in the first few chapters. The character dialogues are occasionally written in an old-fashioned way, and they can skip the scene The character setting is probably a more typical male video setting There should be more female characters later? If you guessed wrong, then pretend I didn't say anything 2333 The way the male protagonist gets along with the two female characters in the first two paragraphs... As a girl, I can't accept it The conflict in emotional development is too deliberate, and the shaping of the two female characters is not very clear, except for age Come on, author

Accept it, thank you, author, for making progress together!

In fact, I feel that the content can be enriched. I can write it in depth according to the concept of each chapter. If I write 100,000 words like this, I will probably finish the book.