In the Immortal World, Looking up to the Sky and Embracing the Moon

I came across this book by accident. I like the name very much. The author writes well. Come on.

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As my first attempt at writing a book, judging from the reactions of people around me, Immortal World is slow in pace, and the plot is not tense or exciting. These are some of the questions I felt when I was writing. I also wanted to write some really awesome plots that would make readers cry out, but it was difficult. This reminds me of the awesome plots in some novels I have read. I didn't think so at the time, but now when I think about it again, holy shit, they were really awesome back then! However, I think that there is still something I want to express in Immortal World, but the story is struggling to move towards the goal in a quagmire-like plot, and it may go astray...