There Is a Problem with My Favorability System

Let's talk about why this article that surprised me at the beginning made me gradually lose interest in reading it after more than 140 chapters To be honest, Dian Niang's article, with more than 140 chapters, can only be regarded as just getting started. For most articles, this is the most exciting time, and readers are most enthusiastic about following it. However, this article gave me a completely different feeling Let me talk about the beginning first, the anti-routine setting, very innovative, favorable, and systematic , Elements such as lottery have basically been written badly, but the favorability of this article is not to increase other people's favorability towards the protagonist, but the protagonist's favorability towards other people. This is a breath of fresh air at first glance, very surprising After that, the protagonist relies on the system to grow and become stronger. Br> But after the protagonist left Orochimaru, the development of the plot began to make me confused. The protagonist had no clear goals and no clear plans. He basically came up with his ideas (this does not refer to the actions of the protagonist himself, but the author's arrangements for the protagonist were obviously out of control and had no plan). , The author is probably too afraid of writing routines and vulgar things, and avoids them too deliberately, which is counterproductive The so-called fan creations are more "clever" than original creations In terms of specific plots, the part where Brother Itachi dies is really... Very baffling It's not that Brother Itachi can't die, but as a popular character, arranging his death should affect the hearts and emotions of readers more, such as the original work. The brotherly battle in the novel is very stimulating to the reader's emotions, but in this article, it ends abruptly just when the reader feels that there should be a plot and drama to watch later, and the death of this character does not have any different promotion and value for the development of the plot or the growth of the character, so it is inevitable that people will feel uneasy Connecting with the previous topic, the so-called "tricks" created by fans are here It is different from the original, the original The created character image, as well as the readers' love for the character, need to be slowly created by the author, and the fanfic itself has a mature and complete character from the original work that can be used, and this character often has its own fans Also taking Brother Itachi as an example The protagonist is building the "Xuye Palace" and needs to recruit people, so the protagonist has successively found Zabuza, Kirabi and the like, and has subdued the three supporting players with their strength. The plot here is very confusing and it costs a lot. It should be fun to write about a battle and finally conquer three minor characters. The protagonist relies on his strength to conquer his subordinates, but when I watched this paragraph, my face was expressionless and my heart was not fluctuating Then let's change the angle and look at Brother Weasel's situation step by step. When things get tough, the protagonist appears, provides help, and convinces Brother Itachi (whether through strength, persuasion, or threats) to join the organization, or in the battle where Brother Itachi died, when Black Zetsu was about to kill someone, the protagonist suddenly appeared, Reversing the situation and recruiting people by the way To be honest, I think it must be Brother Weasel who brings more pleasure and excitement to the readers. If you accept thirty more secondary characters, the readers' reaction will be just "oh" This is what fans call "taking tricks" That is, the interaction between the protagonist and the original character, whether it is an enemy or a friend, this kind of rivalry in itself can stimulate the reader's interest And what is the protagonist doing in this paragraph? He was watching the show and eating melons in the Kamui Space without any reaction, which resulted in several consecutive chapters. The protagonist was obviously free and present, but had no sense of presence and no role in the drama. This vacancy was not filled with anything else For example, when Orochimaru and Brother Itachi were fighting, the protagonist was tossing the mask of the whirlpool, and then gained something through this What about the protagonist? Nothing happened after the Yondaime's soul was obtained, so he drew the Yin Kyuubi. But who wants to see the Yin Kyuubi and the protagonist? Can the favorability and interest of the Kyuubi and the Yondaime in the readers' hearts be the same? First of all, we need to make it clear that this is a fanfic, or a fanfic that overlaps very closely with the timeline and plot of the original work. In this kind of fanfic, do you need to say more about what the readers want to see? Accurately capture the reader's taste, write the reader's expectations, want to watch, and the plot that can't be stopped is not a cliché or routine, but an essential quality for every excellent and popular article What is novelty? It is not a new idea to perfectly avoid readers' expectations. What is new is that you write the same thing in a way that is different from other authors and other articles Just like the beginning of this article, joining Orochimaru's camp, interacting with Uncle Snake, etc., It cannot be said that no one has written it, but why do many people say that the beginning is very innovative? What's new is your favorability system settings, what's new is the way you give gold fingers, not whether you give gold fingers or not In addition, I personally think that the better part of this article is from the beginning to the chunin exam. Although the genin in the chunin exam are basically invincible, the protagonist Pi, he can say sexy words and show off! This is also the point that makes people feel "interested" After the Chuunin Exam, the direction of the plot has become more and more confusing Therefore, I sincerely suggest that the author needs to reorganize the clear outline. The current plot is really getting more and more messy and tasteless The interesting (referring to interest and anticipation) of the plot is the fundamental reason why readers like it and keep following a story.

It was very interesting in the early stage, but a little bit toxic in the middle stage, and I didn't watch it in the later stage. I saw it today on Dian Niang Recommendation. One thing that the author suffers from is that the topic of fan fiction is not tied to Naruto, which makes it difficult to search for articles. You can only see them through recommendation. To be honest, choosing Orochimaru as the favorability binding in the early stage will dissuade some of the Konoha party members, so most of the people who can watch it are people who have a good impression of Aunt Snake or who don't care. In the early stage, Aunt Snake was described very well. The image of a scientific madman who does not trust people but has a touch of gentleness towards students was well created. But in the middle period, the world line was suddenly restrained and turned into the image of the original work. The so-called OOC, if no one protested in the early stage, it means that everyone prefers to accept the character set by the author than the original work. Now it is hard to force it back. After reading this chapter, most of the places with many comments are the scenes where the protagonist is having sex and interacting with Aunt Snake. The author's description of character interactions is quite good, but the fighting sequences are a bit inferior in comparison. After the Chuunin Exam, I personally felt completely broken. After the protagonist and Aunt Snake parted ways, there was no main line running through it (of course I didn't watch much). All in all, this is a novel that starts at the beginning and ends at the end. The rest of the novel is not bad, but it is extremely boring compared to the wonderful early stage. If you like new ideas, just read the first 60 chapters. It may be poisonous later. I hope that the author's next book will use its strengths and avoid weaknesses. With the author's imagination and interesting interactions, he can create a masterpiece.

Last night I saw an anti-routine article that I thought was quite interesting. Unexpectedly, after only a few dozen chapters, it turned into a routine article His idea was quite interesting, but after he gave up, he felt like Mr. Pei ( Losing money and becoming a rich man starts from the game ) ) It's like giving up and losing money That book shows that if the protagonist's favorability towards others is high enough, he will have a chance to win a lottery. Because Orochimaru is the protagonist's savior, the fixed favorability of 60 cannot be lowered no matter what. After that, the apprenticeship increased by a fixed amount of ten points (which is very high). If the protagonist does not perform according to the favorability level, the system will withdraw the same reward What I want to see the most is that the protagonist clearly dislikes Orochimaru, but still has to show a 70-point favorability level for Orochimaru, and implement it in action Unexpectedly, the author abandoned this selling point a few chapters before it was released The title and introduction are all based on this selling point That feels so uncomfortable

One chapter a day, each chapter only has more than 2,000 words. How long will it take? There is so little content every day, I can't even muster the interest to read it! It has been released for three or four months, and there are only a hundred chapters...

I think the equipment created by Tachibana Kanade using a computer is pretty good. Could the author give it some thought?

Reverse favorability, freshness, name Rope Tree, behind curiosity, relaxed writing, a bit superficial, a bit secondary, and COS in the back, I personally like it, just like me, who is short of books, I finished reading it

In the ninja world, three meteorites with a diameter of two meters give people the feeling of destroying the world? Even the fireballs are more than two meters in diameter... I don't mean to scold the author, I just think that the author made up a number at random and made me laugh.

You still can't change the habit of reading novels and reading comments, Yanzu

Will the protagonist and Orochimaru get together?

Spoilers for the protagonist's dialogue, exposing Goldfinger's venom ability, and giving up the right to use venom are poisonous points! Also, the protagonist's attitude towards Orochimaru is too licking, and the dialogue is too close, making him look like the heroine. Does the author think that the protagonist wants to have sex with Shiro? What's more important is that the protagonist's behavior after leaving Orochimaru is almost the same as Erha breaking free from the chain!

I have read a Naruto fanfic, in which all the main characters except Naruto have become women. What Kakashi, Uchiha Sako. Naruto picked up Tsunade, Sakura, Hinata, Kakashi, Uchiha Sako, Ino, and a lot of girls. 🙂🙂🙂 It makes me want to vomit.

It's getting more and more disgusting. This novel actually has a plot of giving away a girl, and it's Hinata Hinata, which is a waste of my recommendation votes.

I came here purely because of your cover

This cover really makes people don't know what to say.

I'm going to have a small orgasm tonight, first update. . Is it suitable?

I haven't read the book yet, but I was stunned by the comment section! In modern society, there are still so many "illiterates"! When a meteorite with a diameter of two meters hit the ground, someone compared it to a grenade! Do you know how much energy a two-meter-diameter meteorite can generate the moment it hits the ground? A modern space-based weapon has a tungsten rod with a diameter of only 0.3 Meters and a length of 6.1 Meters. The energy burst generated when it hits the ground is enough to destroy a city. A meteorite with a diameter of two meters, even if it is a pure rock meteorite, the energy it explodes when it hits the ground will not be worse than that of a tungsten rod!

This cover, the author please be normal.

This is the only novel I have read among the hundreds of Naruto fan novels in which the protagonist is more annoying than Danzo. This is my biggest impression after reading the chapter where Danzo died in battle. Author, your writing is not bad, at least the writing is smooth, the plot is not good, and the protagonist is powerful in cheating. However, there is really a problem with the character creation of your protagonist, and it is really unlikable. There is no clear goal in doing things, and you are timid. One moment you think of this, the other moment you think of that! At least the Danzo you wrote about was trying his best to collect information on Pain's Six Paths before he died in battle, and he was as heroic as Jiraiya!

The author please don't say some P words at the end, which may affect the reading.

The cover made me laugh so much that my mask cracked

Good reviews on the cover😜

The problem isn't the system, it's the cover.

Pig's Feet is a joke. Half of the chapter is about complaining about the nonsense of the inner monologue. I suggest you leave.

I came in by looking at the cover hahaha

I clicked in because of "I Have a Favorability System in My Brain", bd has a surprise

The writing is mediocre and not exciting at all. We are all time travellers, let's do what we need to do

The book is not bad, but the author writes the protagonist's irritability in the book from time to time, spreading the irritability wantonly! ! I think this is a stinky problem. Life is getting better and better. You are still not satisfied?

Finished spreading flowers🌸🌸🌸 Looking forward to the next book

How come it was finished in less than a month 🤔🤔

When I saw dozens of pictures, I was thinking that my strength has improved too quickly. I am going to write about the astronomical literature. Who knows how it will end?