Tokyo: the Villain Girl Is a National Idol

It's too bland, the plot is mediocre, and the writing is mediocre. After writing more than 70,000 words, I can't even see a plot climax, and why the protagonist gives me a stupid feeling. He does a backflip without knowing anything. Yakuza's reincarnation is really just a setting, and there is nothing to show except the backflip. The writing technique is straightforward, the psychological description of others is quite abrupt, and the rest of the rhetoric is also sparse. The introduction of various related terms is very cumbersome, and there is a sense of alienation written just to throw away the setting.

Not to mention that I did marry by default. After all, this is not the first time I have been disgusted.

Marry, hundreds, single? Marry by default if you don't say anything

The heroine will eventually marry an ordinary man

What was your first reaction when you saw the title, National Idol, Villain, Takaichi Sanae?

According to the cultural habits of the islanders, there is such a thing. The plot says that the battle is about to begin. Those with higher purity should fast forward to the Tenchu ​​mold base. Anti-Zhongqi Xia. How many floors can a bag of rice resist The purity of this protagonist is too low. Is he really a stupid righteous man who lives and dies for loyalty? ! Outrageous Idol writing is so embarrassing, I'm so worried

Really convinced. On the first day I published the book, I made it clear in the writer's statement in Chapter 2. Why do people who have never read even two chapters of the book always ask boring questions like whether this book is about marriage? Maybe adding tags in the introduction can help people know such boring things without reading the book. But I never thought about polluting my introduction by adding random tags or digressions. I think readers who have read only two chapters can know what kind of book this is. People who are not interested will just quit reading it, while people who are interested will continue to read it and even add it to their collection. So I really didn't expect why people would ask this kind of question from time to time. Now I am posting on Diandian Circle to explain that the heroine will not marry unless she is married. I really hope that no one will ask the heroine of this book whether to marry or not, who has never read even two chapters or even a few chapters.

Uh-huh, it also made a group of feudalist warriors anxious.

Although there are so many idol groups mentioned in the introduction, most of them are supporting characters and cameos, and the protagonist joins an original idol group! It's still a bit of a pity.

Nüwei: My girlfriend is Wenliang who was me in the 80s in my previous life. She came to me with the memories of her ex-boyfriend!

It's too bland. If this was a comic, maybe a lot of people would read a few more chapters for Yan Yi's sake, but as a novel, it's really unreadable. As a novel, it's not interesting at all. The author can only rely on some information about Japanese girl groups to support the word count. It's like a documentary.

I don't understand the recent chapters, why are they suddenly disbanded, in order to let Sakura grow up?

Bland, daily life is boring and boring, just eating, drinking and having fun, nothing to think about

When will the update be available?

The author is very focused and has great cooking skills🙂

The description and introduction of Japanese female idols is very good. I can clearly understand handshakes, sales, C positions, etc. The portrayal of Sakura is also very good. When I saw Sakura acting as the second single of C, I was very moved, as if there really is such an idol. This article is very good. The following is a small suggestion: The article mentioned that after all, Sakura is an idol and a civilized person, and I hope that the "villain" related parts will not be too obvious. It would be nice for readers to know that Sakura beat Ousuke "in private". Idol Guangwei is It's the most exciting thing, especially now that the description of the management seems to be threatening to shake up the group even more. It's even more exciting to have the group reborn from the ashes led by Guang Weizheng's idol Sakura. On the contrary, if the "villain" setting is too impulsive and Sakura has flaws, it will fall into a cliche. The above is my personal opinion. This article is very well written. I really like it. I hope more and more people will discover this article!

I thought it was Sister Yi Bo Yuntian, but after reading Chapter 20, the psychological description and other series showed that she was a cute little girl. The gangsters and male characteristics in the previous life were all covered by hormones 😁, maybe there will be a follow-up plot. Can anyone who has already read it tell me about it?

When will the author let Sakura appear in more movies and TV series?

So far, I quite like it. The pace is indeed a little slow, with the story being told in two chapters taking three chapters. However, it is easy to read and can be read without using the brain, but it does not mean that one cannot use the brain while reading. The content can withstand scrutiny. However, some of the text is a bit repetitive, such as the description of Sakura's appearance, the lyrics of I can, etc. It feels like it was written too hastily and lacked polish. It should be caused by being too busy. Fortunately, it does not affect the perception very much. If there is a shortcoming, the setting of the gangster in the past life is really becoming more and more obscure. Overall, she looks like a little girl who is full of energy and attaches great importance to love and justice. Although some behaviors, clothes, etc. Can be mentioned, but most of the time I can't think of it. If a character's setting cannot be remembered without special explanation, and even removing it will have no impact, it obviously cannot be regarded as a success The physical ability is also described a bit too much, especially the description of the melee ability. A 14-year-old can defeat ordinary members of the special forces, which is only half the strength of his previous life. Was Sakura the protagonist of some martial arts movie in her previous life? In addition, I feel that the system is showing signs of becoming a tool to facilitate the plot. As long as you want Sakura to do or achieve anything, no matter whether it is reasonable or not, just push it to the system, at least in terms of ability, it can justify itself. It is very convenient, but it also makes me worry about whether the author will form a dependence and accidentally abuse it, and it will become a brainless entertainment system. That would be a pity The above are some of my thoughts after reading the latest chapter. I hope it can help the author Another suggestion is to build a character introduction hall. Some characters that do not appear often are forgotten after just looking at it. It is also good to use AI to match the photo. At least I am looking forward to what Sakura looks like.

Why is the author of 4.51 Million words still LV1?