Slime Becomes a Villain in Japan

I just finished reading Chapter 137 without V. The author is serious, but he also wants to catch up. The theme he wrote is not very palatable, and there is no plot that can be called interesting. It is still a group drama. I know that the writing is not good, but I don't change it. I really don't understand. , This is like some kind of behavior, accept it with an open mind and refuse to change despite repeated admonitions. I was like this when I was in high school. I knew that sleeping was not good, but I still couldn't change it. Every time I was caught, I would sincerely regret it, but I would continue to sleep again the next time. So it's 400,000 words. It only has a total recommendation of less than 200, and it is too slow to develop. 400,000 Words can only roughly develop a world view, and this world view has no characteristics. It cannot be said to be bad, but it cannot be called good. It can only be said that it is deserved. If this continues, this book will have to be written sooner or later. Unless the author can persist with pure writing enthusiasm and not for profit, there may be some turning points in the later period. After all, you are slow to develop. If you can't write for a long time, who will support you?

The type of book is okay, but the plot is very slow. The author is obviously assuming a world view, but now in the fast food era, there are not many people waiting for you to complete the setup. I followed more than 100 chapters because it was too slow, so I ordered a full order and stopped. The plot timeline is also very short. It probably only takes a few months from start to finish. Extending a few months of content to the completion is too long, so this is also a large part of the reason for the unpopularity, as well as the main content. There are too few main stories. The lack of main stories means there are less climaxes, so there is less excitement. This is also the reason for the small audience. The writing style can be relatively smooth overall. I hope that the next book can make a good outline and build a longer main story line, and then intersperse some daily story lines and branch story lines. Personally, I feel that the content of this novel can be reduced to 100-150 chapters. Finally, I wish you good results with the next book~

Why? The cute king is an insidious and wretched man😱Repay the favor. After more than 200 chapters, the system is just a fucking decoration. It is useless. Japan, they are still a bunch of fucking weaklings. They can't even beat a snow girl, and they even become someone's younger brother. Throughout the whole content, the male protagonist can't even beat someone else's senior younger brother, so Lin An must be the protagonist! The male protagonist is Pei Jiao, who has two systems but cannot defeat others. He has no golden finger and has been practicing for several months. He has been a little bitch for more than 200 chapters. If you look at the dozen or so chapters of the book written next door, you have the garbage strength of 200 chapters. The overall situation is abused by the supporting characters.

I don't know if this is appropriate.

Snow Girl

Why is my cute cute cover not displayed on the mobile app? My day.

I just read the third chapter, and I think it's okay. The killing is decisive and good. I voted for it with 13 votes.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

By the way, why are my grades so bad? Is it because I didn't test the waters and ran naked all the way?

I went straight to the topic when I first came up. After reading about ten chapters, I still couldn't figure out the specific image of the protagonist.

What does Shirai's white and blue haori look like? , Actually I don't know either. But everyone, look at other people's haori and fantasize about it.

It's so well written, I feel like it's just not py, otherwise more people would read it.

The story is pretty good, but the text is a bit verbose. There's a lot of nonsense in the fight scenes.

It's a bit disgusting, hypocritical, and relies on women to get to the top. The meaning of heresy.

It's boring to hear that the cover has nothing to do with the content