Hong Kong Crossover: I'm Azu

How should I put it? The author positions the protagonist as a genius. At the age of 15, he was admitted to the University of Hong Kong and participated in the joint police training class. At the age of 18, he graduated with the first place in the written examination. He is positioned as a genius, but the actual description is that people who have traveled through time have become stupid. They can only rely on familiar plot introductions to get things done, but they are still average. There are too many daily narrations, the storyline is bland, the characterization is average, and simply speaking, there are no character characteristics, which makes it look unpleasant.

Azu, stop it, there are all the sisters-in-law outside 😍

Don't take politics into your writing, just write novels, what kind of fun do you do? Nothing

If you become JC's Guan Zu, is he still Guan Zu? What we like is the lawless Guan Zu, not the law-abiding little boy who bears the name Guan Zu.

In fact, Zhou Su, this original girlfriend is not bad, after all, it is Jiang Yi.

I don't know who Shanara is, and I don't care. But you wrote so much about not liking, being bored, and looking down on you, so why don't you arrange a secretary plot later? ? ? After not listening to the warning, she went back to find the protagonist. The protagonist said he was disgusted with being in public in the lobby and stalked her without explaining, but he took her home? The protagonist is a police inspector. She is a witness in the case handled by the protagonist and she ran away! ! Nausea

I don't know why, but it looks quite awkward and feels like a running account. . . . . Anyway, it's quite ink-stained.

Wan Qiwen from the infatuated police officer, Wang Zuxian from City Hunter, Weng Hong from Modern Young and Dangerous, Lin Xilei from King of Kings 2000, and Jing Tian from Macau Storm are all great beauties, and they were chosen as female leads.

The author's writing is not good. The protagonist is made stupid and does not fit the character.

There is too much nonsense. I gave up just after seeing Cheng Wenjing. Look at what you wrote. If it's a big deal, I'd have to write several pages.