Charging Up Across the Heavens

Finally, someone failed to steal Ye Fan's fruit.

Disgusting. The ruthless one is currently in a state similar to a long, undying dream, undergoing a transformation, completely muddled, and still has the mind to care about you getting some fruit? Even if she were fully conscious the whole time, for a Great Emperor to attack a mere mortal... I never saw her attack Liu Yunzhi in the original novel.

Congratulations to Yuan on the release of his new book! It looks very promising.

From *Covering the Sky* to *Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils*, one is about a college student doing elementary school secret scrolls, which is rather uninteresting. The protagonist's pursuit of destiny is somewhat understandable, but the whole "learning internal energy" thing is just terrifying, isn't it? Doesn't *Covering the Sky* have any ordinary people?

Isn't it just like playing a game if you use fantasy as the base for martial arts? With fantasy elements, who would even care about base martial arts? This is ridiculous! I could accept your base martial arts evolving into fantasy, but you're using fantasy as the base for martial arts? What kind of operation is this? Is this a reverse operation?

If you look at the table of contents, go to *Covering the Sky* first, then *Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils*, and you'll know how good it is. It's ridiculous that some authors like to take the Northern Darkness Star Absorbing Technique and the world's number one absorption skill from Jin Yong's books and upgrade them into the ruthless Devouring Heaven Demon Art. Going to *Under One Person* and getting the Six Treasures of Immortal Thieves would be better.

Starting with "Covering the Sky," then what's the point of going to "Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils"? Low-level martial arts fighting in a fantasy world? That's ridiculous.

One minute you're giving Ye Fan the protagonist's cheat ability, the next you're handing over the Sacred Fruit. If you're going to write a protagonist who's a total idiot, just write Ye Fan. Ye Feng? He can go to hell. He'll never amount to anything anyway; all his opportunities will be snatched away by the Empress. Trash protagonist, utterly useless.

This article is utterly toxic and trash. I couldn't even finish it. The Empress stole the protagonist's opportunities and cheat codes; it's unbearable. Although the Empress is incredibly talented and fights against heaven, earth, and humanity, I don't have high hopes for her. She can only cause trouble in this broken world of "Covering the Sky."

This feels so confusing! Magic Phone and Shrouding the Heavens are in the same world, so how come their power systems are all messed up? In Shrouding the Heavens, time travel doesn't even begin until the Immortal King level, and even then, it's limited!