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The subject matter is good, but have you ever thought about the reason for the poor performance? Chapter 44, and the protagonist's strength in Shan Hai Jing has not improved at all? Do you think someone will read it every time you enter and die? It's a good subject and it's written like this. I'm speechless.

Is anyone watching? Just squeak if there is one.

Author! One Shan Hai Jing world is enough for you to write an entire book. What are you doing, Fruit Ninja! Insufficient greed leads to a snake swallowing an elephant

The Classic of Mountains and Seas has a good theme 😏

It's not that bad, I just don't know what the author is writing about

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After reading it and commenting on it, I admire the author's imagination and the plot is very interesting. There is no problem with the formatting and the writing style. But it may be because I read it too quickly and I didn't understand some of it, but it also shows that the author's story is fresh and exciting, and I can't even guess the next step. It's excellent. I haven't finished reading it in a short period of time, and I haven't caught the fun part I wanted to read. (Of course, this sometimes depends on people). I rarely read such articles, so I will comment based on my personal thoughts. Use your potential and go for it😁

If there was no female protagonist, more people would watch it. They are not of the same gender. There is always a gap in writing, and you are not a novice? Writing about such a difficult love story, how could it possibly be pleasing to the eye?

One day, with the knife in hand, I will slaughter all the broken dogs in the world.

Please readers, please help me mark them. I was so confused that I couldn't find one...

Overall it's okay, but the theme is not clear enough and the overall planning needs to be strengthened. I don't know if the author has done a good job of writing the outline. The protagonist has great resources and strength from the Classic of Mountains and Seas, and now he has made great achievements. You are really good at writing creative ideas, but I feel a bit unclear. In addition, if you can't write emotional dramas, don't write them. Not every protagonist is written to pursue power, such as longevity, martial arts, etc. Time is limited, and they don't necessarily want a female protagonist. The law of energy must be obeyed, and a strong person will be born. It requires a certain amount of resources, which is the same in our real world. Resources are different.