Uncle Master Kuaihedao

In the first few chapters, I always felt that something was missing. The origin of the protagonist, whether it was time travel or something else, had to be explained clearly. I was confused for a while, and the first chapter felt completely inconsistent with the subsequent chapters. I just wrote what I wanted to express. I was confused. Also, since you have published a book at Qidian, don't think about being an SB literary youth, otherwise you will suffer the consequences.

I'm afraid this book doesn't even have an outline. I can write wherever I want. Some obviously important plots are just brushed off. Although the writing style is good, I doubt the author's attitude in writing the book.

The author is obviously a bosozoku without an outline, hahaha, can we share some information?

I only read one chapter, it's good, if nothing else, the text is really good

No, sir, I am actually number one. Before I read the book, I read the comments and checked in.

I took a look at the table of contents... And there was another mistake without chapter names.